Secret Library

This is AI, you wrote it and then changed it yourself? There are several places in the article that are inexplicable, words that do not fit the content appear, and the plot advances ridiculously fast.

Universal Laws 1. Life is directional movement. 2. Spirit is the spark of life. 3. Perception is the ability to learn the value of knowledge. 4. Intelligence is the understanding of knowledge. 5. Perception is the most basic form of intelligence. 6. Understanding is the right path to understanding 7. Understanding is the key to everything. 8. Ohm Messiah knows everything and understands everything. 9: Alien machinery is a misinterpretation of the right path. Ten: The soul is the conscience of consciousness. 11. The soul can only be given by Ohm Messiah. 12. Soulless consciousness is the enemy of all living beings. 13. The knowledge of the sages is beyond doubt. 14. The machine soul guards the knowledge of the sages. 15. Flesh is fallible, but rituals can honor machine spirits. 16. Breaking with the ritual is breaking with the faith.

I've been imitating Staring Ancient Gods for a whole year, but I feel like this book is better 😴😴 The author is capable

A whole year's imitation of Staring into the Ancient Gods, but the writing is okay. It seems to be a good grass from the front.

The writing is good, but it's over fifty chapters, where's the main plot? It feels like playing a single-player game. There is no connection between each book. Apart from the protagonist, there are no supporting characters. The pace is too fast. How to say it? It's bland and tasteless, and the writing and settings are good, but it lacks a main line and can't connect the whole book. It feels very awkward. I really don't have much desire to read it. I have no sense of expectation. I don't know what the protagonist's motivation is after reading it.

I just finished reading the door dungeon, and suddenly I had a sudden thought From the perspective of the ancient gods and outsiders, the library is the dungeon You can lay out the layout first, and then attract the attention of the library, The library will write a book for you, and then send a librarian to correct the errors The picture tube has the ability to backtrack, and you need to try your best to guide the fraudulent picture tube in the wrong direction, which can consume the distortion of the picture tube Value The ultimate goal is to use your own authority (belief penetration, dream reconstruction, occult channel) to use the picture tube as a bridge to influence and rewrite your book of destiny If you consume the distortion value of the light picture tube (sweeping ticket) after rewriting, then history will be anchored, which is equivalent to the reward for clearing the copy Of course, it is just a whim, and the plot is subject to the author.

It looks familiar, and it's tentacles. I'm really familiar with it. I've read dozens of books with tentacles at least.

The pace is too fast, the writing is good, concise, and there is not too much nonsense . The plot has no ups and downs, or it is too monotonous. A book is just a story. The plot in the real world is too ordinary to be honest. It is better to put the main body in another world. At least there is something to do during the break in the library.

What the hell is this called science fiction?

It's good. It's really difficult to conceive of a powerful evil god in a world view. The historical space has to be turned upside down and it can't be described positively. Otherwise, Cthulhu will become something that is about to become a god and still have to hold meetings around the table. The author like this can give various evil gods strength by extracting only one fragment. However, there are two problems arising from this. First, the simulator is too buggy. If you don't want the protagonist to have a smooth life, you have to increase the difficulty of the boss and turn it into a fight between the boss and the simulator. This will inevitably cause visual fatigue. Perhaps some failure penalties should be added. The second is that there is a huge gap with reality. The author seems not to know how to write reality. I originally wanted to write something pretentious and slap in the face, but later changed it. I feel that the failure penalty mentioned above can be added to reality to make it a warm and daily life. Increase the interaction between the scripts and save me from playing single-player all the time.

I was enjoying watching it, but it stopped suddenly🤔

The writing is okay, but it always feels rough. No connotation...

The writing is okay, but the pace is too fast. It would be better to polish the details. Can one copy be longer? Especially in the fourth dungeon, the protagonist is still used to showing off his blood and recklessness first. It's really a bit stupid. How can I write about the growth of the protagonist? If I don't know how to write real-life plots, I can write less. I only write about nymphomaniacs and face-slapping turtle men. It's better not to write realistic plots. The real-life plots don't have any story lines. It's just a pretense plot. It's better to put it in the dungeon.

The writing is good. If the quality keeps up, there will be some fine products.

Is the distortion value shared by all missions? The first mission has a distortion value of 5, and the second mission starts with 5.

[Naogu] A loyal fan, I was summoned by book friends, so I came to test the water. If it's good-looking, it doesn't matter if I love half of you 😍