Hogwarts: What Evil Could the Obscurial Have?

Someone actually wrote The Vampire Diaries. I really cried. This is the first time I saw an author writing about this world The author must not stop updating. Keep writing. So far, it seems to be quite satisfactory, but the content feels a little single. I think the author can write about the protagonist slowly practicing magic and mastering wandless casting. After all, if the levitating spell can be used, other things are also possible Also, it is really good so far. Guys, you can check it out.

The writing is very good. I watched it yesterday and caught up to the latest version. The descriptions of various characters are very close to the original drama. It can be seen that the author is very careful! Come on!

Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on!

Alas, I always forget who the main character is while reading this book, and I lose my wand at the beginning. I thought the protagonist would have a qualitative improvement after getting the wand back. But the results are really disappointing. Can't we give him a few more spells? Is it necessary to be so picky about Sosou?

The combination of The Vampire Diaries and The Witcher is my sweet spot, but the writing is too poor, so I'll just keep it for now. I can understand that due to the logic of the plot, I won't write to overwhelm the balance of combat power first (not to suppress combat power), and set the background of the protagonist to be a dabbler in magic, an Obscurus who has never gone to school, and has his own problems, etc. I even think this setting is quite good, but the writing is too poor. Cheng Chifeng has a power system with a different world view. As a Harry Potter wizard who has obviously better magical luck than The Vampire Diaries, the protagonist also knows the plot and has the dual advantage of intelligence and strength. Not to mention that it is very exciting to use his strength, but he can only use 1 point out of 10 points, and the remaining 9 points depend on the author. The results are nondescript and always go wrong, making the protagonist more and more stupid and unbearable. This problem existed before I got the wand, but the problem still persisted after I got the wand back. It also made the lack of the wand, which had concealed dozens of chapters in the early stage, become a poisonous point, because it allowed people to discover that the protagonist's series of deficiencies were never due to lack of strength, but simply because of his own stupidity. The increase in power (it did not show that there was much increase...) Could not change the problem of the protagonist. Another problem with poor writing is that the plot is stilted. In the latest chapter, the author deliberately arranged for his friends to fall into the dangerous plot of the original work without knowing the plot. The protagonist, who is a wand-retrieval wizard, endured the fire and rushed into the fire to save people. After rescuing his friends, he started to chase the enemy. After two or three chapters, he kept expressing his determination to kill. When he arrived in New Orleans, he suddenly figured it out, let it go, and started to deal with his own problems. To put it bluntly, he wanted to arrange the plot for the protagonist to go to New Orleans. . . What are you doing all this time? The protagonist chases a dog for a while, then suddenly kills him without the other person's knowledge. As a result, he is run away. He chases the dog like a dog for two or three chapters. Finally, he looks like he must put an end to it. Is this the result? The protagonist of the plot is just like a clown. When I arrived in New Orleans, I knew that there was Davina in the plot, and that casting spells was prohibited here. I met a witch who asked for medicine to save my grandma. When he went home, he cast a spell without any help. Seeing that she was afraid, he didn't care. Now because of his casting, the witch and grandma were found and killed by the vampire. He arranged for the protagonist to come over and look at each other when the witch died. He also said in the narration that he thought he would only deal with himself, but he also attacked the witch's family. Isn't this a lack of consideration? Isn't this just a living beast who willfully acts to harm others? He also looked like he was seeking revenge. It was not a deliberate arrangement. The grandfather and grandson should have spit on the protagonist's face instead of the plot's supporting character. This is the current progress, and I don't know if it can be better in the future. Even if a good idea is written like this, it's hard to stand.

I was a little confused when I saw chapter 33. After traveling through chapter 33, the protagonist's strength has not improved at all, he has not done any magic research, and there is no conjecture about magic. After getting the magic book, he can't use it in one sentence, and there is no other description. All the battle scenes are just one floating spell. It seems that there are 3 battles and 3 floating spells. The plot is basically the same as the original plot. All the main plots are not centered on the protagonist, they are all passive participation. 90% Of all plot arrangements are interactions with people, that is, constant chatting. If you condense it, it feels like people are constantly praising the protagonist for being good-looking and charming. The protagonist is a wizard and has an identity. The protagonist's floating spell is really powerful. No more.

I was feeling depressed throughout the whole process, and kept emphasizing how awesome the protagonist Obscur was, but he kept being walked around by the characters in the plot.

When will the vampire end? I'm not very interested. And there is no magic show, just sacrifices to save who...

I feel like it's well written. It's the first time I've seen someone write about The Vampire Diaries. I'm looking forward to more updates from the author. Also, can the protagonist be given more magic? 😄 I want to see the protagonist's magic performance

The protagonist knows a floating spell, which is so boring 🥱

Can we add more Harry Potter magic to the protagonist? There are too few people who know it! There were only three of them going back and forth (the levitating spell, the petrifying spell, the fire spell) and one unsuccessful unlocking spell.

I am threatened by this and plotted by that every day, and then the other party is still alive and well. It seems that he went to take revenge, but no one was killed. The protagonist is also a coward. I really don't have the patience to watch it.

I started watching The Vampire Diaries and The Originals when I was in junior high school, but I'm thinking about the dramas I watched before 😭 Write as much as you can.

The Vampire Diaries is one of the few American TV series that I have completely followed. I feel that the author's writing is quite good.

It's very interesting. I've also fantasized about wizards from The Vampire Diaries and magic stories in other worlds! The author writes very well! Looking forward to further development! Author update soon

All I can say is that there are reasons for poor grades.

Give me a suggestion! In The Vampire Diaries, you can allow other witches to connect with the protagonist, extract the Obscurus, or go to the Harvest Festival (it seems to be called this) to release some of their energy.

It feels like it's getting slower and slower. Isn't it a eunuch?

I read a few chapters and had no idea what it was about. Without reading the title, I thought it was a Western fantasy.

Although some wands were not as poisonous as before, but their combat power was restored and improved later, and they even tortured Elijah, the ancestor of the vampires. It looked good. I hope readers will be more sensible and give me two more chapters.

Mo Ran, when can I come out and kill everyone?

Oops, I'm in exam month, so I read it once a week, only 8 chapters, it's too slow, I'm done with it

It was okay to read it in one go before, but now I feel lonely reading it chapter by chapter.

Why don't you continue writing? ? ? ?