Immortal Cultivation and Longevity, Beginning in the Immortal Abode

I really don't understand why the patrolling monks want to patrol outside the city, and then they meet a rogue cultivator who is not afraid of death and insists on fighting the protagonist. Is this really a rogue cultivator?

In Chapter 53, the illness continues. The protagonist also likes the feeling of life and death crisis. He feels that ordinary practice is too boring. It is difficult to imagine that this is the protagonist of Senfu style.

When you write a plot, just write the plot. Don't just start talking about big principles. Writing about cultivating immortals has a sense of criticizing politics.

Can you use the fairy mansion to plant some powerful spiritual plants, elixirs, and fruit trees, so that the protagonist can quickly become stronger, or elixirs that strengthen spiritual beasts? Write something different.

The protagonist picks up yin to replenish yang. I've only seen this setting on other websites. It's boring.

Start fooling the juniors and go first 🤭

Can be seen. It's okay, but I suggest optimizing the description of Immortal Mansion. In the early stage, it was about the consumption of spiritual energy and the like. Nothing else. If the writing is at least consistent, Xian Xia can be in the top 50. Mainly, Xianxia is so bad now. Except for a few books, there are almost no books left to read. They are all a mess.

Zongmen style, Xianfu, seems familiar...

Personally, I feel like the opening chapter is a bit bland.

You can read it if you are in Shuhuang. The plot is quite satisfactory, so it's okay.