Purple Gourd True Immortal

I don't know if it's written for fun, or if it's intended to make money. If it's the former, forget it. If it's the latter, make major changes as soon as possible, otherwise the book will be unfinished. First, the golden finger is not clear. The first five are too wide, and although there are restrictions in the back, they are not clearly stated. It is better to just copy Han Laomo's must have moonlight, one drop for seven days, two hundred years. Second, the plot setting is extremely unreasonable. Even if you stay in an inn, you can pick up treasures in the thatched hut at the back. Others have already picked it up and finished it. In short, when writing, bring reality into it, feel it yourself, and then write. Although the character description can be exaggerated, the plot setting must be logical.

Originally it didn't seem to be a panel system, so I planned to take a look, but after looking at the catalog, I learned swordsmanship, so after thinking about it, I decided to forget it.

Even if there is an Immortal Mansion, there are also exercises, weapons and alchemy in it? Wouldn't it be better to just send the level directly? Shuangwen 88

Which editor is there? I recommended it even though I didn't read it.

Tongling Gate? I am really from Tongling😰

At least it's not from the system panel. The quantity is too small and I'll save it first.