Grinding Experience, Starting with Push-Ups

No, with twice the attributes of an ordinary person, he is completely a little superman. With the entry, if one punches him, he will die if he is not superhuman.

A bit different Yakuza flow. The advantage is that there aren't that many bad things, and the villains are constantly making faces and fighting and killing. The disadvantage is that it feels a bit deliberately repressed. The plot is so awesome, and the protagonist also needs to be a sparring partner for money. It feels deliberately ordinary. It's like winning 50 million, but it's like not winning, and still eating 20 takeaways every day.

I haven't read it yet, so let's talk about the introduction,,. After completing those exercises, your skills are at full level and synthesized into a myth, giving people a sense of astonishment, this myth of yours. That's it? Feeling so worthless

It's okay in the front, and I will gradually become stronger through training. Later in the writing, I went back to my old ways. Events happened one after another. I pretended to be a slap in the face and became stronger. The pace was too fast and there was nothing interesting about it. Enemies come one after another, and the world view is relatively confusing. The author should figure out where to focus, including the physical body, people with mutant abilities, and spiritual cultivation. The protagonist seems too passive. If there are no enemy targets, don't force them. Also, the supporting characters around him are used as hooks to lead to plot development too many times. There are so many things going on around the main character, it's too deliberate. In the end, it just became an ordinary urban cool article, which is far from the silent hidden development in the introduction and the strongest tone. The author is still eager to throw out the plot, which disrupts the improvement of the protagonist. It not only weakens the protagonist's initiative and makes him look like a puppet, but also affects the framework of the whole text, causing the plot to develop too fast. So much content has been lost before the results of the protagonist's postgraduate entrance examination are published in the book.

I'm really convinced. Could you please stop writing about adjusting your center of gravity to stay in the air? He also said that he would not violate the rules of physics 😅

Everything else is okay, except for one question: does the protagonist hide his identity? Wearing a mask, shaving your head, and pretending to be a monk in order to hide your identity, but after you finish the job, you don't even try to get your hair back, and your head is still bare. Do you want to hide your identity? Who wouldn't think of a normally normal guy suddenly shaving his head?

In fact, the identity of a lone wolf is more suitable for the development of the story. There are too many weaknesses around you, and an organization can't find your identity. If someone catches you randomly, you will fall into the trap and be beaten passively. After reading Chapter 206, I feel that they are all enemies, and the people around me are all weak and pitiful. The one whose identity is known so far is President Shen. Is this organization Noah a decoration? The president can find it, but this organization cannot be found. In just Chapter 200, two people around me were implicated by the protagonist and were arrested. The protagonist went to save them, which made people feel like they were a burden. They were always passively accepting attacks, which was very complicated.

I don't understand. Is this extraordinary or not? Can an average boxer fight at full strength for an hour? That's too ridiculous. Is this writing about "high"?

After seeing Chapter 240, the protagonist doesn't want to hide it at all now. He didn't want to get involved in another world and wanted to become stronger silently. But now he appears frequently in front of people in another world without any cover-up.

The book is good, but there are too many details about exercise, too much. It's not that you don't want to, it's that you don't want to write so many details. Basically, 7-8 of the 10 chapters are about training details. After watching it too much, I felt it was watery and the plot accounted for too little.