Period: The Rise of a Great Power Begins with Industry

The most disgusting thing about these kinds of novels is that the timeline moves so slowly. Some of them have hundreds of chapters, but only a year has passed, while a whole bunch of research and development achievements have been made. There's absolutely no sense of immersion or engagement.

The idea is sound, the process is ideal, but the timeline is absurd. If you want to write about courtyard houses, you should at least do some research! The timeline is a complete mess. I'll attach a diagram for you; see for yourself if it's ridiculous! Look at how ridiculous the timeline in the novel is. Yu Haitang appears in chapter sixteen, and she's the factory beauty? She was only eleven or twelve years old then. Could someone that age work in a factory?

The writing is really poor; it's a forced and unnatural application, completely inconsistent with the social context of the time. Key flaws: 1. As early as the late 1950s, my country established the Shanghai Radio Research Institute and Electronic Equipment Factory, specializing in radar and electronic component research and production. 2.

I've watched it several times, but I can't get past the beginning. Every time I get stuck on the part where the protagonist is developing a fertilizer production line capable of producing tens of thousands of tons of nitrogen fertilizer per day, I can't continue.

Even though it's a historical novel, and I skipped all the chapters involving private ownership, I still couldn't get through it. The author portrays the 1950s as a time when privatization was being aggressively promoted to generate revenue for scientific research. In the author's eyes, only privatization could build a complete industrial chain, and only private ownership could generate profit. The author is completely ignorant of national power and the historical context.

We can't be so naive! Three thousand third-generation fighter jets in the 1960s and 70s? Does the US have that many F-16s, F-15s, F-18s, and F-22s in active service today? Are we going to starve our country?

A tech-themed light novel, nothing else requires brainpower! The tech leader behind this major breakthrough still lives in a traditional courtyard house—you could practically kill him even if you were a spy! Moreover, letting a top-notch technical expert stay in that run-down factory

The author seems to lack understanding of industry and hasn't done their research properly. They've randomly picked up a bunch of technical terms and are just throwing them in. For example, we all know Qin Shi Huang and the Han Dynasty. But if you insist that Qin Shi Huang was the emperor of the Han Dynasty, then it's unreadable. I couldn't continue reading after a few chapters.

When you write a book, you can't just follow the timeline exactly, because you're a time traveler, a reincarnated person. You've brought too many changes and technologies; the timeline is no longer the same as the original one. You have to consider what your creations will change, what changes it will make to the existing order, and then develop those ideas.

There's absolutely no sense of confidentiality. It's like anyone can access the main character's project materials and information. Not only can people not involved in the project freely enter and exit the factory, but they can also look at any documents without any permission.