Peninsula: Not Allowed to Date Idols

Based on some superficial personal experience, I feel that the author wrote it very well from the beginning, starting from the perspective of a big fan site, trying to play with the main fans, allowing Pokémon to gain experience, increasing intimacy in dreams, etc. The setting of the male protagonist is also good. The problems I feel after reading the latest chapter are as follows, 1 The boring and intimate degree of dream meeting and the irrationality of the degree of intimacy in the dream, as well as the part in the dream where someone is unilaterally forced to watch a movie (doesn't a normal mind think that what he is having is a nightmare, which leads to an alienated relationship) A little more than 10 points of intimacy can make two people stick together, and Kim Ji-soo, who has a high degree of intimacy, cannot touch it. There are very few places in the dream that assist the unfolding of the plot. At the beginning, I think it was well written to influence Ji Soo from the perspective of a fan, but the more I write about it, the more troublesome it becomes, and it turns into direct physical contact, or wearing a swimsuit in front of the male protagonist. 2 The career of the male protagonist, from the beginning of wanting to make money from fans, gradually turned into making money from the female protagonist herself, from a big fan to a photographer, and has been focusing on the point of writing to improve the image of the male protagonist. Personally, I prefer to see how the male protagonist conquers the female protagonist and pretends to be fine in front of all the fans. He also feels like making money from the fans' wallets. To put it simply, he uses the fans' money to lure the real protagonist without being discovered by the fans instead of relying on the divine map all the time. 3 I think the male protagonist's Pokémon battle should be initiated, guided and finalized by the male protagonist, such as lurking in multiple popular idol fan groups at the same time, creating countless accounts, mass-producing fan sites with tens of thousands of followers, actively guiding fans to attack someone, and at the same time walking around with the opponent's black pictures of his own Pokémon, and sending the other party's fans' discussion content in their own Pokémon gathering place, from various angles At the same time, they use high-profile fan site accounts to like some of the opponent's slanderous material, delete screenshots instantly and continue to attack each other, and use the other party's slanderous material that is about to be revealed to achieve a comeback. For example, Suzy and Lisa used Lisa to start a fight on the eve of certain incidents, and finally achieved the goal of attracting fans. However, the male protagonist now only stays in the stage of initiating the fight in the early stage and ignoring it in the later stage, which gives me a feeling that it is not in-depth enough. 4. Sometimes I think that the male protagonist can take the initiative to reveal some dirty information to attack his own Pokémon, and then use dreams to guide the Pokémon to become dependent on the male protagonist, such as attacking Zhang Yuanying's weight loss pills to make the Pokémon depressed, and then the male protagonist can use real-life force and comfort from dreams to take advantage of the situation to increase the Pokémon's favorability. It rises rapidly, making Pokémon feel that the male protagonist is its own knight, thus reaching a certain level of pua The above three points are what I don't feel comfortable with, and they are just my own opinions. As for the white plot, I actually think it doesn't matter whether it exists or not. Maybe it's because I want to see the sinister male protagonist behind the scenes.

It's a Korean entertainment that takes a different approach. Compared to the two abstract and funny books 🐰 and 🐟, this one is really refreshing! Worth the wait! PS: I saw a book review mentioning the problem of the male protagonist. It is indeed the same abstract style of painting 😂

Will the male protagonist's character change later? It's too abstract now. After making hundreds of millions, will you still care about hundreds of thousands? It's so abstract that I really can't keep reading.

Happy Puppy

Nomenclature

Is this purely fan fiction? It's been over a hundred chapters, and the male protagonist has yet to fall in love, and his career is just doing odd jobs. Are all heroines in purely spiritual love?

It's like you're going crazy. If I write a separate thing for each chapter, I can't connect it at all.

Pig Snake

Dragon's Dream

At first glance, it is quite comfortable, the setting is novel, and the heroine does not violate the rules. But looking at the back, it may be that there is no outline problem. The male protagonist cannot see the growth line. He just shoots this and that every day. It has the atmosphere of a social animal. The more boring it looks, the career line is weird. Then there's the love line. Except for Xiu'er's love line, which is very natural, the others are just like her who fell in love in the dream. I don't remember the point where I like the male protagonist.

The golden finger that helps the heroine develop her career is relatively new, but there is a lack of feedback for the protagonist. The starting idea is good. The shortcomings of the golden finger can also be made up for by upgrading the dungeon or achieving certain achievements. However, the author obviously does not have this idea. As a result, the protagonist can only make extra money by fishing for side jobs for a long time in the early stage. The bond of Goldfinger can enhance the chances of contact between the male and female protagonists, but without sufficient capital, everything is in vain, especially many of the female protagonists are rich in wealth. This is not a sign of being snobbish or snobbish, but a fundamental gap in the values ​​of different classes. Don't talk about the true love between the male and female protagonists. It has already been written about Korean entertainment, and it is also a harem. I guess the author himself cannot lie to himself. Compared to the fact that the protagonist needs to increase contact opportunities through fetters, those agents and assistants are the ones that the heroines get along with day and night. It is really unreasonable for the protagonist to rely on his photography skills to attract top actresses. The author repeatedly emphasizes that strength is not important in this era. Top status is almost always the result of marketing. A few photos may not be as important as strength itself. Marketing>Strength>Image materials, this order should not be a big problem. Will the heroines stalk the male protagonists because of a few photos? There is one last problem. The author seems to have no outline, and it feels like he has just finished writing. There is a lack of planning for the arrangement of Goldfinger and the advancement of the plot. As a result, there will be a large amount of writing when there is no idea, and a good deck of cards will be beaten to pieces in the end. Making an outline before writing can avoid the situation of being stuck. When you don't feel a certain plot, use a vague way to foreshadow the key events and continue writing later. When inspiration comes after the foreshadowing, expand on it. On the contrary, it will connect the plot and make the work more vivid. A straightforward narrative is inherently uninteresting, and coupled with the large hydrology, it is too boring.

The author must not do what he did in the last book, where the male protagonist shaves his head like a psychopath. In terms of relationships, don't make the male protagonist so devoid of emotional intelligence that he suddenly cheats on her.

I have been saving up for a long time to finish reading it. Overall, the recent plot is pretty good. Apart from being a bit dull, the rest is good. Just write it at your own pace. Here is a suggestion for the author. To be honest, it is almost 300,000 words so far. The protagonist has always unfolded the plot from the perspective of a fan. At most, he is a photographer, which is seriously inconsistent with those idols. I have also seen that the author is working hard to eliminate this identity gap and let Kim Ji-soo arrange the career plan of the protagonist. So far, everything is fine. What I want to say is, does the author feel that the emotional line is too plain so far? All the emotional interactions between the protagonist and the heroine are basically in dreams. He is a pure dream male player. In reality, no matter which idol he faces, he will abide by his duty, be his own fan honestly, and never step beyond the boundaries. I have seen comments from readers criticizing the protagonist as a eunuch. Although it is inappropriate, you can still see the reason. I personally think that while writing at your own pace, can you lay some foreshadowing and introductions appropriately? Does it show the change in the heroine's feelings for the protagonist in real life, or the change in the protagonist's mentality towards the heroines? After all, we all come to see the protagonist and the heroine fall in love. We cannot be fans forever. You can write the rhythm a little slower, but it is best to write clearly about things like signs. So far, Xiu Xiu has the most scenes. If you have doubts about the protagonist It seems to be a tendency to be jealous, but whether it is because of the fans and the main owner, or because of emotional factors, it is not clear at all. If it is a bit vague, it is actually possible to do both. This kind of thing must have a reason for us to daydream. We can't be so unclear, we have to point it out. As for the other heroines, I can only say that dreams are dreams and reality is reality. Some heroines make gratifying progress in their dreams, but they are illusory after all, and there is no actual progress at all. If there is no plot supplement in this aspect, the heroine may treat the protagonist as a business partner. After all, the heroine is too subjective about what she thinks about dreams. In general, the line in the dream has achieved gratifying results, but in reality it is a blank. The two sides are too unequal. The line in reality needs to be supplemented.

I have a feeling that Teacher Qianya will definitely reach the sky this time, oh no, he will soar into the sky 😉

When the male protagonist comes into contact with the female idol, he is a fan at best, or a licker at worst. What should a licker do to be on an equal footing with the idols? How can he stand out among the many lickers? It's over a hundred chapters and it's still in dog-licking mode. There was nothing to eat.

Still the same psychotic male protagonist as before

The author boasts about Zhang Yuanying's stardom every day, but after half a year of solo pre-heating, he only has this data 🤭

[First of all, a disclaimer, despite my low level, I ordered all the products from QQ Reading, so I should still be able to comment on them. The following comments are purely subjective. If you think you are wrong, you are right. 🙏] To set the tone, I feel that the style of this author's works is just one word - "epilepsy", which can also be understood as "nonsensical". (I have read all the books by this author, but only "Big Star".) The plot development is nonsensical, and the characters' dialogues are nonsensical. People who like it will find it fun, relaxing and funny 🤭, while people who don't like it will find it unrealistic and embarrassingly stupid 😤. The reviews are polarizing, it's that simple. Let's talk about the advantages: 1. The brain circuit is really novel. Is this the first Korean entertainment novel in which the protagonist is a fan? I don't understand, at least I haven't found it. If so, then you have embarked on a new path. Including the abstract use of the system in subsequent plots, it's quite fun and something you can continue to look forward to. 2. Personally, I feel that the author intentionally downplays the negative interference that may occur from the outside world (or simply doesn't write about it), which may cause some small obstacles but is not dark. Instead, he puts more words into the daily interactions with the heroines, which is a return to the most basic and core daily emotional drama of Korean entertainment. It is quite comfortable to read. 3. The heroine described is very simple and pure, and the character is not complicated. It can easily summarize the main personality characteristics of each person (purely personal feelings): Jisoo's motherly and playful nature; lzm's love brain and nerve; Yuanshen's tsundere; Yuna's caution and lack of confidence; sana's liveliness, enthusiasm and coquettishness. This writes the differentiation and the specificity of each character, making it very recognizable when reading. I am not afraid of simple characters, but I am afraid of characters being stereotyped (without characteristics). Talk about the shortcomings and suggestions: 1. Think about how to balance the status gap between the protagonist and the heroines. One of the things that most people criticize now is that the protagonist feels like a dog-licker and a soft-boiler. Because to be honest, you helped take the magic picture, and you said that your help increased the popularity, but no one has a real sense of it. You don't list the data, so it's up to you to decide whether it's useful or not. It would be better to improve the status of the protagonist, and be a luxury special photographer or something like that, and be able to help the heroine get some tangible benefits, wouldn't it be nice? Also, you will basically have a certain degree of favorability later on. You are holding the reputation of being a fan, but don't do some things that are purely fan-made. It is too cheap, such as: picking up at the airport. 2. The system is a bit like a decoration. I have written so much about just a dream function, and I am still making videos about the gods. How about some new things? Compared with the realistic type, Korean entertainment in the setting type is to have more novel settings and weird usages. Why do you use the favorability and starlight? You can either make all the favorability reach 60 or all the starlight reach 70 and send a reward package. That's all I can think of for the moment. Finally, if you can accept what I said above or want to read a Korean entertainment novel that is novel, lighthearted and enjoyable, this book is not bad 👍; but if you like to pick out words with a magnifying glass, or have the idea of ​​"If you are not a chaebol (or powerful person), how do you play a female star or open a harem?", Maybe this book may not be suitable for you 🙏.

Let's finish it. The more I write, the worse it gets. There's also a problem with the male protagonist's character.

There is no passion at all, Taipingtan

Isn't the overall pacing a bit too slow? What's more, it seems like there are multiple female protagonists, but actually there is only one female protagonist. It feels like most of the time revolves around Kim Ji-soo, and the further back it gets, the more obvious it becomes.

Why is Yingzi set to be an overseas Chinese (they don't recognize it themselves), and the setting of Dreamland seems to be treating idols as something else. Putting aside these things, it's not bad

This book has been scrapped. Now it has no main plot. It just changes two female protagonists every day to write a small drama. There is no progress at all. I think of where it is. The elf system at the beginning is useless and slipped away.

The more I write, the more I write. It feels like there is no main line anymore. I just write wherever I think of it. It's a pity. The beginning is quite attractive.

It's a bit boring later on, but Jisoo's line is written more cheerfully, Yoona is so average, it's better to kick her out of the elf

mina

Can Shen Nong tell me if I can watch this 🙂

The protagonist is a fraudster who stole money from fans and ran away, falling in love with an idol.

Now I write whatever I dream about

It's 600 chapters, and there are still two heroines who haven't eaten yet, one heroine who hasn't dated, and the system itself hasn't been upgraded or developed for a long time. If you continue at this rate, if you can finish writing the relationship between everyone and how they get along, it will probably take 2,000 chapters or more. But if you keep silent, will you become a eunuch? Will it be unfinished? I'm a little hesitant to continue to subscribe 😒