Bring Fairy Tales to Hogwarts!

The author's performance is stable, and the protagonist's perspective and everyone's behavior are interesting and interesting. The protagonist of the same type was the tattooed protagonist last time, and that book was unfinished.

At present, it seems that he is a relatively rare chaotic neutral protagonist, a native who traveled from the fairy tale world to the HP world Advantages: The writing is not bad, and he seems to be less arrogant than the time traveler. The magic of the fairy tale system is well integrated with the HP magic. The fortune teller is also interesting to play, and he is not a simple and crude spoiler Disadvantages: 1. The protagonist does not know the plot of HP, but the author occasionally forgets, which makes it look a bit strange 2. There are some small details that are wrong in the research. If you are a hardcore HP book fan, it will look a little bit annoying, but it doesn't seem to be a lot at the moment.

It's a good combination of everyday fiction, fairy tale wizards and Harry Potter. The protagonist may be non-human and think differently from ordinary people🤔 He won't pay too much attention to the events in the original work, but it's normal for a wizard who doesn't know the plot of the original work to not pay much attention to the protagonist group.

Dry food is edible but not delicious. The setting is okay, and it takes advantage of the dark fairy tale. The problems are not trivial. First of all, the writing style is mediocre and the characters are not flexible. They all rely on the Riddler's set of descriptions. Secondly, the time advancement is too slow. The time advancement of the fan fiction should be combined with the original work. When reading the fan fiction, you only see the "big events" and the main characters. This simple refreshing point has not appeared in this book for a long time, and even deliberately avoids it. The protagonist will deliberately not care when encountering the classic scenes, objects, and characters of the original work. Thirdly, I disagree with the specific content. For example, in the Malfoy prophecy, will there be a scene that only appears in the finale if there is a protagonist? After all, in Western fantasy, prophecies can be said to be certain to happen in the setting. I think this book has the same meaning. It makes me a little worried about the development of the subsequent story. Maybe it is the kind of novel that dare not touch the original plot. There are too many fans who will not write without the original line. It is expected to go down, especially after the motivation and purpose of the protagonist are clearly explained, the protagonist's B character that was spent a lot of time to raise in the early stage may collapse. After all, the character's ability is limited to the author. I have read countless novels that make the protagonist mysterious. The bigger the hype, the harder it will fall when the intelligence reduction operation appears.

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh, why did I see this book so early? 😭😭😭 There are very few HP fans who can do divination, and even fewer who are into fairy tales.

Fairy fuck seedling🌱, the protagonist maintains his character and does not poison himself, I am determined to follow it. I just came across this book too early and it was not enough to read!

The early stage was fine, and the minor problems were not hidden, but Hermione was very obvious. She obviously had the mermaid's singing voice, so why did she still have to rely on Yuga to beat the troll with a stick? What everyone wants to see is actually written in the comments at the end of that chapter. Whether Hermione tames the troll with her singing or controls the flowing water with her singing, they are all very fairy tale performances and very consistent with the theme of the book. But the author does not dare to write or deviate from the original work. Fans must respect the original work, but they will not attract readers if they only follow the original work.

It's rare to encounter a novel Hogwarts fanfic, but it turned out to be a eunuch 😓

When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you watch the third watch, the slightest praise begins to sound, and the number of dead harvests begins to decrease. When you are at the fifth watch, the reader's defense spontaneously forms, and the voice of praise becomes louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both inside and outside. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in your long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updating may not solve all difficulties, but more than 90% of problems come from insufficient updates.

Still lack of stamina. Amazing at first sight, It's a pity that the follow-up was not well written, In general, there should be constant surprises and ups and downs, but the presentation is anticlimactic, and the more you read, the less attractive it becomes. In fact, you can feel that the author did write it well at the beginning, but did not think about it well. After that, the story unfolds, and there are various selling points in the early and middle stages, including how to gradually get better and what exciting plots are blended in.

The prediction was basically successful. I have this feeling when I see the author writing a protagonist who is powerful and has no tricks left - the more he writes, the more difficult he becomes. All the conflicts, contradictions and villains in the original work are nothing more than ringworm for the protagonist. How to write this book? Unless you forcibly reduce your intelligence or create a relatively crazy protagonist. The author prefers not to. Other invincible genres are more daily, but HP fan novels are destined to avoid the fateful showdown between the so-called Dark Lord and the Savior. There are also invincible fan stories, most of them are in the comprehensive genre, with the main line being about women. How can a long-standing demon, a master of manipulating people's hearts, and a powerful wizard accompany Voldemort in this book for at least a million words? I'm not optimistic at all. With this kind of power, it's already popular.

Control comments? Look at the comments section, there's a lot of teamwork there

Good guy, I'm a eunuch. Fortunately, I've been raising him for a while!

No, it's the eunuch again. It's rare to find such a wonderful HP fan

The protagonist looks very strong, but in fact they are all limitations. You can't do this, you can't do that... After reading the whole story, there is nothing exciting. It feels like there is an extra mess stick in the original plot, messing up the plot, but I don't know what the protagonist wants to do? If you want to help others achieve their wishes through "equivalent exchange", why should you go to Hogwarts to become a divination teacher? Isn't this just a disease? It's a thankless task, forcibly inserting characters into the plot, regardless of whether the protagonist's character is separate or not... The protagonist's ability is very vague. The initial setting is: if you have a strong will, are willing to pay the price, and have a certain strength, you can achieve your wish. Then a professor with absolutely no prophecy ability spent several years of dormancy to gain 50% successful prophecy ability. In my opinion, this is almost like buying a ton of gold for 1 yuan Then the Gringotts goblin wanted to obtain the prophecy of the futures market, and began to wonder... Is the goblin greedy enough? The goblin's strength is very poor? And just knowing the price of certain goods in the next two or three days is more difficult than letting a person obtain a permanent 50% prophecy ability? So, what abilities does the protagonist have? Readers won't buy the protagonist who says it's okay if the author says it's okay, but doesn't do it if he says it's not okay

It's so disgusting. It's okay if you don't make up for your leave. I can't even do it daily. I wish you success.

Why are the comments now, especially those on Qidian. Com, so often there are a bunch of comments at the beginning? Why do you say that the smell of a little fairy is really off the mark? What the hell, I've never seen this comment before, only in the past six months.

I can barely count it as hay, I don't know why a group of people are bragging in the comment area, they really cheated me into cheating after maxing out my expectations.

666 This is a capable eunuch, all the praise I have given you is in vain.

6. It is updated once a day after being put on the shelves. It would be strange if there is no supervisor.

Fortunately, I abandoned the book before you eunuch. I originally planned to skip writing in the past few days, but now it's okay, I can just stop reading it.

It's a bit messy. Two, the protagonist should be more powerful than what he is now. Three, it still feels based on Hogwarts, a bit like a nanny.

It died within a few chapters of being released. I can't think of anything other than cheating money.

If you have bought one, can you share what it says about it? I originally wanted to order it, but when I saw the eunuch, I didn't want to buy it...