Black Myth Starts from Langlang Mountain

It is recommended that the author refer to the names of the original novel of Journey to the West and the names of Xiao Yaohe in Black Mythology when choosing the names of monsters. That would be very interesting. For example, Benboba, Baboben, Yunliwu, Wuliyun. Such inverted names have the flavor of Journey to the West.

The protagonist is a bit putting the cart before the horse. He doesn't want to use his golden fingers to improve his strength in the dangerous world. All he thinks about is doing business, being a nanny, and sharing any good things with others. He is really a good person and a living Lei Feng!

The first few pictures are quite good, but the more I look at them, the more my brows get tighter. They are pretentious, literary, truthful, good and beautiful, including always emphasizing that the body-building technique is a magic skill. The meaning behind the words is to look down on it. What qualifications do you have to talk about magic skills? Being able to strengthen yourself is an immortal method, but It's a pity that the front is good. The most important thing is that the body-building skills are spread everywhere. Why don't you tell others that you still have a system? You still have to save the world and stand side by side with the sky. Your daily friendship management is good in urban writing, but writing it in Black Monkey can only be like a tiger and not an anti-dog! ! !

If Ao Li is not killed, will she still be the heroine? She's already snatching the skills, but she's just looking at how pretty she is. I don't have any problem with you saying that the cat is the heroine. I really don't like Ao Li, who screams and kills her whenever she comes up. The protagonist is like a dog in front of her.

(The following are personal feelings and speculations) The plot writing is all online, but the handling of individual plots will be a bit picky for readers. Some people will think it is a poisonous point, and some will not. Because the perspective of the author and the reader are different, from the reader's perspective, the sense of substitution is given priority, so there is a hamster mentality of keeping good things for myself, and a crisis mentality of what if I pass the good things to others, what if someone stabs me in the back. From the author's point of view, the story should be given priority. He knows the process and the ending. He will not develop the above two psychology because he pays too much attention to the sense of substitution, because the author knows whether the supporting character will backstab, and also knows how many trump cards the protagonist will have later. Therefore, there will be a plot in the article where the protagonist, the monkey, generously passes on the top skills given by the system to many people.

There is no big problem in giving people to people. The key is that the protagonist's level is too low. If you give it to people, they will turn around and disperse.

The overall feeling is okay, but I have an affair with a female monster at the beginning, and I also like to teach others about magical powers and cultivation methods. I have no awareness of exposure and unknown risks. I don't like these three aspects. Human energy is limited, and the things that can be arranged in a plot are also limited. The author has arranged a long description of comedy, love, teaching skills, and systematic lottery, etc., So the actual plot advancement, fighting and reasonable logic will be much different. This is a flaw and cannot be avoided.

Chapter 20: I can't hold on anymore

Since Black Monkey was launched online, there have been a lot of people writing about Journey to the West, but they all started before and after Journey to the West with the help of game traffic. To be honest, there are not many books with such a pure Black Monkey world view story line, and even fewer can be read. There are basically no problems with this book until the seventh chapter. It is quite good. Come on, the author, and I will order it all if you dare to update it.

When I saw Chapter 36 of the robbed exercise, I stopped reading and withdrew. I deserved to be robbed.

It feels like the protagonist lacks the drive to become stronger and has no sense of urgency. However, the background world is very cruel and the overall fragmentation is a bit serious.

As a pseudo-man of destiny, the protagonist actually didn't work hard to upgrade in the early stage. Instead, he formed a clique, formed a shady society, and gave away his top-notch skills to his good friends? . I am not afraid that top bosses will go down to capture the protagonist's younger brothers and go back to search for their souls. Even if the protagonist's destiny is deceived, the problem is that your friends do not have such an extraordinary destiny. It cannot be said that the protagonist will not have the calculations of fairies and demons. Books are food and fodder, you can read them. The protagonist focuses on sincerity for sincerity. Regardless of the opponent's level of cultivation, he just talks about the start, just like Naruto. The problem is that there is no true friendship in Black Myth. Even Sun Wukong is just a few true friends (Sun Wukong is a clique type in the early stage of the human world and the heaven). When fighting in the heaven, no one helps, everyone basically talks about interests and avoids risks) Learn from Yang Jian to separate the empire On the one hand, first of all, you are a relative of the Jade Emperor, and secondly, you are invincible in battle. Secondly, you have to obey the orders of the heaven. It is just a matter of words. Black Myth is still Journey to the West. At the beginning, the great sage is chased by Yang Jian (regardless of the level of combat power, just say that Yang Jian actually listens to his uncle, and it is not the plot of the Lotus Lantern) Generally speaking, the book is okay. After all, there is only one black myth type novel on the Internet, the niche fairy grass.

Let me talk about the conclusion first. I agree that the highlight book written by a previous book friend is definitely a good book. It can even be said that it is the best book among the few written about the Black Monkey world view. However, it is not an exaggeration to choose readers. First of all, readers who accept the Black Monkey worldview full of conspiracy theories and power games, and accept the core of Black Monkey's resistance will definitely fall in love with this book, because the author's plot processing and logical self-consistency are absolutely exquisite. For example: in the latest plot, the appearance of the little yellow dragon, the author did not choose Station B to transform the Sidu Dragon God into the "Flying Dragon Staff", fearing that the spirit mountain The mainstream speculation of encirclement and suppression and hiding in Tibet instead chooses to explain that the journey to the west is the action of the East and West Heavens to carve up the Nanzhan Continent. The Jinghe Dragon King and his family occupied most of the water system of the Nanzhan Continent and blocked the road from the East and West Heavens. Especially when they joined the scripture-seeking team and took refuge in Lingshan in disguise, they replaced the Jinghe Dragon King as the Eight Dragons and Guangli Bodhisattva. The plot of the Jinghe River's management rights is very good, and it is also in line with Hei's urine. Then, fans of trans-historical fairy tales who like some power and hegemony will definitely find it interesting. There are many plots in which the protagonist is good at using his brain to seize the enemy's weaknesses since he was a child, so that the weak can defeat the strong through strategies. The feeling of having an online IQ is indeed very refreshing. I actually don't agree with what many book friends say, "Xianxia is pure cultivation and powerful enough to challenge the gods and Buddhas in the sky." I don't agree with that. I've read too many of those cool articles, and it's good to change the taste of the same thing. Moreover, Xianxia developed from martial arts, and it's okay for Xianxia to have powerful plots. As for the plot that many people criticize about establishing forces and dividing the resources of Kung Fu, it mainly focuses on the idea that if you are weak, you should take care of yourself, and if you are strong, you should help the world. I also found this point difficult at first, but now that I look back, it is actually the author's foreshadowing. First of all, the conflict between the author's setting of "Nine Transformations of Yuan Gong can self-absorb spiritual energy for practice" and the Black Monkey mainstream's ability to seize other people's spiritual energy for practice should actually be the author's foreshadowing of the plot of the struggle between the two systems and two ideologies in the following article. And in the recently updated chapter, this foreshadowing prompted Xiao Huanglong to kill the protagonist in advance (Mr. Kaido, right?) It's just that the author should have a better way to lay out this foreshadowing, otherwise it would not cause ridicule. But I don't know how to write a novel, and I can't think of a better way to foreshadow my writing. Besides, the author's writing like this also seriously reduces the protagonist's ability to deal with crises. I hope the author will not abuse the protagonist. "The Big Monkey" was criticized miserably. It depends on the author's future arrangements. Niche grass jelly, but it has a certain exclusivity for reading.

This Dragon Girl came out a bit off-putting, but everything else was fine.

This book is generally good, but the method of teaching it is a bit poisonous. Can individuals practice the Nine-turn Yuan Gong? Moreover, this is the main character's natal skill. If you have a system, you can also create other powerful skills. After all, you need helpers to subvert some rules. Come on, author!

Why do you just casually tell the little monsters about Journey to the West without even knowing where the time is? Are you afraid of dying fast enough? He also spreads martial arts indiscriminately

After reading a few chapters, I should understand what the author wants to write, but what the author wants to write is not suitable for the world of Black Myth. If a few important characters are not killed to stimulate the protagonist to make changes, the direction of the plot will not be reasonable.

Man: A man from a certain country rescued You, who was in trouble. You stole the man's nuclear weapon formula on the grounds that the man was cowardly and incompetent. He threatened to kill his whole family if he didn't give it to him. Afterwards, he gave the man an AK. The man was deeply moved and regarded You as a strategic partner. Female: Is this okay? Whoever saves me in the future, can I take away important information such as patents and copyrights from his family, and not threaten his family, and then continue to despise him and bring my best friends to humiliate him. Male: Yes, yes, you can be the heroine of this book 🤭🤭🤭

The biggest problem in this book is that his subordinates compete with the protagonist for resources. If he does not need to support his subordinates, the protagonist will become stronger faster and live more comfortably. The author believes that when you come out to hang out, you need to be powerful, but normally the boss's subordinates recruit ready-made combat forces, or gather resources together to collect resources faster. For example, in Black Monkey, Sun Wukong has sworn sworn alliance with other demon clan sages, which is a ready-made fighting force; in Tianting Lingshan, they gather together to form a powerful ruling organization, each performing their own duties and exploiting humans and demons faster. As for the protagonist, he needs to share his resources to support his subordinates. The speed at which he and his subordinates fight monsters and collect resources is not as fast as fighting alone. He can quickly climb up and become a strong man, and he can build a better team As for sharing skills to change production relations, this does not affect the protagonist's ability to eat resources alone, which means that only the skills are taught and resources are not shared

Welcome all destiny people to join "Langlang Mountain". If you want to explore the world of black monkeys with Chen Yang, please leave your monster or human name, race background, and place it on your journey to the west. The author will use it as appropriate. Example of required format: Name: Taoist Mi Race: human Kung Fu, magical power or martial arts: swordsmanship, picking stars for fights Location: Ziyun Mountain Huanghua Temple If possible, please attach a short story to supplement the character design. The requirements must conform to the Black Monkey world view, don't be too outrageous. Come create your own shadow god picture. 🤓

I didn't read the content, only the table of contents. Judging from the table of contents, I feel that the author's book has nothing to do with the Black Myth game. The plot and characters have nothing to do with it.

This article is very good for the current Black Monkey article, but I felt weird when I saw that Taoist temple started to cultivate influence. I suddenly lost the motivation to pursue the article, but I couldn't figure out what was wrong, so I didn't read it for a few days, and I pondered for a few days. I personally think the author's thinking is a bit wrong. The most essential thing about this kind of article is upgrade. For example, other Eastern Fantasy families and Western Fantasy empires are all upgrade articles for this kind of power. But why is it that now the protagonist is still the main body of upgrades, but power has become the focus of your description. I want a story to appear in the context of this kind of power attributed to the individual, and all the setbacks only occur for one reason - the protagonist is not strong enough. For example, why did Sun Wukong succeed in rebelling against heaven? Isn't it because he is not strong enough? The example you chose is Yang Jian. Is it really because of his own strength and subordinates that he can sit firmly on Diaoyutai? Was Sun Wukong really dragged to death when he caused havoc in the Heavenly Palace? Isn't it just that he can't beat the top ones? Aren't the rest just weak to him? Like a normal force upgrade article, the basic logic is that the protagonist is not the main body, and the protagonist can provide shelter and help for this force in different ways. In the form of system plug-ins and other forms, it can catch up with other people's long-term accumulation in a short time with higher efficiency and extremely fast speed, and then rise rapidly. The protection here is sometimes not in terms of strength, but in terms of personality or different levels, such as heroic spirits, systems, etc., Similar to the Paper Angel in Mystery. He may not be absolutely strong, but it is absolutely impossible for anyone to break this protection in the current copy or map. When someone can break this protection, the protagonist often has the capital to fight or fight against him. This at least gives readers a feeling that the protagonist/power is not crumbling. As for the part I have subscribed to now and the chapter names I read, this book always gives me the feeling that everyone and all the forces are crumbling, which greatly affects my viewing experience, because after all, the story is full of flesh-and-blood characters. To put it bluntly, under your setting, even if they all become immortals, it is a script of destruction. Even survival novels or games will always give you a chance to survive. It may be that it is all a coincidence that you can survive, and that is still a chance. Although this book has a system, I don't see any chance at the moment, and even being a mountain king and drawing circles to be cute is difficult to achieve. Why is it so suffocating to write? In the Black Myth game, you can defeat the weak and the strong through the form of blood bars. Giving hope is the motivation to attract readers to read on. I think my idea is not a novice's idea, it is normal logical thinking. The author's way of writing seems to have his own ideas and is dark enough, but you made the protagonist's weakness and the enemy's strength too disparate, so much so that when I saw him using the Buddha's head blast to defeat the immortal body possessed by the little yellow dragon, I didn't feel the pleasure of breaking free from the cage at all, even if it was just a very small cage. Every channel I imagined that you could use to make him become more unreasonable and cheat-like has been blocked by your patches. In the early stages of this book, the self-upgrading was very much like the demon, especially when I picked up sticks and gourds to kill the little demon. It even had a sense of fate that amazed me. Later, I don't know what the protagonist is doing now. I know that the protagonist's goal is to develop forces to resist, but under the huge disparity in strength described in this description, how can your development in the mortal world defeat the East and West? How can you defeat the resources in the mortal world? Or is it like the little Huanglong clone plot, with a cross-influence counterattack that goes against the strength gap you described? Needless to say, the final script of this book will definitely be based on Dongxitian. The development speed and cheating level you have set have reached such a level that no one can see any hope of defeating Dongxitian. Even if it is the Nine-turn Yuan Gong, this skill may have this ability in your setting, but you didn't write it out, so I can't feel it. Generally speaking, in this kind of story, when is the right time for forces to appear? When the protagonist's strength reaches the top of the current map or plot characters, there are many possibilities that he cannot beat the protagonist in a one-on-one fight. However, when the protagonist jumps out and many people will kill him, it is not suitable to write about him being directly invincible and when a plot transition is needed. The formation and rapid rise of forces is a good plot to open up the situation. And you wrote a very good plot about the protagonist's ontogeny and upgrading in the early stage. Why abandon it and write about the development of nondescript forces? Maybe you also have your own design, but at the moment it really makes me uncomfortable. above

When will this plot end... I'm tired of watching too many plots of monsters entering the world. Looking forward to the plot of returning to Journey to the West as soon as possible.

No update for 3 days, eunuch?

Keep it up, author, the writing is very good!

I don't really like it, but I support it. Life is not easy

The writing is really good. The disadvantage is that there are too few updates now. I discovered it too early.