Nightfall: I Cut Through the Wasteland with Traits

The more I watch, the more upset I get; I have to vent. 1. The protagonist is a complete pain in the neck; he faces death every time he goes outside. 2. There's absolutely no planning for his overpowered abilities; so far, the plot has been entirely forced upon him. 3. The so-called "overpowered" wasteland rampage is a joke—there's not a single moment of enjoyment in it!

They couldn't resist adding a plot where the female lead gets noticed and taken away by a powerful figure shortly after the book's release 🤣

Is this what you call decisive? That woman, Xiong Qian, kept babbling on and on. If she were truly decisive, she would have killed her long ago! Your protagonist is like a Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtle—utterly venomous!

He boasts about wanting to "slay his way through the wasteland" while simultaneously expecting the female lead to level up at lightning speed alongside him, even though the female lead's circumstances are worse than the male lead's before he got his cheat code.

Judging from the title, I thought it was a post-apocalyptic wasteland fantasy novel. The very beginning confused me. I initially thought it was annoying when a stupid supporting character would suddenly turn on you and get slapped in the face.

If the protagonist were a monkey, this book would likely have been even more successful. The protagonist goes out into the wilderness, incurs favors from two people, and gets himself into a lot of trouble. In contrast, the monkey follows the protagonist around, effortlessly winning without getting involved, quietly developing its strength in the background. This is the template for a protagonist in a wish-fulfillment novel.

The setting and story of this book are actually quite interesting, but there are too many minor flaws, blemishes, and imperfections. The author's writing style is very "novice-like," and he seems to have fallen into a state of "I thought" and assumptions while writing the book.

Intentionally creating villains won't make the protagonist seem noble; it will only lower the overall quality of your story. Villains can be evil, but they can't be stupid. Like I said before, this novel is too negative; it's disgusting. That's why I abandoned it.

The free chapters were good, but the quality dropped drastically after it was officially released, and it became far too saintly. In a chaotic apocalypse, it constantly makes excuses for its actions, acting more benevolent than people in our peaceful era. A good protagonist should be decisive and ruthless without going against their conscience.

Authors should focus on writing good novels and not cramming in personal opinions or preachy philosophical pronouncements. Everyone knows that; novels are for relaxation, not for learning.