Under One Person: I Fight by Shaking People Down

One sentence made my desire to continue reading plummet! The kid's self-proclaimed person makes people inexplicably angry!

You still have to practice the technique of shaking people. Take a look at Dong Zhao's technique of shaking people

In the early stage of the Great Water Story, there was basically not much original content. There was a plug-in for the time traveler, so it had to be pieced together. After all, you are no longer in the original world after traveling through time. Aren't other people just as different from NPCs? In the early stage, the moral quality of the protagonist was so high, how could he prepare to become a virgin?

There is too much nonsense, four chapters, even the first scene is not finished, and no important information is given. The protagonist's appearance time may not be enough to fit in the comic. They are all insignificant backgrounds and watery settings. At this stage, even those who have never read the comics do not need such an introduction. The protagonist of this book is Shen Yuan, not a one-man comic. The three golden chapters involve a master, a traveler, and a person who needs to train his heart. There is nothing left, the relationship between the characters is just a straight line and the characters are too flat, which is boring and confusing. It is most important to put in the life experience and the events experienced by the protagonist to flesh out the characters. The backgrounds such as the Eight Magic Skills and the Luotian Dajiao are all meaningless. Now it is just like writing a narrative, like a composition. It takes the title of "Under One Person", requires inserting one person, and then scores 20 points.

I wrote it too quickly and I think I will get cold.

There is too much nonsense, I can accept it for Director Zhao. But the reason why you go to Luotian Dajiao for Tongtianlu is better than to help the old Tianshi. After all, Tongtianlu is very consistent with the protagonist's method. There is too much nonsense in the whole text. It feels like the role of a certain person in the original work is applied to the protagonist. It is too nanny. Why do you care about Zhang Chulan so much? The whole text is only interesting in Cang Lan Jue. Too nanny

How can I put it... The protagonist's immortals with the art of conferring gods have a hard time beating anyone... The force level is high enough, and the force is useless. And it keeps following the plot, but there is nothing to see...

You have to watch this if you want to shake people

Taoism cultivates military skills, but what about soldiers? Where is the horse? No? Just rely on calling God? Why should I learn the Shen Ji Bai Lian and then practice the Five Rampant Lingqi? When you play shaking people, you have no soldiers and no generals, so you can shake an egg.

Why do you feel like there is something wrong with the protagonist's IQ?

Guo: Are you good at shaking people up? Being able to shake people is of no use~ Do you have the guts to try touching me? He is not a loyal dog under our seat.

It's too boring. The main character is like a saint. He doesn't want anything but wants to help others. It takes a lot of effort to win over so many gods.

After seeing the beating of Lao Ma in Biyou Village, I had no desire to watch it later. In fact, there were many people who were jumping to watch it in front of me. It is suitable for people who have never read the original work. After all, the author is quite thoughtful and explains many things. However, if you have read the original work, it will be very boring. The plot basically follows the original work, and none of the named bad characters die. The author's golden fingers are quite promising, but he just doesn't have the guts to mess with the plot. It's not just a writing problem but also a layout problem, which is a bit confusing.

Too much. . This kind of fixation only needs to be limited to some people, but it would be too boring to just follow whoever you want. .

I can't say it's capable, it's very good, the plot is very average, it's a streamlined plot, 80% of the time is similar to other fans. In summary, I joined the company, released Luo Tianjiao, rescued Tian Lao, attacked the mountain without killing the named characters, I haven't watched it since then, but I guess I also saved Chen Duo, participated in the furnace explosion in Biyou Village, and basically worked as a nanny for Zhang Chulan. There won't be any new content.

Is the protagonist schizophrenic? In order to feel safe, you lie down in muddy water, offend others casually, and show off your unique ninth skill. Is this brain made of water? Are you as good as Longhushan when it comes to knocking on doors, or do you have several heavenly masters when it comes to knocking on doors as well?

Author, you won't forget to teach the protagonist the art of holding, right? I can understand if you don't have soldiers and horses. If this is the case, you need to learn how to restrain the spirit and send generals to the protagonist. If you don't learn, it will not make sense later. If you play to shake people, no one will shake them for you! Tsk tsk tsk...

When will this world end? It's over. I'll read it later. I can't stand it anymore. It makes me feel like I've gone back to reading urban supernatural novels more than ten years ago.

Announcement? Aren't you afraid that this god of murder will kill you? Tsk tsk tsk tsk

The Traveler's Golden Finger is just a background board, whether it is there or not.