Everyone Else Tames Beasts, But You Tame Beast Girls?

With its salty and moist writing and mellow flavor, you can tell at a glance that this is the best porridge batch. Being able to see such an explosive work makes Silver League worth the price of admission.

After reading more than 190 chapters, I really couldn't bear it anymore. I came here just to get close to the operators, but in the end, this part of the book contained very little content. You've already written fan fiction, but you still have to commit literary youth disease. You don't read fan fiction for the sake of fun. You make the characters worse than the original work, and you don't even have a basic sense of lightning protection. You can't write original works. Your writing method is really not suitable for writing fan fiction.

I understand that the author wants the protagonist to go into research to make money, and to show his independence and not to hug Mr. Kelsey, but just like the guy next to him said, it is putting the cart before the horse. We are here to see the protagonist and the Ark girl become stronger together, not to see some Luo Shizi's beast-control novels. We have already read enough about research on evolution and other things that shock everyone. To be honest, isn't what you are writing now just an ancient beast-control novel and modded Arknights?

I have read more than 400 chapters. The protagonist is sick throughout the whole process, born with a disability, and even the system does not work. . . (It's still not good now, and the system is relatively rubbish.) The author is a bit of a writer, so some of the plots are stinky and long, and he always likes dark and deep characters It's like lightning protection, and he has some consciousness but not much If you want to read it, you can read a hundred or so chapters, and then it depends on your own feelings.

The plot of De Gou made me feel very uncomfortable. It could have been promoted with a more reasonable and stable plot, but it had to be written from the perspective of bitterness and hatred, and the old lynx was completely blackened. I really can't figure it out. The driving force of the character's actions can be used in the original work. The original character of De Gou was already full of bitterness and hatred. Since you wrote about De Gou who came from time-travelling when his family was destroyed at the beginning, why did you continue to "add bricks and mortar" after you came to this world? Do you feel that if you don't write like this, you can't continue writing? At this time, when De Gou traveled through time, as long as the protagonist faced her sincerely from the beginning and lived with her for a period of time, the goodwill would be improved, instead of relying on the dark and cruel plot you imagined to promote goodwill. The same was true for W and Suzuran before. Their life experiences were miserable enough, and they were caught and enslaved after coming to this world. To do an experiment, take a look at the plot you wrote and summarize how shocking it is. You didn't describe anything too much before, so I didn't say much. As soon as the plot of De Gou came out, I was immediately bored. He was caught in human form for experiments, and he was still naked when he was found by the protagonist in the base. Is it because of Wenqing disease? I just have a suggestion, rewrite this plot, otherwise it will be painful in my heart and I can't stand it.

Hurry up and write that young master of the Huai family to appear and exit. What you are writing should be a genius style. Why do you insist on writing a background that looks more awesome than the protagonist? Think about it. Small bosses in the early stage usually only appear in dozens of chapters and then disappear. You have mentioned it several times and have not even appeared before. Moreover, the setting is that the heir of a family is also a genius. He seems to be more awesome than the protagonist. How about free time? Genius style should not have individual characters overshadowing the protagonist. What you wrote about the old woman in front of you is what a genius should look like. It breaks common sense. There is a great god on this site, Qingquan Ryu Hibiki, who writes about the same type as you. They are both beast masters and geniuses, but his is much better than yours. The protagonist is constantly breaking through other people's cognition. In just a few years, he surpasses the results of countless years of others, until he becomes the strongest. A genius-style protagonist shouldn't have a supporting character who is always on top of him. He should be a short-term target at most, but he should never have a supporting character who doesn't even have a name but feels awesome and is always acting as a backdrop, as if the protagonist doesn't even deserve to know his name.

I thought she was really a beast-controlling girl, but it turned out to be a fanfic of Zhou

This was originally supposed to be a light novel focusing on interaction with girls, but you ended up writing it as a fantasy. Your audience or what we want to see is not these adventures that make you stronger. It's not that it can't happen, but it must not be the main plot, or that it can't be too long. You devote so much space to writing these things, ignoring the characterization of these heroines, and just become stronger. It feels like these heroines are about to become cold statues of strength. The last thing I want to say is that I liked reading it at first, but you ended up going further and further away. If you insist on this writing method, you will disappoint those of us who want to read the light novel content and the interactive content of the heroine. Some people will like your fantasy part, but that is not what people read this book at the beginning. Author, you should probably consider changing the focus of your writing, instead of just fighting monsters and upgrading all the time

Some inconsequential supporting characters take up a huge amount of space, and the fight between the supporting characters is written in great detail. Those who came for the Ark can be withdrawn. This thing does not look like a second creation at all. I put up a sign on Arknights. The male protagonist is disabled for 400 chapters, and the supporting roles in the 400 chapters are estimated to be half as much. It's been so delayed that only 440 chapters have been released w Texas Kelsey Suzuran has a close relationship with the protagonist but there are very few ambiguous plots. This book feels like a tasteless piece of food that is a pity to throw away.

I'm a porridge person, but is this some kind of if line?