Mechanical Ascension, I Get a Power Every Week

I said that the author's protagonist has one superpower every week, and now he has venom. Why doesn't he develop venom? What's the use of having Venom and not having to work hard to go to the combat class? You haven't developed your abilities and power yet.

In the introduction, the metal is... Subject? Is it a metal body?

After reading a few chapters, I feel a little confused. I would like to ask the author what the main plot is. I feel like there are a lot of useless characters.

The author's brain is equal to the protagonist's IQ. First of all, if you don't develop your superpowers, why should you learn martial arts? You spend most of your day learning martial arts, and you don't even practice your superpowers. The teacher stole the competition drawings, but I just pretended that it didn't matter. I pretended that nothing happened and I was still in the mood to go shopping.

The ambition is not small, the ability is not big, there are a bunch of characters in a mess, and I can't figure out what I want to talk about. The protagonist is like a low-energy native with Down's syndrome. He has never seen any high technology. He is surprised by everything he sees. He insists on dividing into several lines. It's a mess of things. Don't ignore superpowers. You should abandon your own advantages to exploit disadvantages. Have fun.

The writing is a bit messy, but I've almost read it. I was developing superpowers, and then I went to practice martial arts while developing it. I only have one impression of Venom, and I've forgotten it now after reading the second one. The plot is a bit confusing. I have been involved in the incident. I was confused while watching it. The management of the outer city is also very chaotic. There are obviously schools and various facilities, but the inner and outer cities are divided into different classes. But the outer city you wrote about has no order at all and no official influence at all. I can't even imagine how a school like this was built in an outer city.

Traveling through more than ten years, one chapter surprised me several times

Basically every pig's foot with college. In order to go to school and abandon the opportunity to become stronger, he caused trouble and got kicked in the head.

A hammer in one place and a stick in the other, no outline? Write wherever you think of it? The two cities started in chaos and order, and then the uprising was in chaos and disorder, with unforeseen force, unprovoked battles, and inexplicable characters. I write about Goldfinger but want to downplay Goldfinger, I write about research and development of machinery and then go to portray the characters, I write about characterizing the characters and then go to develop superpowers, I write about developing superpowers and then run to participate in the chaotic plot, I write about the messy plot and then run to portray the characters. Each step is irrelevant. It either starts with no follow-up or is described in sudden in-depth, pure fragments. The whole article shows the author's whims when he writes somewhere. The main idea is that it is just comfortable to write it. The context is not important.

It's too chaotic. If you want to see the protagonist become invincible, you can leave. At present, it seems that the subject matter is quite innovative, but this development can only be said to be messy and difficult to solve.

Mechanical ascension is not compatible with psionic ascension. It is not good. I suggest scourge ascension with psionic power or genes plus psionic power.

As a newbie, we'd better not write group portraits, it's quite uncomfortable to watch. If you can't control it, just keep it simple and just have one or two story lines. The ambition is not small, but the ability is insufficient, making the narrative too confusing.

The reviews of the novel were full of abuse, but this novel is really rubbish, and it was a waste of a few minutes.

I can't understand the logic, the logic is not self-consistent, and the whole process is confusing. I have some ideas, but I don't use them very well. It has no purpose, and I don't know what it's for. Anyway, the plot is quite abrupt, but when I think about it, it seems to be connected, but it feels very inexplicable.

Mechanical Ascension× Superpowers and Psychic Ascension√

You have traveled through time to a world with highly developed science and technology. In this world, although people are still on the earth, they have developed enough to explore space and can initially transform some planets. However, there are no immigrants yet, and many diseases can be completely cured. People will no longer worry about many diseases. The most important thing is that in this world, Taking the road of mechanical ascension, many people's bodies have been initially transformed into machines, which can replace many things. In this world, technology and machinery are highly developed. Because these two are highly developed, there is not much development in deciphering human genes. As a result, this world can cure human diseases, but it has not developed biology. The technology of the world is just to develop mechanical technology, and when you first traveled to this world, you got a system, but this system was a bit useless. There was nothing at first, and it kept showing insufficient energy. After you grew up, suddenly, countless technologies appeared to attack this planet. These are the interstellar bandits in the starry sky. They discovered this planet, and then Finally decided to attack this planet and turn it into wealth. At the same time, the arrival of the energy tide, the arrival of the cosmic energy tide, the passing planet caused something like a spiritual revival, and you also awakened the system during this opportunity. In the face of the powerful technology of interstellar pirates, people gradually retreated, the earth's technology gradually retreated, and even began to plan to move All the people's spaceships have been completely destroyed. In less than three days, the entire planet will be completely destroyed. Your system has given you three things. You mix these three things together and smash them directly in the future. Then people on the entire planet begin to mutate. These three things are the complete version of the X-gene in the Marvel world, and the T-virus in the biochemical world, and Devour The virus in the starry sky world, with the mixture of these three things, humans on the earth began to mutate, animals and plants began to mutate, and they began to be able to absorb the power of the cosmic energy tide. After that, you released the encouragement to exercise the original gene energy, and you modified many basic exercises in this world and changed them into the original gene energy cultivation method. Later, some awakened Humans with powerful superpowers barely resisted the invasion of interstellar pirates, and also captured some of the interstellar pirates' spaceships. Earth's scientists worked overtime to study them. And because of the cultivation method, all people on earth began to practice. Some people who had mutated too much began to practice these genetic abilities, and gradually controlled their own transformations, and gradually After turning back into human beings, Blue Star finally fought off the pirates. After that, Blue Star relied on the technology of these interstellar pirates to successfully develop into more powerful technology, and with this complete cultivation method, people found that after cultivating to the extreme, they could physically cross the starry sky and directly swallow the power of the starry sky and the universe. Instead of the cosmic power evolved from the cosmic tide, it can be relatively gentle.

How come urban science fiction starts at the age of 18🙀 Every time I look at the introduction and chapter names, I'm reading and going to school. I instantly lose interest. I've seen too many of the same opening lines. I can't stand this anymore.

Don't waste everyone's time. The protagonist is mentally deficient and keeps doing all kinds of confusing things (normal people would not choose this). Moreover, the protagonist has a problem with his outlook on life. He steals other people's things, and if others destroy his own things, he thinks that others have a way to kill themselves.

It's okay, you can watch it. More from the author

I feel like I'm reading this before I finish the first chapter. Primary school teachers must be very familiar with this kind of literature.

I haven't read it for a long time, and I realized that the author is a real person? If you can still write without a subscription, those eunuchs should learn from this. 🙂