Nightfall: I Cut Through the Wasteland with Traits

The more I look at it, the more uncomfortable I become, and I feel uncomfortable without vomiting. 1. A protagonist with a busy constitution will encounter a death crisis whenever he goes out. 2. There is no plan at all for plug-ins. The plot so far is all about forcing the protagonist to do things. 3. The so-called cheating and killing through the wasteland is just a joke and doesn't bring any fun at all! ! !

Not long after it was released, there was a plot where the heroine was taken away by a big shot🤣

Is this still a decisive killing? That girl, Xiong Qian, has been messing around all the time. If she was really decisive, she would have been killed long ago! Your protagonist is as poisonous as the Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles!

You hold a golden finger and say you want "Kill Across the Wasteland", and you also want the heroine to level up at the speed of light with you. The heroine's conditions are worse than when the hero didn't cheat. I don't know if it's because of youthful illness or because I'm crazy about changing the manga. The heroine was taken away by a big shot. Is this a plot that should appear in a "system novel" in 24 years? Why not? It's normal to have no heroine. Is it okay to write online articles and always think about how great and upright the protagonist is? Thanks to the writing skills of most of your authors, you can write the Dead Wife Douluo. But the writing was more than ten years ago, and the ancient Internet articles said that no matter how many times the male protagonist escapes from death, the entire environment is stable. Are you just playing this in the wasteland? Cao Cao lets go of Guan Yu less happily than your male lead lets go of your female lead. Liu Bei and Zhuge Liang are more obsessed with each other than your male lead and your female lead.

When I saw the title, I thought it was a post-apocalyptic wasteland novel But I was confused at the beginning. I originally thought that it was a very disturbing plot for a supporting character to show off his intelligence and get slapped in the face. It turned out that the even more disturbing plot was that the villain made a fool of himself for ten chapters, but nothing happened and he was finally solved by the enemy. The protagonist can either put a knife to someone's head to make her lose her bb, or even kill the whole person, who is not ruthless and unstable. Or just talk to her and let her understand that her weak thinking logic should be hidden in the sewers of the sewer, and you can be happy in private. If you dare to put it on the table, you will be exposed to death and people will be sprayed all over your body. But the reality is that the protagonist can't fire a single shot, which makes me choke and can't breathe. Looking at the author's description of the novel, I feel that he wants to depict the darkness of human nature and create a more realistic tone that is so dark and severe. I don't think it's okay if you don't like it. But then I thought about all the people who were against the protagonist. But the heroine came back alive from a certain death situation and even woke up. After reading the book review, I was even offered to a big shot to become his apprentice. Speechless for a moment. It makes you happy but you don't want to make everyone happy. It really makes you do the real thing but you are not willing to write dead people. I want both a realistic tone and a happy ending with a happy family reunion. It cannot touch the souls of helpless readers who have a deep understanding of reality, nor can it touch the hearts of emotional readers who have long been numbed by the cumbersome plot.

This book would have done better if the main character had been a monkey. The protagonist went out for a trip to the wilderness, owed two favors, and got into trouble. On the other hand, the monkey follows the protagonist to win, does not get involved in anything, and hides behind his back to grow up. This is the template that the protagonist of a cool novel should have.

The setting and story of this book are actually quite interesting, but there are too many minor flaws. The author's writing style is very "new" and he fell into a state of "I thought" when writing the book. The author only writes from the perspective of knowing everything as an author. The settings, foreshadowing, and character traits are all clear, but the readers don't know. The author takes it for granted, and the readers will find many violations and unreasonableness. Due to the author's writing skills, this book was originally written as food, but now it is basically just hay. Reading this book is basically the state of "it develops this way because the plot requires it, don't think about why". The author was like this when he wrote this book. He needed to develop the plot, so he just found a reason and wrote it without thinking carefully about whether it was reasonable or not, and how the readers would react after reading it. To put it simply, you can't read this book with your brain in mind. The story setting is quite interesting, apocalyptic, crazy, weird and scary monsters, tight living environment, what a pity. By the way, using exclamation points like crazy is a common behavior of new authors, like touching their noses and smiling bitterly.

Deliberately writing some clowns will not make the protagonist taller, it will only lower the level of your whole story. The villain can be bad but not stupid. As you said, the negative emotions in your novel are too heavy and disgusting. This is the reason why I gave up the book.

The free chapters are good, but the quality has seriously declined since it was released, and it is too holy. It is a chaotic post-apocalypse that always makes excuses for what it does, and it is a good person than in our peaceful times. It is the protagonist's good character to be decisive in killing without going against one's heart. You have to explain everything and why the protagonist is so kind when he does this. It disgusts me to death. Now I feel that I have lost my subscription. The purpose of novels is to tell stories and not to rely on your explanation. Just talk about the character at the beginning. The latter part is that one is water, and the other is disgusting.

When an author writes a novel, he should write it well. Don't stuff it with a bunch of personal stuff, don't make a bunch of preachy philosophical principles and other messy things. Who doesn't understand? Reading novels is for relaxing, not for studying.