Perfect World: Lord of Auras

I think the writing is quite good, the writing style is okay, and the most important thing is that Golden Finger has new ideas. I particularly hate systematic articles. I don't understand why so many people like to read systematic articles.

I recommend skipping the part about Ishimura because it feels like you're being poisoned. It feels like this book currently uses the protagonist to set off Shi Hao. It would be more convenient to just give the protagonist to Shi Hao. A common problem in perfect fanfiction. It was written and written in the end.

The halo talent is said to be a skill to cover up. This brain circuit is really unbelievable. Look at the original Shi Hao who was robbed of the skill by a bunch of big guys, but no one wanted the Supreme Bone. Only those without talent need it, but are you afraid of those without talent? It is of no use if those high-level people rob you of your talent. At most, they will steal it for the younger generation. It is really not like that. Others have a lot of first-generation bones in their own families. But you said that your technique can be used by everyone. Who can you rob if you don't want to rob it? You are really speechless. With such a brain circuit, even if Chongtong is so defiant, people all over the world will not come around to rob it. However, Shi Hao took one of the Ten Fierce Techniques and everyone came to rob it.

I think even if you are writing fan fiction, you should respect the original work😄. If you have read the original work and then look at the emotional lines in the fan fiction, you will feel very uncomfortable. The heroine can accept things that have nothing to do with No. 10. If you accept them randomly, I think it will be a bit difficult!

Yue'e is really a failure. Even the female God of War should be better. Yue'e is an ordinary girl and she becomes the heroine inexplicably just because she is pretty for free. Which female cultivator doesn't become more and more beautiful? This is a role that holds the protagonist back.

6 Characters and 4 female protagonists. As a normal human being, I really don't have the desire to click in and watch 😒 Can Shen Nong tell me?

I really don't understand why the author wanted to write the character Yue'e. Is there any significance? Is it to highlight the outstanding qualities of the protagonist? And I remember you said there are three heroines, is she one? If you think about it, since she has no strength, she should be accompanied by a little bit like this, and like each other a little bit. What does it mean when you write like this?

It's not interesting, the original work is just a lot of little yellow stuff.

I want to see Yun Xi Yue Chan, but I have no interest in this Yue Chan😅

At the beginning, there was a person named Shi Yunying, saying that the protagonist was worthy of being his child, and then it was Jiang Yun, and Jiang Li again, and what, your father's surname is Shi, your surname is Jiang, and in the barbaric era, give me the word "instructor", it's too ridiculous.