Peninsula: Why Do All the Female Celebrities Want to Come into My Home?

After reading this book, I still have a few things I want to say. The author is very good at describing characters, the heroines have distinct personalities, and the plots are brilliant. The disadvantage is that the advancement of the main plot is a bit messy, and City Hunter and Korean Entertainment Harem still don't match well. The main problem is that the sister line is too long, which makes Chu Long's role more suitable for the heroine to fade away later. After all, the news about the hero's only relative has been concealed. This is an unforgivable mistake. I hope that the follow-up ending will be more reasonable and the sister's plot will not be delayed any longer. At the same time, I hope that if the author has a next book, he will polish the main storyline. With excellent character description, it is possible to write a Korean entertainment hit.

I feel like the writing is a bit overdone, and the attraction is reduced. The reason why he always doesn't talk about his sister.

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Doesn't anyone think it's unreasonable not to tell the protagonist that my sister is alive?

Update, Damn Ghost 😆, you are the only one who can read it recently, other readings are not as immersive as this one 🙂

What's the situation? Update 😡

It's too slow. It should be cut.

When will the male protagonist have a career? I feel like the male protagonist has nothing, no strength, how can he start a harem without money?

How much more do you plan to write now? You are so underwater that you haven't read it yet. Do you still plan to write after the Sewol ship passes? If you can't come back and say goodbye and end it, then it would be better to end it after the protagonist left four months ago It's also magical. They all thought you were a eunuch, but you came back after winning the resurrection match