Waltz of Steam and Magic

Quite strange. In this world that claims to be a low-level magic, magic is really powerful, let alone the privilege of being superior to others, why are you being discriminated against?

I was a little surprised when I saw the author's confession of over 50 chapters. Isn't this book very good? The writing, plot, and pace are average to above average, so it doesn't cost less than 100 monthly votes. Only when I finally saw the category did I suddenly realize - No, buddy. Why did you vote for the fantasy category? Who doesn't know that the fantasy category has been declining for a long time now, and even Fengyue New Books, which has been struggling for several years, has been replaced by light novels. If you submit this book to fantasy, it will be like 49 people joining the national army... Question 😂 Brother, please contact the editor quickly and ask if you can change the category. If you can, see if you can remove this book from the shelves and re-submit it to light novels. If it is not on the shelves yet, it is still too late. By then, if you make one mistake and make another, after all, no matter how wrong you are, it will not be worse than now, right?

Why do ordinary people not respect power but discriminate against people with power? Even in a low-demon world, magic can do a lot.

It's not too late to keep it until the end

The protagonist of Kingly Adventure should have a higher sense of morality. The protagonist should be calm but not cold. Also, if the protagonist is defeated, the protagonist should be more subjective. Anyway, it is better to write the protagonist to take the blame for certain things. It will make you feel frustrated when you are innocently framed and unable to fight back. The plot can be improved a lot later. The subject matter is my favorite, but the protagonist is not very likable at the moment.

Alternative cover and current cover

? There are so few people who know healing magic, but their status is so low? Any explanation?

It will be on the shelves tomorrow, please beg for first order

It's well written. It's a pity that I can't watch it now.

Boss, do you know how to be a eunuch? Read ten books and nine will supervise me.

Overall, it's pretty good. The title and cover design are very interesting. I haven't read this type of royal fantasy novel in a long time. It's a bit out of the way of online novels. It's great The only drawback is that the rhythm in the front is a bit stiff and the writing may still be a bit blunt. Personally, I feel that many of the descriptions can be neater I hope the author can finish it.

After finishing it, let me comment. First of all, this is a book that is different from the traditional formula. It is more like a light novel, but it is a bit stiff and not pleasant enough, and the processing is also a little lame. Other than that, it is still a book that can be read. Steampunk, Western fantasy, fate, and contract are all pretty good.

When I saw the beginning, I thought of Tutu, a group of pig nobles who don't know how to respect power 😡

🐴 Yes, I finally found a good book after searching for gold in shit. I hope it won't end badly.

Shen Nong tried poison and wrote quite well, food and grass. But there is reason to doubt that this result in Chapter 80 will be cut🙂

In the last few chapters, I just straight up stretched the crotch and finished it, starting and turning, but not "turning" at all. When we fight against a high tower in the front, it's enough that the protagonist is completely played like a chess piece, and he is also being plotted at will by a minor character? The protagonist can only fight back and forth? 😅 What is written in online articles is a sense of "meaning", other than that they are all external things that can be discarded. I will make up a plot for you: After the protagonist was stabbed by Yuna, his sanity as a "human" directly collapsed. Natural magic, the first method known to be limited by human intelligence, was completely liberated. The glow of the five elements flowed out from the seven orifices, and the protagonist completely became the incarnation of the will of natural magic. The protagonist takes one step forward and comes to Celtic. He also wants to say that the Destiny Seed is a joke of some god. But in front of the protagonist who is now on an equal footing with the magic gods and the incarnation of the will of natural magic, it is a real joke. The material basis of the world is the five elements. As soon as the protagonist pointed it out, all matter in the world stopped moving. The crashing floating city stopped abruptly in mid-air, as if the concept of inertia had been removed. The second perspective of the second prince and others can also be inserted here. Whether he recovers or not after that depends entirely on the protagonist's will, even if he will be seriously injured/sleep/amnesia later... It doesn't matter (after all, this is not an invincible novel, and this kind of ultimate move must have enough restrictions), at least pretend to be awesome, so that it can be "integrated" after "turning", such as the classic daily plot of light novels. Of course, if you write a novel that satisfies you as your first priority, then you can ignore what I said above💨

Come on, big brother who writes novels

It is a rare good book. The characters and rhythm are good, and the quality is much higher than many books. The last book that gave me this feeling was "Kingdom Blood", but the two books have different focuses, so I won't make other comparisons. In short, book lovers who like fantasy should not miss it. It is a very comfortable read. I will definitely order it when it is on the shelf. I hope the author will do better and better.

I was thinking that this is a male video, and the background shouldn't be about having a good fight.

I still like the Western Fantasy King's Adventure the most. Please support it by voting for me monthly. If it doesn't work, just transfer to another district. Your grades are important.

I really like the author's writing style and world view. It has a strong visual sense and a strong personality. In addition, the speed of the book is far from the end, so I had to record the existing information. 1: Protagonist group (as of 25.1.11) There are Xiao An, Xiaoma, Xiao Alice, Xiaomei and Yiben Yade, a total of three people, one dragon and one book. Xiao An: The protagonist is suspected to be a nobleman from the former dynasty. Wonderful cosmic beings, magic cake hands (at least there is no one who is more capable of fighting now, rubbing black holes with hands is too abstract). However, the spell realization ability is poor and the real-time combat power is average. Xiao Ma: Candidate for Sword Master, abandoned by the family, suffering from deep hatred (brother, you are the real protagonist). Little Alice: Failed Experiment, Rune Swordsman (I won't lose with my parries and counterattacks!), By the way, Alice, I am Alice too😋 Xiaomei: Young Black Dragon, the true heroine. Yade: It is suspected that the protagonist group must be a rebel, and I am asking about the book of sages that I don't know.

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