Game of Thrones: What Bastard? I'm the True Heir!

Don't try to apply Chinese intrigue and backstabbing to the medieval setting of Game of Thrones. The biggest reason these elements have long existed in Chinese cultural works is because of China's two-thousand-year-old civil service bureaucracy.

You guys who write Game of Thrones fanfiction, can't you write without getting involved with that shorty, huh?

A game of Thrones with unparalleled combat power and a humanoid nuclear bomb, plus a plot twist, then various leveling-up and an invincible protagonist. No author could write political intrigue, and those people are better off being suppressed by force than anything else.

The first few chapters released haven't progressed the plot at all. You can't treat your readers like kindergarten children, making sure we don't understand everything and explaining everything in a broken and complicated way. It's so frustrating to read.

A novel should center on the protagonist. Lately, the protagonist has been practically invisible, only occasionally appearing in updates, and the updates are almost entirely from other perspectives. This lack of focus is frustrating to read. If this continues, many readers will lose subscriptions, and without subscriptions, the author loses motivation to write, creating a vicious cycle. Even the best writing won't help if this continues! 😅

The rest of the book is readable, but the writing style is not concise enough. Most of the time, a whole chapter is rambling and the actual content can be summed up in a single sentence. When it comes to character interactions, you could describe the characters' actions, expressions, and speech in more detail to make them feel more immersive. But there's no need to be so pedantic.

It's been abandoned. Stop making excuses. Saying it's finished is just a lie to fool newcomers, don't believe it. Since July, you've been saying updates will be infrequent, only once a week, a mere six chapters a month. August saw only five chapters.

This whole "dark cloud" thing is utterly ridiculous. You might as well go farm money in a game. What makes endorsements possible in modern society? It's the superhuman productivity of the industrial age, the information flow of the internet age, and the population of modern society... You're going to try and do endorsements in feudal society?

It's baffling why the main characters in Game of Thrones fight on horseback without using long weapons, but instead use swords.

I subscribed to the first chapter and the whole thing, but after reading the first chapter, I regretted it. It was supposed to be all fighting and killing, but the whole chapter was just talk and inner monologues.