Swallowed Star: Starting with the Great Nirvana

The writing is very good, but later on I decided to become a licking dog, already at the level of a planet, and even went to live with Luo Feng's parents as neighbors.

If you want to be funny and genius, don't come to Mahanirvana Why do readers want to see Mahanirvana? It must be for the sake of civilization that will fall and martyrs shed their blood If you want a genius to travel through the past, the soldiers will become clowns, the warriors will become clowns, the readers will become clowns, and the author will also become a clown If you want a funny genius, change the timeline

Has the author not read the original work? Isn't Isadore the Speaker of the HR Alliance? When did you become a powerful member of parliament?? 🥵

It's not that you can't lick Luo Feng, after all, Luo Feng is a really nice person. But this protagonist is completely a nanny. She is really afraid of melting if she holds it in her mouth.

Don't start making points when practicing writing, it's a waste of everyone's time. . . Just show it to your relatives and friends.

I really can't stand it anymore, such a self-righteous and boring mastermind!

The plot is no different from the original work, the writing is sparse, and the fighting scenes are too stretched.

When writing about Maha Nirvana, write about Maha Nirvana carefully. After writing only a few chapters of Maha Nirvana, you will write about Luo Feng's connection with the universe. It's because there is no material for Maha Nirvana or there is no way to edit it.

The identification is complete, the author has not read the original work

There is no cure for ideological problems. For example, hating the ZF is problematic in the first place, but changing it is even more problematic. Goodbye.