Mysterious First Empire

The current reading progress is: basically keeping up with the latest chapters. Here, I first want to say that the purpose of this post is to hope that more readers can continue reading this book without being dissuaded by the previous content. (Note, this post contains certain spoilers*) Many online articles perform amazingly before they are put on the shelves, but once they are officially released, they often collapse rapidly. This book is just the opposite. The reading experience of the free chapters is more attractive than the official chapters. The main problems arise in the introduction part after admission and the paragraph where the extraordinary world describes the real society. Let's talk about the admission introduction part first. The relationship between Lupine and his senior student progressed too quickly. If we look at it as time goes by, Lupine and his senior should have a process of learning the basics of the Golden Dawn together. During this time, they can gradually become familiar with each other and establish a deeper relationship. The senior sister herself has an extraordinary affection for the club, and she has a strong desire to protect Lupine. However, the novel does not describe this process of learning occult knowledge in detail. Although the author knows the development of the relationship in his heart, it is unclear to the readers, making the relationship progress between the two from the beginning of school too abrupt. In fact, the relationship progress of the subsequent heroines also progressed relatively quickly, but with a clearer advancement process, readers can feel the context of emotional development, and it is not easy to feel abrupt. For example, Charlotte fell in love at first sight out of admiration after hearing about Arsene Robin's deeds; Louise was introduced by her senior sister and was saved by Lupine after experiencing some major events of her own; Josina's plot is similar to Louise's, and has similar emotional foreshadowing. The second problem before putting it on the shelves is the problem of society in the novel. I have to say that I have read some online novels about the extraordinary world of the Victorian era with similar settings before, such as "Crown of the Crown". The authors of such works seem to like the writing part, and this is one of the important reasons why some works eventually collapsed. In fact, many books involve a lot of community content in their online articles. As a result, the focus of the entire book is often shifted, resulting in a decrease in quality. This has led to many readers now unconsciously thinking of abandoning the book as soon as they see the content of the club. This is not to say that everyone does not like it, but because few authors can write this part well. In a world filled with extraordinary powers, discussions of social ideologies cannot directly apply real-life experience, otherwise it will easily lead to logical inconsistency. Some works choose to let the protagonist bear extraordinary power and sweep everything; while others let the protagonist solve problems by ruling the world. Either way, it may bring about a problem - the serious theme conflicts with the relaxed atmosphere of the online article. After all, there are few all-round authors who can control both at the same time. As far as this book is concerned, I think the author is relatively good at describing the emotional line and world view, at least in the field of light novels. Although some places use adaptation techniques from real history, this is understandable, because for a reader like me who has a general understanding of continental history, I am not too demanding about the complete restoration and rationality of historical details. However, when the story entered the club part, I felt that the protagonist was too close to these contents, especially in the part of conveying thoughts, which gave me an awkward feeling like reading a fantasy novel - as if the protagonist had directly pulled out some military books or poems from his mind (this only represents personal reading experience). This also made me lose interest in continuing reading. However, with the end of the first chapter and the progress of the second and third chapters, the novel gradually got rid of these embarrassing parts for me, the emotional line progressed more naturally, and the attraction picked up. At this point, I regained the motivation to continue reading. At this time, the good aspects of this work are revealed, including but not limited to the use of mysticism, the persistence of sticking to the position of the harem at this starting point, some strong words that made me smile knowingly after reading it, and the plot arrangement that will not make people lose their heads at a glance... It can be said that at the end of the first volume, the second volume and the third volume, apart from the small shortcomings of tight rhythm due to the overall lack of content, the remaining advantages are enough to attract people to continue reading. To be honest, if the author continues writing, I would be willing to automatically subscribe until the end. However, unfortunately, because there are some problems in the first part that I personally felt when reading it, when I recommended this book to friends in other book club groups, they also expressed similar views to me, which made it difficult to sell this book. There are not many authors who are still writing about the Western Fantasy Harem. I also feel very sorry for the current performance of this work. I hope that this post written here can give people who have scanned this book an idea to read it and get in touch with the excellent parts of this book.

I hope this book can be finished. I will support you until the book is finished. I wish you an early transformation into games, movies, and comics.

It's too blunt. The current perception is that it jumps from one main line to another in daily life. For example, in the last chapter, I just met the senior sister. In the next chapter, the senior sister said that the protagonist I know is not such a person. In the next chapter, she will fight for the protagonist life and death 🙂

This mysterious first empire, anyone who can resist looking at it is a god.

Friends who collect and keep books, come and read some, it's a ball, bang bang bang

I'm a college student. I traveled through time and had strange symbols on my body. After a brief analysis, I ran out to chat with people. "Hey, who is the Emperor Napoleon?" It's like asking in China. "Hey, who is the president? " Finally, I ran back to the box and started to look through my belongings Then I discovered Ah, I had a gun and forgot to bring it when I went out Ah, there is a dead person in the box Ah, it turns out that I am a Skeletor Hahaha, the writing is so interesting.

It feels like I haven't seen Charlotte for a long time. What was she doing? She returned to China after discovering that the hero came from another world? I feel so weird and mysterious that I often disappear.

It is the best Western fantasy I have read recently. However, the performance of this book supports a regrettable point: Qidian has lost the ability to sort out good and bad books and sell them to readers.

Clarice Antoine François de Teague

At present, the plot is a bit too compact, without enough buffering, and the plot looks very visual fatigue. I hope the author can write more about daily life and the like as a transition, and the explanation of occult terms is a bit too complicated. Of course, overall, whether it is the plot, topic selection, or writing style, it is quite attractive. Good cheers to the author.

Charlotte Holmes

From the beginning, I supported step by step, until I was too busy to watch, I just subscribed and then scrolled to the last page to count the number of readers. There were only more than ten people each time, so the author insisted on finishing it. The author is great, and I hope there can be more sweet extras (I only subscribed but did not read it. Can any readers tell me how the ending was or if the author has a larger outline? I always feel that the word count is a bit too short for this magnificent and gorgeous world)

The hands that have been repaired for a long time... Let's do this for now

In the past few days, I have seen several book friends reporting on the issue of plot rhythm. The author first started writing Japanese-style light novels, and his understanding of the rhythm of online writing may indeed be insufficient. I apologize to everyone. The author received similar feedback in the early stages of creation, and also tried to add more daily parts between events. However, much of the early content of this book relies on depositing manuscripts, and the author has to go to work every day, so he is basically unable to make drastic changes to the content and rhythm of the first volume. Therefore, the changes in rhythm will basically be gradually reflected after the second volume. However, among the several book friends who have reported the writing rhythm problem in recent days, only one has announced the current reading progress (late period of the first volume). If you have read the contents of the second volume and beyond, I hope you can give me feedback as to whether there are still similar problems in the subsequent contents, as a reference and benchmark for future creations. Thanks again to all book friends who are willing to provide comments.

It's too dry, and it feels like I'm reading an outline filled with occultism.

Lupine is already a qualified French man (glad)

Louise Adelaide Matilda von Prussia

Fairy Grass is even better. It is one of the most authentic western fantasy novels in terms of starting point. In the early stage, it had the problems of too fast pace and too many explanations of mysticism. However, after 70 chapters, the author's level has improved to a higher level. Don't give up because of the lack of initial appeal. Good books are always slow to develop. For such a good book, the performance is not proportional to its quality, which makes people feel sad. I am afraid this is also an aspect of Xihuan's decline again since the collapse of Suhuan (sad)

Too little daily routine leads to too fast emotional drama You can write about works related to science, Kabbalah, tree of life, ritual magic, Western spirituality, etc. It's a good introduction

It's a pity that the author still needs to improve. Combat is what makes me most nervous at the moment. In fact, this type of combat power system can only write about wits, but...

​​ ​​Light novels cannot bear the responsibility of grand narratives. For readers of light novels who are tired of reading ordinary daily life, they will unconsciously turn their attention to the field of fantasy. However, the serious fantasy background and the illusory fantasy of the house are destined to not fit perfectly. If they can fit, something must be given up. When we pursue the throbbing of light novels, we always hope that our hearts can float upward instead of falling downward; when we long for the epic feeling of fantasy literature, the situation is exactly the opposite. Unfortunately, this book happens to be in a state of fragmentation that sometimes floats and sometimes falls. Perhaps it is not appropriate to say this. "The First Empire of Mysterious God" is essentially a light novel with a very pure taste. Whether it is the almost stereotype-like label of a two-dimensional beautiful girl, the scumbag character of a harem hero who is so nostalgic, or the emotional descriptions filled with classic otaku fantasies, one cannot help but sigh that traditional light novels still seem to have the possibility of a renaissance. However, the author's abrupt and unnatural forensic plot casts a heavy gray filter on this beautiful picture. I have never objected to authors mixing in some private goods in their writing. After all, any work is a reflection of the author's personality and thoughts, but these private goods should at least not destroy the theme and tone of the work itself. It's really hard for me to imagine that one second Lao Lu was making a divine statement, "I like you, but there's more than one person I like," and the next second he was rushing to the forensic scene to meet the stars. Does the romantic young man experience the pain of reality? That's a lot of life. Light novels are still too weak as a carrier of evidence. Any grand narrative here will not enhance the resonance of the story with readers. It will only weaken the fragile rationality of the story. But I still don't intend to criticize this book too much. After all, there are too few authors who still insist on writing traditional fantasy light novels in this era, so few that people can basically ignore the above shortcomings. Although the fantasy is heavy, the heavy fantasy itself has its own charm.

Sorry, friends, I got there first this time 😚

Prototype World: No longer can only travel in space, but can travel in time and space at the same time Mysterious God/Endless Light: Exists in all time and space at the same time. Time and space have no meaning to it.

It reads like one incident after another, but it is a good book

The treasure I discovered at the end of last month is quite to my liking, and I hope it can be completed all the time Does the author have any book friends?

Although I personally regret that there is too little content in the first battle (I personally hope that I can return to the world where the harem is located) By the way, can the protagonist return to the world where the harem is?

When will the new book come out?

Chapter 368: The position is wrong. Can the author fix it?