Naruto: Tenseigan and Shikotsumyaku from the Start

Shuiryu has really drawn a good circle for you. There are only one person who writes about the reincarnation, and no one is stubborn. It will always be the members of the clan who jump around in front of you. The people who were added before my awakening jumped in front of me, and the people who were added after my awakening are still jumping in front of me. Didn't I awaken in vain? Violence brings power. As long as your fist is big enough, Hinata and Hinata can only come and lick your ass. As long as your fist is big enough, Hiruzen will kneel in front of you and beg you to be the fourth generation Hokage. I'm almost immortal. I'm still a coward. Suiryu was the first. He got the crab. If those who come after don't change, they can only die and throw themselves into the street.

Shen Nong is here to talk about the advantages and disadvantages. If you can accept it, you can accept it. If you can't accept it, then retreat. Advantages: ① The author listens to the advice. Although there are many shortcomings, there are still improvements (although some have not been changed) ② It does not suppress the protagonist's combat power. The protagonist can fight Konan, Juzo, Orochimaru, Kakuzu, Scorpion and Hungry Ghost Road at the same time before the protagonist is released. The progress of combat power can be described as rapid. ③ There is no cookie-cutter system. The golden finger lies in plot advantages and talents. The research and development capabilities are comparable to Orochimaru. He developed the Kaiten Chakra mode at the age of 13, and developed a method to transplant the blood inheritance limit of others, and transplanted the corpse bone veins. ④Have strong subjective initiative, know what to do, do Danzo when asked, do Danzo, decisive and not irritating Disadvantages: ①The fighting writing is really not good, the writing is a bit immature, and needs to be improved ②The last two paragraphs of one chapter are copied and pasted to the beginning of the next chapter Bad habit (it seems to have been changed now, but it's just too late, it was changed a few chapters before it was released) ③ Calling the Fourth Generation Meimei Yongdaimei, the author likes to pop up Japanese words from time to time, such as being stupid, I can be weak, I am not used to it (not changed) 😅 ④ Combat Strength Progress It's too fast, I feel like I'm going to collapse, but it's hard to say ⑤ Washing Itachi (It's hard to say, it's a matter of opinion. After all, Itachi is only 5 years old at this time. The protagonist still has a certain affection for Itachi. He has become Itachi's life mentor. Itachi even opened the Sharingan for the protagonist's safety. , I feel that his status in Itachi's heart has been ranked first. By making Itachi his younger brother, the situation has expanded, no longer limited to one village and one clan, but with his eyes on the entire ninja world. Itachi's dream has become to help the protagonist unify the ninja world and bring permanent peace) and pass the responsibility for the genocide to Konoha F4. Considering that some people can accept it and some people can't, it is listed as a shortcoming. I personally can accept it. After all, there is an extra subordinate, and the Uchiha clan is not familiar with me, not related to me. In addition, it happened in the original timeline. With the protagonist around, it obviously will not happen. ⑥ A wooden person, with a low emotional intelligence, slow in relationships ⑦ Easy to have conflicts of temper, not very rational, unable to gain the maximum benefit calmly, some behaviors are too impulsive, leaving trouble for others. That's it in general.                              :

I have always liked watching Suiryuu's Tenseigan. After reading it, I found that many of the other Naruto fandoms were System and Goldfinger. I couldn't stand it after reading dozens of chapters, so I wrote this book myself. There will be no system or cheats in this book. The protagonist's only advantage is that he knows the plot and the descendants of Kaguya. This book was also very easy to write. Although I wrote 6 to 10 hours a day, although I wrote 1,000 words per hour, and although I typed on my mobile phone, I really enjoyed writing it. I hope more readers will come to discuss the plot together!

The third chapter was really poisonous to me. In the first chapter, the protagonist said that he had poor talent, and he and Obito were both ashamed of being bloodstained. Then in the third chapter, he went straight to the opposite direction. Isn't returning to heaven exclusive to the Zong family? Neji is called a genius because he has developed Kaiten and the Sixty-four Palms of the Eight Trigrams on his own. At this moment, Ningji doesn't know where he is. You, as the first person in history to use Kaiten, are actually a shameful person.

It's very surprising. On the surface, it doesn't rely on golden fingers or systems. In fact, it is pure golden fingers. Is it called genetic engineering to manipulate cells? The Hokage said that apart from the usefulness of the eyes, few other blood stains could be transplanted, let alone such crude genetic engineering.

You are going to a completely different extreme than Shuilong. That damn Tenseigan and the third-generation Kazekage puppet configuration, Zona and a jounin tortured each other to the extreme. Now that you are 13 years old, you can chase and kill 5 people from the Akatsuki organization using only your clones, which is the ultimate level of defiance. I am completely speechless for you two. Is it so difficult to write about Naruto balancing his combat power now?

I saw the plot of falling out with Hinata, plus begging to become a disciple, etc., So I can't understand the author's thinking.

The jounin is already the core of the ninja village, and the ninjutsu mastered is basically considered a personal secret. Will there really be such a jounin exam open to all ninja villages and civilians? Aren't you afraid of leaking information? A ninja's intelligence leaks are easy to be targeted. The early stage of the attack was intelligence. Now is the era of Xiaoqiang, which has just ended after the Third World War and has been peaceful for more than ten years. How can this kind of jounin promotion be an open assessment?

Protagonist: Kneel down and be my dog! Otherwise, no one in heaven or on earth can save you! Hyuga clan: You are brave! Protagonist: Shut up, you are even meaner than a dog, you are only worthy of eating me💩

There are no big poisons, but there are constant small poisons, which makes me frown.