Lord of Ten Thousand Arts, Starting with a Little Rainmaking Spell

The maid can take away the attribute of twins in one stroke, but she also offers herself to recommend without accepting it, and lets the maid build the foundation. I really don't understand why I like to write about cuckoldry so much.

The first poisonous point is why you don't practice elixirs. You are a spiritual planter, and the teacher you studied is a second-level alchemist. Your cave is still a fire system, and there is also earth fire. You don't even practice elixirs. You have all the conditions for refining elixirs. You also say that your soul is powerful due to the fusion of two souls. I work part-time as a spirit-breaking talisman master, looking for people to buy spirit animal skins to refine talismans every day, and I can write hundreds of words every time Secondly, why don't you name me Lord of Ten Thousand Magic Gods, please don't insult this name. The spells you practice have never been in a fight, and you have almost forgotten about the foundation-building monk who robbed your cave. A word of frustration. It's been hundreds of chapters and you still don't kill him, it's not like you don't know who he is, Third, it's really not good to describe fighting, don't always use a lot of modifiers to describe it, if you really don't know how to describe it, just go and see Immortal Mansion Changsheng, Fourth, don't always write "ya"😬 It's just this soybean expression. Regardless of whether it is the main character or the supporting character in every chapter, please note that as long as the author writes about baring teeth, he can continue baring teeth for hundreds of chapters, which really scares me. Do you want to imitate Doupo Cangxiong's "Jie Jie Jie Jie", but other people can only write it if they are members of the Soul Palace. You have fewer expressions related to the face. If you write too much, it will not become a famous saying, but it will be like a bitter smile, touching your nose, touching your ears, and sneer. If you write too much, you will think that the protagonist is suffering from facial convulsions Fifth, is the inspiration for your novel Starry Sky Cockroach, that is, there are hits at each stage, and then the plants are sold, and then purchased, a batch of water is the same. You win the plants, more or less described in each chapter, and then you buy, and then write down what you bought. The sixth one is not that cool. The loan you made before it was put on the shelves was a good idea, but later on the protagonist became a cash machine and was borrowed by others all the time, let alone fighting. He didn't have any trump cards, so he kept writing about planting and bearing fruit. He gave some to friends, kept a few for himself, sold things, bought things, and it was an invincible cycle.

I have almost 700 chapters, and I really can't stand it anymore. When I like it, I really like it, and when I hate it, I really hate it. To be honest, this book is very good at the bottom level, but it doesn't work at a slightly higher level. It's really hard for me to read. There are more than 200 chapters in a big realm, and it's just one chapter. It's like this every time. I'm so tired of reading it. There is also the spirit stone system. I don't make much money in total. All of it is spent on elixirs, caves, and magic weapons. Even those who have failed have such a hard time living, how can you let those who have not failed to live? When the level is high, shouldn't bartering be the main method, supplemented by spiritual stones? There is also the person who eats books every day. As soon as the front foot is like this, the back foot becomes another look. Don't you have no impression at all, brother? Also, there was a stage when the writing style was too childish, and the feeling of being... Mentally retarded appeared between the lines (the dog's head saves his life, the description may not be accurate, but it is really indescribable, sorry) Finally, the plot is really too slow. , I really feel like vomiting blood when I read it, I really can't bear it (I've read so many novels about cultivating immortals, and this is the first time I can't stand it. I'm sorry, everyone. Different opinions are in the eye of the beholder. Whether the novel is good or not mainly depends on your own feelings, so I'll leave it now. Come on)

After reading more than a hundred chapters, it was okay at first. After it was released, I smiled and bared my teeth when talking. The frequency of baring teeth was too frequent and I couldn't stand it. Generally, the author bared his teeth and talked every day.

I came here specifically to comment. It's extremely poisonous. Run away.

There's nothing to comment on. It's a classic protagonist who works hard and then his teammates can catch up easily 🙂 and the plot is rubbish. Maybe the mini-boss in chapter 200 is still alive in chapter 700. It's awesome.

I named the book Wanfa Daojun, but I ended up reading 600 chapters, and there wasn't a single eye-catching spell. The defensive spells in the golden elixir stage can only defend in place for 5 seconds when they are cultivated to the highest level, and can only be released ten times with full mana. Can a human write this? It is no better than blue and silver entanglement. Ordinary people can't defend even an excavator. What's even more disgusting is that a group of Jindanqi fights don't rely on their spiritual consciousness to see with their eyes, but fighter jets rely on radar.

The author can always do some bad things. In the early stage, he invented a spirit crystal with low-level currency, and then mixed the spirit stones/spars, which made it inexplicable In the later stage, the protagonist and supporting characters bared their teeth every day, making it look like they were atavistic.

The currency system is also in a mess. Sooner or later, it will jump. It's okay if you have the spiritual crystal. But a father who has an eighth level of qi training and can also control beasts can't even support a son who has no qi training. There is really nothing to say. The most awesome thing is that the father risked his life in order to make money for his son. The only valuable beast control skill is not given to his son. Is this something that a normal person can do? Suppressing the protagonist at every turn is not how you do it. I don't see any use for this except to disgust readers.

Damn it, you saw the comment section as soon as you came in? Is it really a cuckold story? Farewell