Myriad Worlds: The Path of Mythology

Those who fawn over Ye Fan and his cronies are unlikely to have good grades; can't they even walk independently?

Since you've decided to start a new book, at least make sure it's well-written and doesn't end up like your previous one, "Halo." Here are some suggestions for the author, summarized from reading so many fanfictions. 1. It needs to have its own unique elements; simply copying the original work is meaningless.

Your book probably won't survive. You've set the protagonist too high a bar, but if you can't capture the essence of a sage, don't blame people for criticizing it.

Chen Dong's style is outdated. You're just piecing things together; are you trying to become a mini-Chen Dong? How many iterations has Qidian (a popular online writing platform) gone through? Those with real class write about seeking the truth. They extract the essence of others' work and make it their own. You've just written all the dross? You've turned yourself into someone else.

Looking at your profile, I thought you'd take off immediately, but that's not the case.

Putting everything else aside, just look at your first introduction—what the hell?! I came here looking for books, and seeing this really made me lose my temper. For this kind of book, prestige is important, right? Look at what you wrote! I was about to leave, but I couldn't resist the urge to complain, so I came back in. First, I didn't see any prestige, or rather, it was too low-class.

1. As expected, I guessed right. From the synopsis, I thought he had his own system, and going to the heavens was to complete his own path, not to copy someone else's system (isn't this just a leveling-up story across the heavens?)! 2. He started by saying he wanted to be a Dao Ancestor and establish a sect, then turned around and joined the Lingxu Cave Heaven to open up the Sea of ​​Bitterness.

I couldn't continue after reading the first two chapters. The protagonist is just a self-indulgent character, yet he compares himself to a saint—I didn't see any of that coming from him. 😒

The theme is too lofty and abstract, making it difficult to relate to. Furthermore, I don't see anything good about becoming a sage. Can sages live forever? Can they transcend worldly concerns? I remember when Meng Ru Shen Ji wrote the novel *Yang Shen*, the protagonist, Hong Yi, envisioned everyone becoming like a dragon, which drew a lot of criticism in the comments section.

Never write fantasy novels that incorporate Japanese manga; they're completely incompatible. Fantasy novels that mix in Japanese manga almost never finish, and they'll drive away people who hate Japanese manga. I know I am one of them.