From the Unknown Island to Penglai Island

The upgrade of this island does not give back to the island owner at all. It is a world of the jungle. How long do you think the island owner can live? It is a miracle that the island owner I see now is alive.

I have a question. There are so many people on your island. Can you tell me to upgrade the island when there is no one there? And every time there is such a big movement, spiritual energy fields are created at every turn. With the protagonist's upgrade speed, why does their family need to exist? I would like to give you a suggestion. It is better to set up like this. It is better to directly cross the world of survival and cultivation into the world of immortality, and develop the world of cultivation into a hierarchical shelter. One person can do it.

Why does the protagonist insist on choosing the family's ordinary island? Can't you go out by yourself and choose a hidden place? They are all ordinary anyway, and the protagonist has developed the island and it belongs to the family. Others can kick you out directly.

In less than a year, I went from the first level of Qi training to the seventh level of Qi training. This is a big secret. You would have been killed long ago. You're still jumping around, do you think others can't guess it?

The pace is too slow. If you want to write about the protagonist who relies on running the island to develop, you must either watch him live a leisurely life, or watch him improve his cultivation step by step with his golden fingers. In the first part, the hidden dangers of several major families to the Chu family are written so early, and in the later part of the main character, he only writes about the things in front of him, and mentions them from time to time in the middle. Isn't this to whet the reader's appetite?

The subject matter is interesting, the writing is average

A new book by an old author is guaranteed to be updated to millions as long as someone reads it. Follow-up reading determines the recommendation of the book. Please help me. Please.

I would like to make a small suggestion (a personal opinion, just based on my feelings, and does not mean anything). When upgrading the island, you should add some Buffs to the protagonist, improve talents or strength, etc. Otherwise, the protagonist has poor talents. No matter how strong the aura of the island is, he will only be able to take advantage in the early stage. Just like mathematics, if a person with a very low IQ and a person with a very high IQ are in the same class and taught by the same teacher, they will not be able to learn it. The protagonist has been relying on elixirs and monster meat to practice, but the elixirs are three parts poisonous. I don't know how the author set up the elixirs, but unless the protagonist can solve the problem of elixirs, his strength will not be improved at all in the later stage. Now that the Chu family has this patriarch, it can be temporarily protected, but there will always be jealous people in a family, and there are families and sects that are stronger than the Chu family. It is impossible for the protagonist to quickly improve his strength without the bonus of talent improvement. This is unreasonable and will easily break the setting later in the writing.

It was readable from the beginning, but the pretentious and slap-in-the-face plot in more than 40 chapters instantly lowered the quality of the book by one or two levels.

The island owner's strength is still too low. If he recruits a large group of people who are stronger than the island owner, the risk factor will increase greatly.

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The plot of forcing so many mortals to enter the island is not good

Updates are too slow and I don't want to vote monthly.

Chuhe? This name sounds very obscene and perverted when you hear it 😃😃