Thirteen Months of Death

Aren't you going to write about the supernatural infinite stream? What I wrote before about "I Found My Corpse" is actually pretty good-looking, but it was still off-putting. I'm a little worried that if you write this type of thing again, you'll be offended again.

Don't just end like the previous three books. Every time I want to create a huge world view, but I can't control the development of the plot, it always ends up being very abrupt, sloppy and confusing. The characters created have no outstanding performance in the later period or are simply brushed off. The characters and plot in the early stages of Scholar are very good, I hope I can grasp them well in the later stages.

Supernatural escape now. You are the best at writing. Why not keep writing. The kindling next door has become useless.

People always move forward. I hope that the author will no longer be bound by the past. Since horror has no traffic, it is better to change the theme. Now each copy has a different theme, which is very similar to an excessive work. Look forward to it and find a new track as soon as possible.

The number of new books has now reached parity, and I feel like scholars are a bit eager to make a transition. The original advantage (horror and exciting short stories) was not brought into play: the world written in He Chu was very poorly written. Not only was it not thrilling, but the story was also cliched. You could tell the ending just by looking at the beginning. If a new author had jumped in, he would have jumped on the bandwagon. Without the blessing of a horror atmosphere, attention to the story's logical character creation will increase. These happen to be bad (this book only)                        The disadvantages are also expanded: the reading experience is like the last two books (which were unfinished, especially Above the Mist) and kept throwing away the setting. There are no surprises at all. What the reader wants is the secretion of dopamine when following the protagonist to solve the mystery step by step, rather than passively accepting whatever you say. Li Daosheng is like a personal camera, he has no motive for his actions (or rather he is too reluctant and does not have to do it). Especially after Wu Dao appeared, he was a carbon copy of Bai Yanliang and his brother. Bai Yanliang has been established in the early stage, but what about Li Daosheng Let's talk about the character creation issue: being kind for the sake of establishing the character, and being dark for the sake of the plot is too damn deliberate. The kind-hearted person in the sea of ​​people couldn't think of a good example for a while, so let's talk about blackening. The reason why Cheng Xue's two teammates killed their companions is simply outrageous. It's so damn outrageous that they opened the door. It's also hard to comment on why the Virgin was stabbed in the back and turned into a black man who was only good to the protagonist. Has the Holy Mother not been stabbed in the back in so many years? Have you never met a good person who knows how to repay kindness? Being disgusted by some evil people makes you hostile to everyone? Knowing the world but not being worldly, pitying all the people in the world and not regretting it even though it harms myself, what kind of holy mother can I be if I can't do these things? Of course, there are also good places, such as Zhonglu World. I like this the most. The rhythm and Miss Feng are both very good. Unfortunately, Miss Feng is offline. I don't know if she will appear in the future. Other copies feel so-so.

I have read all the books by this author, but none of them have been completed. I heard before that he wanted to change his name to the Passionate Reckless Man in order to change his life against the will of heaven, but he failed 🙂 I remember if the author opened a small account and wrote a reprint. It's a fairy tale, and it's very good-looking. I really like it, but as it was written, it turned into a weird fairy tale, and then disappeared. I really liked the emotional drama of the protagonist in that book. Looking back, it seems that several years have passed. I hope the author can improve to a higher level 🌹

The writing style is very good, and it reads a bit like the Seventy-two Transformations of Disha. However, I feel that some suspense can be solved later, and the answers are given a bit early.

Leave the name of your extra, and you will have a chance to get the attention of pigeons (). Other settings can also be added. Specifically, will the creative situation of a scholar who knows how to read——

In the past, I highly recognized the scholar's ability. Whenever the topic of "infinite horror novels" was discussed on many platforms, I would strongly recommend the scholar. But one book after another, you have disappointed book fans too many times. Now this "Thirteen Months of Death" is your last chance in this life. Please fight with your backs against the odds and survive!

Every book written by Scholar has the potential to become a hit. Whether it is the characterization or the brilliance of the copy, they are all top-notch. However, the reason why they have not really become a hit is because Scholar always likes to write the main plot in an anticlimactic way. I sincerely hope that the subsequent books of Scholar can polish the development of the main plot, and don't always write books that are unfinished.

The scare joke is a bit of a pity, I hope this can be written more smoothly.

Why not continue writing about supernatural beings? I have other candidates for Infinite Streaming. The next two future worlds are 2077 and Detroit Become Human. This sense of déjà vu is too strong 😵

The volume on the shelf is a familiar horror copy, and it is still the type of erasing everyone's superpowers. I hope everyone will support it (bow)

Transformation is transformation, why are the settings thrown away so quickly? It feels like it's coming to an end again. . . It's less than a million, and it contains so many characters that some people have no impression at all... Compared to the previous ghost novels, I'm embarrassed to recommend this one to others.

I have finished reading Chapter 83 and have found it. When I read previous books by the author, I felt astonished by the setting. This book is really good, but too few people have read it. I feel like I have been sanctioned by the platform. The author may try publishing his work on multiple platforms. Will there be a continuation of Withering Night Stories?

I subscribed to one chapter just to complain about the "Thirteenth month" setting in Chapter 1. It's just a complaint. What the book says is that you are here because you died. This is the "Thirteenth month", which is an extra time. But there is a problem. The protagonist and the other 12 people basically come from different places. In this world, there are those who practice immortality, those who practice martial arts, cyberpunks with mechanical legs, and monsters with long horns... Then this setting is very loose. To put it more funny, the setting of "year, month, day" belongs to Chinese culture or earth culture. Your world is different. Are other worlds also planets? Is it also a solar calendar? Is there a so-called "month"? To be clearer, couldn't other worlds have thirteen months a year or fourteen fifteen months? Do you tell everyone who comes to the space that, ah, this is the twelfth month, which is extra time. If there is a world where their calendar is fifteen months and a year, do they have to change the lines, or else others will say why are you the thirteenth month as extra time? I have to complain when I see this. . . . .

I actually have fantasies about the Unfinished King🙂

It feels like writing a copy of this infinite flow of multiple worlds is like consuming a scholar's talent. The worlds alone are wonderful, but together they are very confusing. Various clues and characters are mixed together. It's amazing at first sight, but you can't remember it afterward. This book currently seems to have a very confusing temperament. As soon as you have adapted to one world, you have to go to another world. Will the scholar have the opportunity to reopen Chengu or Canghaiyouyou in the future? It would be a shame not to take pictures. It has been a long time since I read these two books, but I am still deeply impressed by them. However, I just read the new chapter of this one in March, and I don't have much thought about it, and I forgot about it very quickly. It seems that few classic online texts have unlimited streaming and multi-world copies...

Come on, I'm waiting for your new book, my favorite horror genre, I love it 😡😡

To be honest, this book is the worst one the author has written.

I discovered it when I was reading it, and when I clicked in today, I saw, oh, it's all finished. Add more lubrication to the plot, and hide the world view and important settings that should be hidden. Other writers have been criticized for plots. You really should learn from this. Yours is too dry. If it were smoother, this book would not have stepped on the accelerator all the way and fell off the cliff. The plot is very good, the protagonist is set well, the supporting characters need to be strengthened, and the plot progress control is at the level of short and medium-sized articles. It would be interesting to throw the author into ten or twenty years ago to write short and medium-sized physical novels.

When will the new book be released? I'm looking forward to it 🙂

The author's imagination opened my eyes. This book's imagination is at least half impressive on other websites, but I think there are several reasons why it is not popular here, and it is also the reason why the author's other books are not as popular. 1. There are big problems with the author's writing and writing style. He often loses subjects and connectives, which can easily make readers stuck. I even need to read some fragments two or three times before I fully understand who is being described. This must be changed 2. What the author describes The characters are really not three-dimensional enough. Most of the characters are facial makeup and many of them cannot stand up. This needs to be polished. 3. The author's description of the environment is too simple and a little unrealistic. If the author polishes it and corrects these problems, I think he can slowly become a god.

I stopped watching Cong Feng Hui and I didn't expect it to end like this. I hate plots that say how dangerous the world is, but the people around the protagonist can't die no matter how hard they try.

Scholar, where is my new book? There is a shortage of books. Hurry up and send out new books 😡

It's obviously a masterpiece, why isn't it popular?

😟 When will a scholar realize that the ancient style novels he writes are top-notch... I always feel that if there is a complete ancient style work, whether it is a conspiracy theme, a suspenseful supernatural theme, or neither. As long as it is written about ancient styles, as long as it is a complete work, it will definitely become popular and even sell film and television rights. It's so depressing, I can't make any money.

This book is really average, no jokes, good reading

I saw this in the group and immediately thought of this book ww

Very nice! Especially the happy ending, I really like it! ❤️👍💯