The Walking Dragon Son

Author, have you seen the ground error? The initial ability value must be 0. No matter how strong you are, the value of Dicuo's favor system does not reflect your strength, but your growth after receiving the favor. Does the protagonist's full value mean that the protagonist cannot grow?

The writing style is like a running account, but after dismantling Ikki's CP, the emotional scenes add up to 10,000 words, and what's even more outrageous is the superfluous addition of a Guandao Spirit Equipment to the protagonist. . . . To be honest, what is the author thinking? It's a fallen world, and every big boss is extremely skilled in martial arts. The protagonist has only learned boxing techniques that surpass Ikki's strength in just two years there. At the same time, he has to hone his own magic power and dragon-slaying magic. As a result, he suddenly has more Guandao spirit equipment? And you told me that you used this knife to cut Edwys? what the hell!?🤔🤔🤔 The protagonist has learned boxing skills for two years and added the dragon-slaying magic with full amplification, but he can't defeat Idle Wyatt, but now he takes out a Guandao without any pre-plot and cuts people without corresponding proficient skills? In the face of this sword, Edwys's top-notch force became a decoration, and even the sword did not drop the frame 😄 The plot of the two chapters directly reduced my evaluation of the book from 6 points to 2 points. It is garbage, very strong, too strong👍 The moment I saw the sword, I knew that this book was useless 😤

Can the author write about a harem? If it's not a harem, I'll skip it first. Speaking of which, when did Qidian have so many comprehensive comics again? Is there still soil for the second dimension here? It's all those Yunkanfan movies.

This fainting vehicle is really not funny at all. If you use this weakness in another way, you can torture the protagonist to death if you have some strength.

This chapter about the fallen knight really encourages people to quit. It contains a lot of meaningless things. It can be said that people who like the fallen knight will be disgusted by it, and those who don't like the fallen knight will not bother to read it.

How should I put it, it gives people the feeling of a supporting character's comic journey. Anyway, after watching it for a long time, the protagonist is not as prominent as the original protagonist. Doing the protagonist's thing and playing a supporting role is just to serve as a foil to the protagonist.

The protagonist is Natsu, who can travel through magic. Even his catchphrase is the same as Natsu. Moreover, there are very few plots that really belong to the protagonist in the novel. They basically follow the plot of the anime and add a protagonist to the original plot.

I honestly don't understand why you should choose dragon slaying magic. To be honest, dragon slaying magic is useless. Just use teleportation magic or shape magic to teleport the vehicle or change it under your feet, and it will immediately become useless.

I think the previous ones are good, but the setting at the wrong beginning is messy. It is obvious that the EX ability value is directly added as soon as I receive the favor. Will it also be EX after upgrading? It's better to just change the world! I don't see the need to see this world

Regarding the content of dungeon encounters, there is a big problem with the background. When you get a favor for the first time, no matter how strong you were before. All attributes are calculated from scratch, and previous experience does not count.

It's better not to write the plot of Fairy Tail and make it exactly the same as the original.

Seeing that I failed, it really seems like a running account

To be honest, the writing about "Rejection" is very disgusting and unpleasant. I don't want to read it.

I don't know why, but I feel like the plot of Fallen Knight hasn't changed at all. Do you have this feeling? The main character is useless at all.

The author likes to write some inexplicable plots.

To be honest, I'm not happy with the way the main character does things.

It's another book about One Piece that saves Ace's gang from starting the war. It's quite high-sounding and makes the navy worthless. Although the navy under the control of the world government is not a good product compared to the pirates, the navy is still stronger than the pirates. If all the pirates are sharks, there will definitely be injustice. But if you cut off every other one, most of the fish will definitely slip through the net. Although there are quite a few rotten dregs in the navy, there are still many navy that truly uphold justice. The degree of destruction to the poor is worse than that of the pure. The navy can't beat the pirates. The pirate base is large, and the number of people is mixed, burning, killing, looting and evil. Ninety-nine percent of them are not guilty. Without the restraint of morality and law, the chaos of human nature will be completely liberated. And in this case, what terrible things will be done can be compared with the Tianlong people. Maybe they don't have the luxury of having fun with the Tianlong people, but the level of perversion and cruelty is definitely not worse than the Tianlong people. A normal and rational way of thinking is not to help either side. To help the pirates is to have bad views and sorry for your conscience. Help the navy before you have the ability to solve the people's livelihood in this world, including the overall order problem. It's thankless. It's better to eat, drink, have fun, fight, study and then run away. Wait until you have absolute strength one day and then come back to form a relatively absolute order to solve the problem of the oppressors. Anyway, the people have been suffering for a long time. It is better to suffer a little longer and wait for the pig's feet to come to the gods. Otherwise, what you do is completely useless. The people should suffer or suffer.

The transportation system is really suitable

I always feel that the order of the world is a bit strange. If the place is wrong from the beginning, when I master a certain floor, I use the world magic unlocked in the crisis to travel to Black Clover. I combine the dragon slayer and the magic book to develop the protagonist's personal routine. During the reincarnation magic, the boss of the next stage takes advantage of the opportunity to hurt the soul, and then I fail to practice martial arts and repair. The Broken Soul Arms, and finally with the intervention of the Wing Offensive and Murasaki no Miya, used the special attack on the world rules attached to the Dragon Slayer and World Magic to break through the origin of the weapon, the devil and the initial Wing Wing skills, and then returned to Fairy Tail and broke all the way to Tianrou Island to conclude. Would it be better to go back to the previous world to solve the problem? Personal opinion, I don't like to comment lightly.

Author, I'd like to give you a suggestion, it's finished! The first part is actually pretty good, but the second part obviously incorporates too many worlds that are too confusing, which leads to the collapse of the combat power, and the plot is getting more and more stretched. In fact, comprehensive comics are not suitable for integrating too many worlds, otherwise most of them will be unfinished and collapse. Instead of dragging it out, it is better to restart it, dragging it down will lose popularity.

You know, don't mention things you don't understand. Otherwise, people who understand will think you are a bastard. It's rare in this era to have a protagonist with a decent outlook on life, so don't rush into the street.

The combat power level of the Flame Dragon God is compared to Irene. Irene can play with the continental shelf as building blocks, so it means that pig's feet have the ability to sink the continental shelf in an instant. And then you tell me that I can only tie with Kaido? Forget it. For such a powerful magic warrior, you can't even compare to Jiguo Enichi's high-speed and high-frequency attacks?

More than 700 chapters and less than 100 posts

The reasons for negative reviews mentioned by others don't seem too big to me. I can accept the wrong setting. After all, I haven't watched anime for a long time and I have almost forgotten it. But how do you survive to this day with a plot like yours that flies off to the sky every other chapter? I didn't even explain it, and it felt like I had skipped dozens of chapters, and I had no reading experience at all. If I were to give you one point, it would be too much. Idiots all know how big of a mistake it is to write incoherently, right?

I was convinced by this plot. The twists were so abrupt and sudden that I wondered if the chapter was interrupted. Moreover, I still don't understand the point of the protagonist traveling across the heavens in this novel, so he just wanders? If you are writing about the protagonist becoming stronger through time travel, I personally think it is not necessary. Just write the story of Fairy Tail alone, because the plots of other worlds that you travel through are basically the same as the original plot, except for the addition of a halfway character like the protagonist, and the rest is exactly the same as the original. It feels like every time the protagonist travels to a different world, it just makes me review the original plot, and then it disappears, and I am really confused.