New Game Plus: The Game Save Has Logged Into Reality

As the title suggests, your novel has the feel of a greasy urban novel from ten years ago, but your military knowledge is contemporary (you don't need to read military ignoramuses who just ramble on). So I was watching the Type 055 destroyer conduct target-centric warfare while reading what sounded like dialogue between a man and a woman from ten years ago 😂. Personal suggestion:

Your profile is really... It's like kicking someone out.

I don't know why, but every single one of the books I find, even though I like the premise and everything else, is poorly written. Every single one of them is like that, and I have no idea why. This is just my personal rant.

Old Bai, these days Qidian (a Chinese online literature platform) doesn't like overly greasy female character descriptions. Male readers are awakening in this era; it's either sassy and promiscuous or heartwarming. Starting with descriptions of the male lead sexually assaulting a stranger, or him offering himself to a stranger, is too much of a sycophantic act.

The problem with this book is that it connects the game world and the real world. Would you dare write about the game world invading the real world? Would you dare write about a forbidden spell leveling Shanghai? Since it's destined that a war between the real world and the game world can't be written, why add the real world at all? You might as well just write a second playthrough story.

Image from the internet, but it's very close to my imagined Hero Port scene, so I'm sharing it for your reference (please delete if copyrighted). Hero Port is a small seaside town with a medieval atmosphere; most of its houses are made of brick, stone, and wood; it has some shipping capabilities and a relatively good harbor.

Chapter 7 is really not good. Don't you understand what righteousness is? Don't you understand that you can't fire the first shot? That's the way Westerners do things, which doesn't fit our army's style at all, especially since you've just arrived in this strange world.

I thought Silver Tyrant was the beginning, but it turned out to be the final chapter.

What exactly does "pl" mean? I'm a little worried this book might be abandoned; it seems like not many people are following it.

A returning reader is here! I used to read pirated copies of *The Galaxy Conquest Guide* on a reading app because I couldn't afford it before. 😭😭