The Demon Touches My Head

It's unsystematic, but the pace picks up after the first few chapters. The title is a little unclear now. The life of the demon-subduing emperor would be better if he started from scratch. It would be nice if the first five chapters were condensed into two chapters, which might be more in line with the reading rhythm of current readers. Sometimes the writing is concise and wonderful, and sometimes it is a bit chatty. I hope the quality can be maintained.

You are not allowed to write so beautifully. Now everyone is a poor man. In the future, you will become famous. What should I do?

It's better to call him Bu Tianzi. The artistic conception of this name is good.

The writing is quite good. I don't know why the data is so bleak in the structure of the writing. Sometimes, don't listen too much to readers' opinions. Some people come here to find virtuality in virtuality. If what you write does not conform to the "realistic logic" they imagined, it means you are not good at writing. Change the outline less. The biggest problem with changing the outline too much is that the characters will be OOC. I feel that the author's writing logic should be better than most readers. Even if the rhythm is wrong in some places, it is better than changing the outline and ending up with a four-dimensional image.

The moment I stepped out of the tower, I was inexplicable. They were all fairies of thousands of years. They broke through the defense inexplicably with just a few words. I instantly felt like Long Aotian, but he was really outstanding in the tower.

Real evaluation, the first forty chapters are pretty good, but once you get to the bottom of the tower, everything becomes outrageous? One moment he said that he had to plan carefully, and the next moment he announced his family name. The plot of the fight was even more outrageous. He came up and directly arranged to fight the demon boss. What's going on? Are these big monsters all having nothing to do? You even came to the Divination Department, I'm afraid that others don't know your identity as the Divination Emperor! , I really can't stand it after reading more than fifty chapters.

You can tell from the introduction that you are not my type, and the world rests on your shoulders. If you want me, I will give up and let the world go to hell 🤭

I feel like I can't understand what this book is about now. Very strange. It seems that it wants to gather forces from all parties to participate in the grand event, but the image of the protagonist has become more and more opportunistic and villainous, and the pattern has become smaller. I can't tolerate Elder Zhu who "never does evil", but he hopes that elders who don't do anything will take responsibility. The plot hints that Elder Zhu has a problem, but according to the previous description, it is possible that as long as Elder Zhu went to retreat and ignored the general affairs, the so-called Fu Lu Sect ashram would have collapsed long ago. There is no need to force the Fulu Sect to relocate in this way. No more comments, neither can I.

The last similar book was about Immortality, and the part about joining the WTO was inexplicably written. This book is also written really well by Demon Zhenta, but the first part about joining the WTO, the Fu Lu Sect, is really bad.

The biggest problem with this book is that the expectations are too high every time, but nothing comes out of writing The fairy elephant I had in mind was shattered, and I ended up becoming an elder in the chore hall Thirty-six thunder gods were summoned from the sky, and they killed one and two fools. The same rat demon Later, Sheriff Fang called out to your majesty in fear and went to find the Dragon King, but he only had five taels of silver in his hand, and he still had to pay the tax of fifty taels per person that Commander Fang had set After writing all the big scenes before, he was now surrounded by several villagers and dared not go out

The title of the book has little connection with the content. . It was indeed beautiful when I was in the tower, and my imagination was great, but after I came out of the tower, it felt ordinary again. .

I don't want to see comments on this aspect for the time being. If you are not satisfied with this, please start reading from Chapter 64.

Regardless of the content, does your introduction really have anything to do with the book?

It's not very good. It pulls the hips at the critical moment of cultural level. I'm lucky to be alive in the early stage of release. If it's not about romance, it will collapse. There is no reason when the combat power and world view conflict. It's basically poisonous.

What is this introduction, and does it have anything to do with this book?

The writing is pretty good, but until now I feel like the protagonist still doesn't have a clear path to take. Qianyao County must first solve the monsters. The problem that is raised now is that the environment of the Pig Country is poor, and the people of the Pig Country have a gluttonous appetite. To solve the Pig Country, it must either make a big picture or develop it. The key must fall on the protagonist Tianzi Fu. After all, there are gods, and the gods directly use their help to carry out environmental transformation.

As exciting as the first 35 chapters were, Chapter 36 was so disappointing. The expectation was that the protagonist would come up with some amazing plan to turn the tide, but the result was that he just made a few quips and the pie was over. After that, it was the predictable ordinary cultivation of immortality. Then why didn't I watch anything else?

I think the taste has changed after leaving the tower, mainly because the precarious tension is gone, and the protagonists have begun to show themselves to others.

I thought the male protagonist would turn into a dragon or something, but now this is what I read? The contrast is too big compared to the introduction

The introduction is good, but the writing is verbose and inexplicable. If a newcomer writes like this, this book will be cool. There is no plot conflict at all, it is too dead water.

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