Comprehensive Comic: This God of Death Is Too Self-Disciplined

Don't write about Demon Destroyer, Wanjie Novice Village, it's rubbish and ugly.

The protagonist's system is very inconsistent with the protagonist's personality. You must know that this system clearly allows the protagonist to become a five-transformation warrior. But the protagonist only likes to practice swords. So it is better to have a kendo system. And the protagonist is too heavily affected by his predecessor. The protagonist became a sword fanatic because his memory was not awakened when he was reincarnated. The memory of his predecessor is gone, leaving only obsession. It can be said that a normal person feels like becoming a sword fanatic.

I don't know what I want to write about. I would write about Demon Slayer in the copy. Isn't that right? Is Demon Slayer's combat power enough to rival that of a Shinigami? Just write, you can't help it if you insist on blowing up Demon Slayer, but 26 chapters of time travel and 70 chapters of plot are not even halfway through yet. Why, you want to write a 200-chapter Demon Slayer? Both watery and embarrassing

There are more than twenty chapters of Bleach and fifty chapters of Demon Slayer. Now they are one to two in length. Readers must have rushed in because you mainly wrote about Bleach. As a result, you wrote a copy that was so long that they didn't dare to think how long it would take to write it next. If the author insists on destroying Mukai, how many chapters will it take? It is better to wait for the protagonist to quickly improve in the world of death and destroy it as quickly as possible. If it has to be consumed slowly, the impression will be too bad Secondly, if you open the pattern after learning the Breath of the Sun, then I can't think of a reason to come back next time. I have learned everything I need to learn, after all. The protagonist's time is so wasted, not many readers like to read it I think the best thing is to leave when you pass the assessment. In this case, there will be a clear training method in the world of death, and you will be greatly improved. The remaining Breath of the Sun, Spots, etc. Will be learned together next time and Wuhan will be dealt with. The impression will be much better. The current plot seems to be dragging. Anyway, the author should hurry up and write the Shinigami, and leave a chance to return to Demon Slayer. (Actually, I think Demon Slayer doesn't have many valuable things, just the breathing method, markings, and the world. The key is that when the breathing method is practiced to a high level, the latter two will come naturally)

The God of Death fights with spiritual pressure, and swordsmanship is the icing on the cake at best. If you practice swordsmanship, you won't even be able to break through the hollow steel skin. You have a hammer.

The god of death will destroy ghosts? You want to become an immortal and practice martial arts, right?

You really like Demon Slayer, Bleach has only 26 chapters and Demon Slayer has written more than 40 chapters Is the next one you want to go to be the Elbow Technique Refight? Elbow Gojo Satoru with a Zanpakutō and then say the world is different and you can't stop? And then was defeated by the clown Gojo Satoru?

The protagonist's talent is poor, the system has no bonuses, and there is no time to gain meat. What can the protagonist do when the original plot begins? Is it because the original protagonist is called 666?

To be honest, your swordsmanship is good. I won't compete with you. I'll just give you a blow with my swastika.

I have no interest in the plot of Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba. When will it end?

The protagonist chooses to fight with swordsmanship, which seems very abrupt given the context. Is it because his obsession before awakening his memory affected him? You might as well write that he liked swordsmanship in his previous life and was obsessed with it, so that he wouldn't appear as mindless as he does now. Is this how the first chapter is written? Masaka "Did you do it unintentionally or on purpose?" "On purpose!"

Demon Slayer has souls and reincarnated Shinigami, and it takes almost seconds to enter. You have to write about the differences in the world. You have to come to this kind of novice village. I don't have any objection to you starting with a Zanpakutō elbow attack on both sides of the stall.

Why did it take so long to write the plot of Demon Slayer? For people in the Shinigami world, just dozens of copies of Demon Slayer can be speed-passed.

The god of death disappears and the ghosts are exterminated. Is this really good? I wonder

It's too long-winded. It's a running account and it fails to grasp the key points. The first chapter is so confusing.

Beginning in Soul Society and taking the Yakuza-ryu system to the world

The plot of Demon Slayer is stinky and long 😅

What the hell? Are you still watching Demon Slayer when it goes on sale tomorrow? I can't understand...

The Demon Slayer Breathing Technique is just an internal skill, and it is a demonic internal skill that hurts oneself. It is not even a high martial arts skill. The god of death comes and walks sideways...

Butterfly Ninja

1. Level LV0-LV10 ordinary person LV11-LV20 college student level LV21-LV40 team member level LV41-LV55 chief officer level LV56-LV70 deputy captain level LV71-LV90 captain level ( Under normal circumstances, the limit of Shinigami pressure is LV90) LV91-LV99 have ha levels LV100 Spirit King level 2, high or low spiritual pressure Because I never think that high spiritual pressure means strong strength (unless there is a gap in levels) When there is a gap in spiritual pressure levels, spiritual pressure Pressure is absolute. For example, it is basically impossible for deputy captain-level reiatsu to defeat captain-level reiatsu. This is true no matter what ability is used. Rules or skills are not enough. So my point of view is that since the Thousand-Year Blood War Aizen uses reiatsu as a special combat power, it may be more outstanding in theory, but even if it is more, it is the same. Levels Of course this is just my personal opinion. I don't object to your opinion that Ichigo's spiritual pressure is higher. It should be a matter of who has more spiritual pressure at a level In addition, I have never written that Aizen is stronger than Ichigo 3. Shallow attack cannot be used to kill demons in Demon Slayer This is a setting problem. Because if the setting is universal, then the protagonist is also a spirit body. If he goes to other worlds, there will be a big problem. Theoretically, they cannot see the protagonist This makes it impossible to write, so you can only choose to use a different world view. For example, there are no spirit children in other worlds, so the protagonist will transform into a body, and Qianda will also transform accordingly, etc... Generally speaking, I will try to write in accordance with the world view of whichever world I go to. ♾️, if there are more questions in the future, I will update the answers here. Unreasonable places such as level settings can be raised and can be changed if necessary.

At least the writing in the Bleach fanfic is pretty good... It's just that with this amount of updates, it's hard to avoid moisture in the fanfic, so we can only rely on a certain amount to suppress the moisture content... Personally, I think this is quite critical to the author's income and the prospects of the book...

It's too time-consuming. Anyway, I'm not interested in such detailed daily life.

Butterfly Ninja

Reiatsu is not necessarily the measure of everything. 98 said that if you are capable enough, you can ignore the gap.

The more I watch, the less interesting it becomes. I feel like I'm just playing house.

It's okay, but the progress of the copy is okay A little faster

Come on, look forward to Sister Hua's torment play

Skip to chapter 26 and start reading pretty well.