Perfect World: Lord of Auras

I think it's written quite well, the writing style is fine, and most importantly, the "golden finger" (cheat code) is original. I especially hate system novels, and I don't understand why so many people like to read them.

I suggest skipping the section about Ishimura; it felt like being poisoned by poison. It feels like this book is currently just using the protagonist to highlight Shi Hao; it would be easier to just give the protagonist's advantages to Shi Hao. A common problem with perfect fanfiction: it ends up being a mess.

The aura of talent is disguised as a cultivation technique, a truly baffling line of reasoning. In the original story, Shi Hao was fought over by numerous powerful figures for his cultivation technique, but no one wanted the Supreme Bone; only those without talent needed it. But are you afraid of those without talent?

I think even when writing fanfiction, you should respect the original work 😄. After reading the original work, it feels very uncomfortable to read the romantic storylines in fanfiction. The female lead can accept characters unrelated to number ten, but if she randomly accepts characters, I think it will be a bit difficult to manage!

Yue'e is a real failure. Even a female war goddess should be better, right? Yue'e is utterly unremarkable, and just because she's pretty, she inexplicably became the female lead. Which female cultivator doesn't become more and more beautiful? She's completely a character who drags the main character down.

Six main characters, four female leads... As a normal human being, I really have no desire to click and watch. 😒 Anyone have any suggestions?

I really don't understand why the author created the character Yue'e. What's the point? Is it to highlight some of the protagonist's strengths? And I remember you said there were three female leads, isn't she one of them? If she is, since she lacks power, shouldn't there be some companionship and mutual affection? What's the point of writing it this way?

It's pointless; the original story just had an extra blond kid.

I want to see Yunxi and Yuechan; I have absolutely no interest in this Yue'e thing. 😅

The story begins with a character named Shi Yunying who says the protagonist is indeed his child. Then later there's Jiang Yun and Jiang Li. What's going on? Your father's surname is Shi, and yours is Jiang. And then there's the term "instructor" from the barbaric era. It's so jarring.