Begin Liver Experience with Push-Ups

Become stronger step by step and explore the world, but there seems to be no clear goal or main line in the story, so just practice over there

No, with twice the attributes of an ordinary person, he is completely a little superman. With the entry, if one punches him, he will die if he is not superhuman.

A bit different Yakuza flow. The advantage is that there aren't that many bad things, and the villains are constantly making faces and fighting and killing. The disadvantage is that it feels a bit deliberately repressed. The plot is so awesome, and the protagonist also needs to be a sparring partner for money. It feels deliberately ordinary. It's like winning 50 million, but it's like not winning, and still eating 20 takeaways every day.

I haven't read it yet, so let's talk about the introduction,,. After completing those exercises, your skills are at full level and synthesized into a myth, giving people a sense of astonishment, this myth of yours. That's it? Feeling so worthless

It's okay in the front, and I will gradually become stronger through training. Later in the writing, I went back to my old ways. Events happened one after another. I pretended to be a slap in the face and became stronger. The pace was too fast and there was nothing interesting about it. Enemies come one after another, and the world view is relatively confusing. The author should figure out where to focus, including the physical body, people with mutant abilities, and spiritual cultivation. The protagonist seems too passive. If there are no enemy targets, don't force them. Also, the supporting characters around him are used as hooks to lead to plot development too many times. There are so many things going on around the main character, it's too deliberate. In the end, it just became an ordinary urban cool article, which is far from the silent hidden development in the introduction and the strongest tone. The author is still eager to throw out the plot, which disrupts the improvement of the protagonist. It not only weakens the protagonist's initiative and makes him look like a puppet, but also affects the framework of the whole text, causing the plot to develop too fast. So much content has been lost before the results of the protagonist's postgraduate entrance examination are published in the book.

I'm really convinced. Could you please stop writing about adjusting your center of gravity to stay in the air? He also said that he would not violate the rules of physics 😅

Everything else is okay, except for one question: does the protagonist hide his identity? Wearing a mask, shaving your head, and pretending to be a monk in order to hide your identity, but after you finish the job, you don't even try to get your hair back, and your head is still bare. Do you want to hide your identity? Who wouldn't think of a normally normal guy suddenly shaving his head?

I don't understand. Is this extraordinary or not? Can an average boxer fight at full strength for an hour? That's too ridiculous. Is this writing about "high"?

In fact, the identity of a lone wolf is more suitable for the development of the story. There are too many weaknesses around you, and an organization can't find your identity. If someone catches you randomly, you will fall into the trap and be beaten passively. After reading Chapter 206, I feel that they are all enemies, and the people around me are all weak and pitiful. The one whose identity is known so far is President Shen. Is this organization Noah a decoration? The president can find it, but this organization cannot be found. In just Chapter 200, two people around me were implicated by the protagonist and were arrested. The protagonist went to save them, which made people feel like they were a burden. They were always passively accepting attacks, which was very complicated.

After seeing Chapter 240, the protagonist doesn't want to hide it at all now. He didn't want to get involved in another world and wanted to become stronger silently. But now he appears frequently in front of people in another world without any cover-up.

The book is good, but there are too many details about exercise, too much. It's not that you don't want to, it's that you don't want to write so many details. Basically, 7-8 of the 10 chapters are about training details. After watching it too much, I felt it was watery and the plot accounted for too little.

The first few chapters are good, but the little villains who appear later are not very well written and are a bit stiff.

I've read about forty or fifty chapters, it's basically a fitness vlog.

According to the description in the chapter of your new talent, after 4 level 1 greens are synthesized, it cannot be improved? It is green when synthesized. Even if the prisoner's six items are upgraded to level 5, it cannot be upgraded to gold. According to your current progress, all six of your skills will be upgraded to level five and then combined into talents. How can you retain people with the plot before you put it on the shelves?

Author, how could you do this? The Guinness record is typing 807 letters per minute. Calculating that each Chinese character requires six letters, you can type approximately 134 words per minute. Since you are not a holder, we will calculate it as 100 words per minute. According to WHO standards, a person's healthy sleep time is eight hours, and you spend about two hours eating every day. Hours, and then use 20 minutes to go to the toilet, 40 minutes to wash up, one hour to exercise, two hours to get inspired, and another hour to be in a daze, you should have nine hours to type, and a total of 435,780 words, calculated as 2,000 words per chapter, there should be 36 chapters, but you only put so little content every day, how come? To be honest, is it a deduction? The donkeys in the production team didn't dare to rest like this. The author felt like he was writing!

This book turned out to be [Fantasy·High Martial Arts World], I thought it was [Urban·Fitness]...

Change the number of push-ups. Before I joined the army, I just helped build a house at home. I finished two hundred push-ups in 10 minutes. 100 In 2 minutes is the same as playing. After joining the army, I lay down on the ground at 9:30 pm and did it in groups of 10 until about 12:30 am, about 1,000. It's really weird that you are an expert and still play this kind of childish game.

I wrote about it at the beginning of this book, but if I can't grasp it, I can only limit the number of skills 🤫. In fact, there is no need to limit the number of skills. Just selectively upgrade skills. Not every skill needs to be upgraded. If other skills are not needed in the plot, you can just not write them.

The writing is very good, but I couldn't read it several times, especially the plot about the mother and daughter, which is the most annoying plot about bringing up the younger sister. I always wanted to write about a pure little girl, which is a bit of a drama. The proficiency system genre of sweat, hard work, upgrading, and self-improvement is also incompatible with this. I finished it for the third time. Every time I see the mother and daughter, I feel panicked. I really can't continue. That's it. I look forward to your next book.

The protagonist is very clean and peaceful, and his motivation to become stronger is real and pure. But what impressed me the most about this book was the detailed description of the protagonist's growth path before becoming extraordinary. Using fitness as a means to describe the transformation of the protagonist from an ordinary person to a strong man, especially in terms of mentality. For example, I had a similar experience when I was doing push-ups. During that time, I was quite depressed and punished myself by doing push-ups to vent. Because I was weak, I wanted to give up after I couldn't do a few. But driven by negative emotions, I gritted my teeth and did a few more, especially when my hands were trembling and my abdomen was stretched to the limit. I just did one more by will, and then fell to the ground. At that moment, I was really hearty and had a huge sense of accomplishment. I laughed from the bottom of my heart, as if I had defeated myself, and I felt very involved. Unfortunately, I didn't have a panel, and my muscles ached after the fun, so I couldn't continue. As mentioned earlier, the transformation of the protagonist before becoming extraordinary is written in detail. Many books often omit this process and achieve it overnight, such as cheats, systems, etc. Anyway, once you get the power, you instantly change from a mediocre and indecisive ordinary person to a decisive killer, using power like arms and fingers, just like a born extraordinary person. The disadvantage of this is that it will make people think that I can do it myself, or that I can achieve the same result just by carrying a dog. This book is very popular, using a fitness method to write about the growth of the protagonist, and writing the process in detail. The advantage is that it can make people think about it from the perspective of the protagonist, and whether they can achieve the level of the protagonist. Although it is indispensable for online articles, the motivation brought by the positive feedback given by the panelization of the progress bar is unparalleled, but it can also play a considerable role. There are also disadvantages, that is, the pace is slow, and it is only suitable for audiences who have the same experience (at least tried fitness) to get to the g-spot. If it is a new author without a large fan base, it is easy to die early. In this process, it is necessary to increase the cool points appropriately to speed up the pace (or to draw a cake for the reader to clearly understand the progress and the improvement brought by each progress), but not to overly destroy the original atmosphere, which will test the author's ability to grasp the rhythm.

At first I thought it was the Yakuza style. After all, the themes of Dragon Among Men and Hot-Blooded Rogue were revealed. I didn't expect that there would be a subspace-like setting later on... It seems that interstellar canned food is not impossible.

It's interesting for the protagonist to become stronger silently, but his acting style is very passive.

Things like the experience panel should snowball very quickly. The author must slowly level up.

During the new book period, you need to keep reading before it can be recommended. Please support me by reading. It doesn't cost money. Just turn to the last page when you see the last chapter every day. Don't keep reading during the seedling period. Please🙏 If you have any comments, feel free to mention them.

No plug-ins required. One-time push-ups are 13,000+, and one-time squats are 2,200. You can also compete with other push-up masters online to compete in push-ups.

60 Points of s, 80 points of super s, 100 is a god, but the protagonist has multiple passive skills, and the attribute points are basically doubled. This is still a back and forth. In terms of skills, Qigong level 3 is almost the same as the opponent's S field. I can definitely beat him in seconds. Now at the beginning, the protagonist has a charged unicorn arm. When the opponent receives such a blow, it feels like a person with physical abilities. It is completely fine. The protagonist needs to be beaten to death.

The key skills can actually be upgraded in the normal order. You have to arrange events every time, and the subsequent daily routine is too cumbersome. Then there are so many percentages of special effects. His physique is superior to others. I don't want to talk about it anymore, but it still goes back and forth every time. I'm really speechless.

So what does it mean that I have thin muscles and thick fat after doing 10,000 push-ups and pull-ups 🙂

It doesn't match the introduction. I thought I'd just start practicing and then show off after I'm successful.

The writing is really stable. The plot of more than two million words is similar to that of other Ji Baliu books with 500,000 words. The power system of other books has collapsed into a mess when it reaches more than one million words.