A Survival Game That Starts with Monster Hunting

Hello author, I don't know if you can see this comment of mine, but today I saw that the latest chapter you posted was this, and I felt a little sad. The first time I read your work was Su Songyi's work "Under the Kidnapped Deer Horse Armor". I was a bit fond of that kind of literature and art when I was in high school. I thought your book was superb, and then the one with super powers, which I felt was another masterpiece. But then because I was only a month in high school. I took a vacation and didn't have much time to read novels. When I read it later, I found that the vest was no longer updated. After a long time, I found that you promoted your new book, but I didn't finish it, only read part of it. Now I can't remember much of the content, but I remember that it was written a bit like Xiao Huang Shubu. I have been in college for more than two years now, and I don't read novels much anymore, but I had nothing to do today, so I went through my bookshelf and saw your book. Then I wanted to see what was updated. Then I entered the latest chapter and found out about your current situation as the author. I felt a little sad, but it was not too surprising, because most of the protagonists in your book (that I have read) feel declining and have depression tendencies, but they all have their own angels to save themselves. I personally feel that the author may not be very happy either. In fact, I just want to tell the author that you should stick to your life and go out more often. Maybe you can meet your own angel and make your life more colorful.

The first few chapters and the following chapters don't look like they were written by the same author.

There are so many pitfalls written by this author. There are several pitfalls for one event, and each event has it. Can you fill it in? It gives people the impression that the protagonist is a pure disaster, and big events will happen wherever he goes. The density of pitfalls is too high, which makes people a little disgusted.

Pure gambling dog protagonist, if you don't get it out once, you will die.

Come on, brother, I've been chasing my devil girlfriend till now. I really hope you can finish writing a book.

Change the author in Chapter 9? Where did the sister come from? Why do you still have a sister? I'm tired of the routines from many years ago.

Why does this kind of novel have a sister...

Deer, if that doesn't work, you should buy some. This book is not widely publicized, but the quality is indeed good.

The beginning is great, but this intro! Change it!

To be honest, the author's writing is not bad, but the story framework is too cliche and there is no sense of suspense at all. The subsequent plot can be guessed. Also, maybe I didn't read carefully. Did the monster just appear? If not, why don't so many people know that demons can imitate humans? Humans didn't have any defense or identification measures, so they lost the two supply points on the 6th and 7th so quickly?

If you don't understand, just ask, which trumpet is this author's account? Is he the author of the rebirth stream?

I have always wondered why the protagonist used his mobile phone to provide intelligence to prevent a disaster in the base. Then nothing happens. Is this logical?

Can you finish writing this time🙂

I hope you can make a lot of money, and then write an ending to my Ming He Qi. When I read the book, I only saw the part about introducing my family, so I stopped reading. It's really uncomfortable. I want Li to officially intervene in his daily life!

What if the protagonist loses the bet?

After reading the latest chapter, I completely don't understand your power system.

Only when you are extremely weak can you have the illusion of unlimited growth.

You will be in trouble if there are so few after it is put on the shelves, you know?

Lu, please work hard. Can you finish writing a book?

I think Xiaolu is more suitable for love stories. Maybe I can try love business stories. If I release a new book next time, let me know in the cartoonist's girlfriends all-subscription group.

Can I pass the all-book subscription group for old books?