Mechanical Rhythm of Magic

There are more than 50 chapters in the first 60 chapters, which can be considered a complete plot! The design is so exquisite that I couldn't help but play a lot. After the protagonist came to a different world, he came into contact with a unique superpower system and acquired his first skill "Chicken Run". But behind this seemingly ridiculous skill is a deep understanding of the past life. The contrast shows the charm of this novel's superpower system, and the protagonist also gains a motive - the pursuit of magic. Around this motive, the protagonist showed his extraordinary charm. Because of this motive, several forces expressed their different understandings of this superpower system, making the system more three-dimensional. At the same time, because the protagonist is extraordinary in magic, he is admired and plotted by all parties. But the handling here is very good. First of all, although the protagonist is plotted by all parties, he insists on his own motivation of pursuing magic. This allows the protagonist to be plotted, but it will not damage the protagonist's image. It has a kind of "He is strong and he is strong, and the breeze touches the hills" spirit. Secondly, the person who plotted against the protagonist was dealt with, a political machine beauty (when the protagonist asked her if she was tired, she was given some sympathetic attributes), an old man who is not shy, and a strong person who is strong and disrespectful, so as to eliminate the reader's resentment to the greatest extent. In the end, the protagonist was plotted because of his extraordinary skills. In the end, he surpassed the plot because of his extraordinary skills and played a role in a big event. At present, it looks scattered but not messy, and the design is exquisite. Are this author's previous works also like this? All in all, I'm looking forward to the author's future arrangements.

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When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the little praise begins to sound, and the number of dead harvests begins to decrease. When you finish the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voices of praise will become louder and louder. When you are ten o'clock, the great Confucian's debate on scriptures is deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty, the memory of the bookworm has a place for you. Even in a long life, your name will leave dazzling traces. Updating may not solve all difficulties, but more than 90% of problems come from insufficient updates. So, don't stop. Update, update, update (copied and pasted, I don't have that much ink)

When I reached chapter 50, I couldn't stand it anymore. It was written too quickly and too messily It felt like a dish of random stew was served in a hurry, but it was not cooked through The protagonist seems to have his own ideas. He seems to have strong insights from time to time, but he is pushed away throughout the whole process. He is very similar to the mysterious clown of fate. He can't resist even if he wants to, but the author's writing is not in place, which makes people look very awkward and bored.

I've opened a new book. I thought I could read a Harry Potter book.

I heard that the author is going to write Harry Potter after finishing it, and I would like to say a few words specifically, hoping that the author can read it 😁 After reading novels for so many years, The Gray Wizard is the first novel that I have fully subscribed to. After reading it, other Harry fans can't stand it 😥. It should be difficult for the author to surpass himself (after all, he has spread my imagination too far, and it is difficult to grasp the balance between the original work and the second setting. In addition, I just I like the author's imagination, but don't compliment the author's plot 😃), and writing Harry Potter fan fiction is better than writing other novels or animations, so that the author's imagination can be used 😃 I am very convinced of the author in terms of perfecting the completion setting of the original work 👍 I also have two suggestions. I hope the author will also change his preference to write about the protagonist's previous life, and then come back to understand and upgrade. This is very interesting. As for killing, the protagonists of the author's novels don't like killing, or there is always a reason for the protagonist not to kill. It doesn't mean that the protagonist must kill decisively, but just wants it to be clean and neat. Not all characters must be retained. No matter how good, rare or unique the opponent's ability is, first of all, he is your enemy, the one who wants to kill you! Especially when you were still a weakling at the beginning of the story, you worked hard and finally defeated your opponent. Instead of finishing the last hit, you learned from the opponent (killing the old wizard is very enjoyable, but what about the original openings of the following books? I don't know whether the protagonist is stupid and bold or a man who is obsessed with gaining extraordinary power) Finally, I hope the author can summarize the experience of these books. Why does the Gray Wizard perform well? Why did the subsequent original works perform poorly? This is not something that can be summed up by just one factor: "fan fiction". There must be other problems. To sum up, I would like to break out of the original thinking mode. I really don't recommend writing Harry Potter fan fiction. I hope that the results of the next book will explode and hit the top ten in the next month's vote list ✊

The writing is very rough and there are too few prototypes. It is still recommended that the author uses games or other worlds as prototypes for processing. It is too difficult for one person to complete the world setting. The game world or other mature settings are all developed by the team.

I've been reading it since the first Gray Wizard. The author is very creative and the power system is also very novel. But the second original work began to have rhythm problems. The plot processing was not smooth enough. The protagonist has been dealing with enemies that are much stronger than him, and he cannot experience the feeling of fighting wits. He has been suppressed from all aspects, and there is no sense of satisfaction like online novels. The reviews were getting worse day by day, and I gave up reading it halfway. I haven't read it for a year, but it's already the fourth book. Has the author improved his ability to control rhythm now?

I would like to ask if the male protagonist likes Fiona. If he doesn't like Fiona, he will do everything to her. Moreover, he can't feel the respect of a spellcaster who is eager to gain spellcasting talent. Also, why did the protagonist kill a group of Dune Giant Worms and Kuku divided the protagonist's property. It seems very awkward for no reason.

This mechanic is acting like a psion, a psychic in a mechanic's holster?

Support the author, an old fan since the Gray Wizard

The setting is interesting, but not that exciting.

Coming from the Gray Wizard, it is now the first to be read and support the author 🙂🙂🙂

? Didn't he become a eunuch after defrauding a lot of money? What the hell

Those who have been able to follow you till now are all your loyal readers. Apart from anything else, we can learn from any mistakes we make and correct them after learning. It's not like you have no bright spots, it's really not difficult to change now. Your plot is incoherent, not simply incoherent, but you have certain flaws. The place where you should always be happy is not cool enough, that's the problem. You can ask your editor, he is an expert

In the name of the sacred binary, loudly praise Omnisiah, and all glory be given to the God of all opportunities! May the gears of loyalty never rust!!! Ring the bell once! Push the lever to activate the piston and pump. Ring the bell twice! Push the button to start the engine, ignite the turbine and breathe life into it. Ring the bell three times! Sing in unison, praising the God of all opportunities! From the mediocrity of thought, Omnisiah, save us! From the lies of the infidels, circuit, protect us! From the wrath of the beast, steel, protect us! From the temptation of minced meat, silica, purify us! From the ravages of the Destroyer, Machine Soul, protect us! From this creature's rotten prison, Mechanicus, set us free! Omnisiah! Omnisiah! Omnisiah! Omnisiah! There is no unchanging truth in flesh and blood, only decay. There is no lasting strength in flesh and blood, only weakness. There is no eternal stability in flesh and blood, only decay. There is no certainty in flesh and blood, except death. From the mediocrity of thought, Omnisiah, save us! From the lies of the infidels, circuit, protect us! From the wrath of the beast, steel, protect us! From the temptation of minced meat, silica, purify us! From the ravages of the Destroyer, Machine Soul, protect us! From this creature's rotten prison, Mechanicus, set us free! Omnisiah! Omnisiah! Omnisiah! Omnisiah!

Life is the vector The soul is the cause of life Perception is the ability to acquire the value of knowledge Intellect is the understanding of knowledge Perception is the basis of intelligence Understanding is the right path to understanding Understanding is the key to everything Ohm Messiah knows everything and understands everything -Warning- Alien machinery is a misinterpretation of the right path The soul is the conscience of consciousness Only the Ohm Messiah can give a soul Knowledge without a soul is the enemy of all things Ancient knowledge cannot be questioned The machine soul guards ancient knowledge The body is fallible, and rituals respect the machine soul. To destroy the ritual is to destroy the faith, knowledge is the supreme embodiment of divinity, and all other creatures (basically limited to humans) and technology are the embodiment of this divinity, and therefore have sacredness. Under this belief, a person's value only depends on the total amount of knowledge that person has, and this person's body is just a simple organic machine that can preserve this knowledge==Preface to the Holy Code of the Mechanicus== We know that every passing life form is a gear in the great mechanism. Get rid of the frail flesh and receive the glory of the Machine God. We know that the great secrets that the Mechanicus reveals to his followers will eclipse the weaknesses of mortals. Our hands can create everything in the universe. Knowledge is everlasting. Knowledge is solemn and sacred. Knowledge is power. Knowledge is hope.

No, it ended after a few days of not watching? !

Brother, don't give up, I'm chasing this book of yours

When the steam engine developed into the punk era, wasn't it the internal combustion engine? All are purely mechanical kinetic energy

When can I write another Harry Potter fanfic?

Really good, the angle is very beautiful

It made me go crazy... I felt like I had watched Harry Potter in an hour, and I couldn't move my head.

Fiona, the Shameless character?

I like this book so much, the spirit of research and inquiry in it, and the interesting but rigorous world view setting.

The subject matter and system are quite good, but I just had the same feeling after reading it. It's so messy… He doesn't look like an old author~