Ornn's Chosen One, a Treasure from Ancient Times!

Chapter 22 is well written, but the character design written by the author is not. He has always underestimated Pig Girl, Ashe develops the tribe, and success in adversity is Ness. Pig Girl plunders and raises the tribe and does not agree with it. The author allows the protagonist to stand on the highest moral point and point fingers. Repeatedly pointing, the protagonist is responsible and independent, and does not intervene to change it. I don't know whether the author's writing is bad or whether the author's views are bad, but I can't stand the book with this tone. Just one sentence, Zhang Jiao's Yellow Turban is not good, but for the Yellow Turban, it can survive. You can be right, you can be wrong, but if you point fingers when you are neutral, then you should give up.

I thought you were the entire tribe, both a blacksmith and a warrior. So far, you have just followed the crowd, with numbers, and the protagonist is just like a camera.

Well, the protagonist is a time traveler. I have seen a few pictures of the protagonist. The things I have built so far are all the equipment in the League of Legends game, that is, the weapons and equipment that are available in the country. I just wanted to ask if there is anything else behind? For example, the protagonist uses his own technology to reproduce other games. Equipment and weapons from other worlds. The special weapons of the original god, various weapons of Devil May Cry. The equipment in King of Glory. Even Kamen Rider, Armor Warrior Transformer. However, I feel like these two don't match up a bit, but there should be no problem.

In terms of a battle of wits, he knew it well in advance, but in the end he couldn't even come up with a development plan, and his brain was smashed on the anvil? When it comes to martial arts, it seems like I have watched too many female videos. The protagonist is set to be invincible and capable of beating the sky, and then starts to participate in the head-dressing contest and wins the last place. Haha, it's great, a classic cool novel that makes the audience feel hot and steamy, making their heads spin.

I think the most difficult thing is that the protagonist is planning to sell the weapon that he, the God's Favorite, forged with cold iron to Noxus for the price of five loaves. Sejuani and Udyr next to him are still shocked and think that the protagonist is really smart 😅

I can probably guess that the author is just a spectator to ensure that the plot does not deviate too much, but to be honest, the protagonist is just a camera as other friends said,,, According to the protagonist's ability as a blacksmith, helping to build the greenhouse should be able to lead, so it can be solved Some food problems are actually minor problems In this way, the protagonist can better integrate the power of the polar regions to help him build artifacts and cultivate strong men (ascenders/demigods) to fight against potential risks How long will the protagonist have to play Clash of Clans (bushi) otherwise?

You are a waste. You are Orn's favored one and the last descendant of Furnace Country. You don't even have the courage to wave a weapon at those who insult you. You are a complete waste.

Fortunately, I took a look at the author. After all, it is possible to write that the protagonist is locked up by Lai Xuan, and that V is forced to connect to the black wall to open the door and burn his brain to insert the silver hand chip. Then according to the setting, the protagonist can open this door by himself. I suggest everyone stay on the sidelines.

Question, if the plot is the same whether the protagonist exists or not, then what is the meaning of the protagonist's existence?

I came here from time to time, and I will give you some poisonous points to impress you from time to time. The protagonist is purely a tool to promote the plot.

Change your career, you are not suitable for writing books.

The next second after the breakup, you ran back. You have reached the point where you don't know what the world is. The most important thing you should do now is to delete the book and study hard. If you still write like this, go find a class. You are not suitable.

Isn't that what you want? This plot is so speechless, right?

I originally thought it was forging, through which various problems can be solved, or adversity can come back. It is a road movie with forging as its core. It is a story of constant forging, adventure, and experience. But slowly the forging was lost, and the forging was like a background story.

There are 50 chapters so far. It is an excellent alliance novel with a full sense of relaxation and good character creation. So far, the portrayal of Pig Girl is not bad. In fact, there are quite a lot of stories about Pig Girl. I have read a few books, but few people write about the image of Pig Girl in her most depressed period. Currently, the protagonist is positioned as the main logistics + tank. Some people in the comment area said that the protagonist does not do anything, but from the beginning of the plot, isn't the protagonist slowly changing the Freljord? I think what I wrote before is fine. System missions are the finishing touch for heroes' weapons and armor. Looking at lol, I think most of them are "love" for heroes 🙂, especially female heroes. Nowadays, there are fewer lol heroes, and most of them have a heavy plot atmosphere. I personally think this can go in the direction of "farming + light adventure". The protagonist is very suitable.

Don't you have to help Pig Girl? Don't understand

The author feels that there is no clear outline, and he writes whatever comes to mind. Obviously there is such a good opportunity now. Most of the country leaders/representatives are here. As the protagonists, why not point out the void and let these city-states cease the war and form an "alliance". At least in the short term, there will definitely be no fight. We can even set up a war academy. Send people to each country to equip the heroes and let them fight voids/demon/monsters.

I can only say that there are a lot of creative ideas, the character descriptions, and the plot are all just a bunch of excuses, and the pig's feet are just like a spirited young man who hangs out on the street, a gangster.

Time, I can see that you like it very much, but I still recommend finishing it quickly, summarizing and then starting a new one. Writing like this will waste your writing enthusiasm. Come on 🌹

The Freljord often raids the border to grab supplies. Do you think the nobles of Demacia will listen to your words and provide help to train your army? You still have Ornn's blessing, and you bring some magic with you. I wouldn't believe it if you don't get knocked on the head by a demon hunter when you go in 🙂

Chapter 11: Toxic Not recommended to read

I actually think that this way of writing is more suitable for the story framework of a big world and a large background. If it is a story like Night City or Twin Cities where the main stage is only concentrated in a small place, then this way of writing is a dead end. But how do you feel about the twists and turns in your plot? Then there are many typos and wrong words, but you don't correct them. The protagonist looks like a second-rate at one moment, and is called a master at another. The character is very divided. As for plug-ins, I personally prefer this method of downplaying plug-ins in the middle and later stages of the plot, because if I want to watch the protagonist cheat and kill to reach the top of a different world, I can definitely watch fantasy, but the problem is, you can't completely delete the plug-ins, right? I would like to ask, has the protagonist forged any new equipment so far? Is the task completed? Karma Irelia, let alone Zed, Akali, or even Yasuo, can you make some shoes or some kind of defensive equipment? Well, I don't want to make one, and neither does Syndra. I understand that Syndra doesn't need any equipment, but the problem is that if you make her a protective armor or a banshee-like accessory, isn't it said that she is very weak? As for the length of the war, I understand that it is impossible to write the entire battle, but the question is, can your key battle not be written in the same way as the battle at the entrance of the village? It feels a bit like a big scene, a bit like an epic war, okay? You wrote the famous scene of a bunch of heroes in Ionia uniting to charge together, but you didn't include Kennen's Ten Thousand Thunder Heavenly Prison. Halfway through the book review, I discovered that you are writing the novel Lone Wolf. My suggestion is that you'd better use AI to make an outline before writing the next one, otherwise this book will really make people scratch their heads.

It's not as bad as the comment section said. At least the writing is readable. The plot structure is indeed a bit too loose. Just adjust it and focus on one main line. This is also the role of the volumes. Don't go back and forth like this. Finish writing the inside of Freljord first.

What about health care? Why are there only five chapters in one day?

The strength of the heart is probably a breastplate, how could it be a pendant?

When I think of the protagonist snatching his mother🐷, I feel sick🤢🤮

Catching Bugs, Chapter 126, the Noxians rushed up and found that this land has never come alive. What does it mean?