Everyone Else Tames Beasts, But You Tame Beast Girls?

The savory writing style and rich flavor make it clear at a glance that this is a top-quality congee pie. Seeing such an exciting work is worth the ticket price even for a Silver Alliance member.

I couldn't take it anymore after reading over 190 chapters. I came for the intimate scenes with the operators, but that part was pitifully short. You're writing fanfiction, yet you insist on indulging in pretentious sentimentality. Everyone reads fanfiction for enjoyment, and you make the characters even more miserable than in the original work, without any basic awareness of what's offensive. You should just write original content; this writing style is simply unsuitable for fanfiction.

I understand the author wanted the protagonist to make money through research, to show his independence and not rely on Kal'tsit's coattails. But like the guy next to me said, it's putting the cart before the horse. We're here to see the protagonist grow stronger alongside the Arknights girls, not some clichéd beast-taming story.

I've read over 400 chapters. The protagonist is sick throughout, born with a disability, and even his system is useless... (He's still not better, and the system is pretty bad too). The author has a bit of an artsy streak, so some plots are long and tedious, and the author frequently indulges in dark and tragic themes. Lightning avoidance is generally okay; there's some awareness, but not much.

The Texas storyline made me very uncomfortable. There were clearly more reasonable and stable plot points, but instead, they insisted on using such a tragic and vengeful starting point, and even made the old lynx look bad. I really don't understand. A character's motivation can be established and expanded upon using their original character design.

Hurry up and introduce that young master from the Huai family, then let him leave the stage. You're writing a genius-themed story, why bother with a background character who seems more powerful than the protagonist? These kinds of minor bosses in the early stages usually only appear for a few dozen chapters before disappearing. You've mentioned him several times, and he hasn't even appeared yet.

I thought it was really about beast tamers, but it turns out it's a fanfiction about Azur Lane.

This was supposed to be a light novel focusing on interactions with girls, but you turned it into fantasy. Your audience, or rather, what we want to see, isn't these kinds of adventures and getting stronger. It's not that they can't have them, but they definitely shouldn't be the main plot or have too much space in it.

Some insignificant supporting characters take up a huge amount of space, and their fights are described in extreme detail. If you're here for Arknights, you can skip this; it doesn't feel like fan fiction at all. It's just a rehash of the Arknights tag. The male lead is disabled in 400 chapters, and the supporting characters probably make up almost half of those chapters.

Oh my god, this is a kind of "what if" scenario, isn't it?