Ax! Super Assembled!

I don't know if this is AI or if the author is cross-eyed

Author, you don't think that Asuna and Daichi only had feelings for each other during those dozens of episodes, right?

Pigman, right? 🙂

A good idea, but the book is terrible. He often talks to himself and whispers, and the protagonist often comes to the rescue.

As I said before, there are plenty of fan worlds to choose from if you want to open a harem. There is no need to open a harem for Owen who is uncomfortable with you or break up a CP, something that is too sexually repressed. Although there are quite a lot of Qidian netizens, both readers and authors, who are sexually repressed, I hope you are not one of them.

I don't want to read the first few chapters after reading them. Now that I know that I have this ability, do you want to be unable to assemble some props for yourself for a few months before obtaining the resources of X and monsters? There is nothing, just these few dry words and that's it. It's just a plot and there's no sense of enjoyment at all.

We often get it wrong when it comes to weight. When we enlarge some drawings of small figures, the author always writes that the weight will be the same as the height. As your height increases, the thickness and width of your body must also change. Otherwise, wouldn't it just be noodles? A height of forty to fifty meters and a body width and thickness of several tens of centimeters are the body shape corresponding to the weight written by the author. When three-dimensional objects are enlarged in equal proportions, the volume is calculated based on the third power. If the density remains unchanged, the weight multiple is the same as the volume multiple. If the body is enlarged 20 times, the volume and weight are 20×20×20=8000 times.

What I write is more like a running account than a running account.

After reading it, the plot is very blunt, the characters are not likeable, and the most important thing is that the writing is so bad, it feels like a primary school student's composition.

It's so unrealistic. As a monster countermeasures officer, why should you sneak in to investigate? Why don't you just surround and search? Also, you wear high heels when you know there is a problem. It's obviously not in line with your status as a team member. It's too stupid.

There is no fun, except that the subject matter is good, and the protagonist is the nanny the whole time.

The height should be increased by X times, and the volume and weight should be increased by X³ times. In this case, from two and a half meters to five meters, the weight only increased twenty times. Density reduced by forty times

Write Asuna like a vase that will only hold you back

Take a look at the comment section, it seems to be a harem article, go away, go away

Is there Shen Nong? Some people in the comment area said that the plot is not good. What is wrong with it?

The selection of female protagonists in Ultraman fan fiction generally requires that the first thing is good appearance, and then it is best that she is capable of transformation or has certain scientific research capabilities. She is not expected to be a help to the male protagonist but cannot be a burden. It is also best that her own race is not an earthling. This is related to the life span theory. The protagonist cannot take a nap, and the female protagonist has been reincarnated for hundreds of lives.

Can you put some pressure on the protagonist to fight 50 monsters a day, or can you go up to Aix, add the Galactic Empire to Belial's victory route (O's father breaks off his horn, and O's king dies), destroys the challenge (Gaia), Legend Zhidon (the game scene), Sky God, Yefu (Max), Sophia Legion (Dina), Dark Trio ⅹ 2 (Tiga and Terry's family), Galaxy Lukiel (Galaxy), Darkness Zaki, Alien Beast (Nexus, Grizza, Chaos God (Legga), Lucaxi, Ampera Dark Empire (Mebius), Dark Ultra Brothers (Big Monster), Little Golden Man (Galaxy Fighting), Chaos Light Element (Gauss), Cool Sound (Original Beginning), Galatron Legion, Gilbaris (Ged), Tregear, Space Rainbow Dragon (Rob), Gatan Zeton (Tiga novel)

It's so watery. This is still not on the shelves and why are there so many clones?

Are there two fixed tickets every day now?

The plot in it, the next plot, I feel is too bloody. What you wrote has the flavor of a novel ten years ago, it is too deliberate.