Carry a Foggy World with You

The subject matter is awesome, but the portrayal of the protagonist's character is terrible. It's not just terrible. All kinds of double standards are disgusting. Forget it, the character of the supporting character is so well portrayed. Why do you, the protagonist, be so disgusting? Is there any way you want to express his caution and cunning? You use double standards

I have read more than 400 chapters of this book, and there is always something I want to say. To be honest, the creativity of this book is okay, but it is uncomfortable to read. I don't think it is too enjoyable to say that it is a refreshing article. I don't know if the plot has not been developed yet. I always feel that the foggy world should be written deeper, and the sense of immersion in the real world is average. Let's talk about the development of the protagonist and supporting characters. If the book Mystery is about bringing a ray of light and kindness into the dark world, then I always feel that the recent development of this book is that the humanity and kindness that the protagonist thinks are being swallowed up by the nature of monsters. The protagonist has changed from a person who looks like a monster to a monster who looks like a person. Of course, it may be that the author deliberately wants to write a dark novel where the protagonist is not a human being Finally, I will give it a 3 points for the time being. There are still 150 chapters to see how it will develop.

It's quite good-looking. Although it's very similar to a book called (Summoning Nightmares) and the world view is somewhat similar, I have to say that this book is very well-written (please update soon). Female characters seem to be too lucky, especially Adela. As a (small) manager in a special department (extraordinary), she should have managerial leadership, ability to judge situations, high emotional intelligence (after all, she is a woman), or decisiveness. But I don't feel that she is a slut. The top management should not appoint such a person, right? And in a place where multiple forces exist, don't they need someone who can find a balance between multiple forces to benefit the organization? And it pops up from time to time to disgust you Although it is not poisonous, it affects the sense of substitution (´;;`)

This is similar to the beginning of the Dreadfort, with a bit of an indescribable cyberpunk flavor and a feeling of nightmare erosion And you can come back after you die, and the time is unlimited. There must be restrictions in the later settings, otherwise it will be too invincible.

I estimate that four hands are enough. I don't know if they will grow wings in the future. They are too short and weak to look good.

The people here are like mentally retarded people. As long as the protagonist has follow-up contact, they are all women. Moreover, the protagonist has a severely split personality. He wants to create a shrewd and cold character for the protagonist, but he also saves all kinds of inexplicable women for something. Did the author live a miserable life and never come into contact with women?

As compensation, add some points and gain some experience.

The protagonist of this book has a bit of a double standard. I remember that when we were exploring the island, the government prohibited them from going to sea. There were sea monsters in the sea. My cousin found a team of boats willing to take them out, and the protagonist took them as a matter of course. This group of people didn't want any money. They were just looking for favors from their cousin. They stuck their heads in their waistbands to compensate the protagonist for doing things, but in the end they treated them worse than even cats and dogs. They killed them as soon as they asked. Later, I went to the capital and took a train home. Just because I said a few words to a little girl on the train, I began to lament that the whole train was full of living people, and started to fight against the evil god for passers-by like them. . . . . I was so disgusted at that moment. The boatmen who showed their emotions to make a living are not real people. Everyone on the train is just a human being. Of course, children and the elderly are treated in the same way in the novel, but who can say for sure whether there are some old and some young among these boatmen? Why do you have such double standards if you insist on pretending to be a saint in front of unrelated passers-by when you are clearly not a human being?

I really don't understand Lin Qingqing's line. A protagonist travels through relatives that the host has never heard of, and is no different from a stranger. Then in order to help them, he went all the way to help and saved them (the old man could live but he asked for death), but the protagonist felt very guilty and took great care of her. She was given money for a room and picked up and dropped off in person every day. Whatever she asked for, she would try her best to do it even if she didn't want to. It is protected by the containment at all times, and if anything goes wrong, it will explode immediately. Even the original parents did not receive such good treatment. I am very surprised, why is the protagonist so nice to Lin Qingqing? It can't be said that she has a big role to play later, so the protagonist has to be so doting on her! You might as well give me a sister who looks like her from the previous life! What do you think of the author? It's very funny.

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ Out of the desert village and encounter an unprotected duke's daughter, forget it, just because the protagonist stayed with them in the deserted house for a while, when he went to the interview the next day, a lot of people wanted to plot against him and make a fuss about him. ? ? ? ? What bullshit logic is this. And as a duke, in such an environment, he doesn't have his own private armed forces? If something goes wrong, the eldest daughter of your family has to go to the station to block the protagonist and ask the protagonist to protect her. This is a bit confusing. You must know that the first two chapters just said that a bunch of extraordinary people can hardly afford to eat. Wouldn't it be nice for the Duke to recruit some of them casually? And the protagonist has shown his strength in front of others. It's only at the level of one and two. I don't know how this duke's daughter thinks that the protagonist can protect her. This operation is very confusing. In addition to the complaint, there is also a problem in the first one or two hundred chapters. When the male protagonist talks to others, his tone always feels condescending. Moreover, the male protagonist is too unfinished. He always gets angry inexplicably in front of outsiders. He shows all kinds of irritation on his face. I don't know what you handsome guys think. Anyway, I feel very stupid, which makes me uncomfortable.         ，，，💩，，，，

She always lets her cousin take care of her. The cousin quickly gave in as soon as she started crying. When his cousin begged to deal with the woman who was possessed by a demon, did he think that his cousin would die if he couldn't defeat the demon? The author should not write emotional scenes.

Speechless, why don't these male protagonists refuse to refuse a woman when they meet one? The male protagonist obviously wants to go out to experiment with the power he has gained, but just because the maid said that he wanted to go with her, he took her with her? I'm drunk too. Did you lead me on the road? Have you forgotten what I said before about not exposing your strength? The logic is irrational, the plot is cliché, and it annoys women.

Stay here, brother, you don't want a eunuch. There will be no shortage of tickets.

Every time the protagonist goes to a place, nine times out of ten, he will encounter a long-planned conspiracy. In the past, it was okay to write this way in novels, but now it is a bit cliché to write this way in novels.

Was this book poisonous when you just read it? Solve

It makes the protagonist feel uncomfortable watching him smoke. Farewell

I was persuaded to quit by this cousin, what the hell, disgusting

The first part is quite good, but later on the protagonist's character becomes more and more extreme. Hey, many novels have this common problem. When they are young, they are quite down-to-earth, but when they have status, their characters become unlikable. It would be great if the protagonist never forgets his original intention. It's a pity for a good novel.

It has been two years since I started eating crabs. Today I suddenly thought of crabs. I don't know why, Crab doesn't write novels anymore, but he has already changed his account. Something happened to the crab. Can't write anymore. Why don't you say anything?

The extremely beautiful demons and ghosts are chasing me from there. But after reading a review of the book, it said that when I meet my cousin, the protagonist transforms into a virgin 😅, I suddenly didn't dare to start reading the novel. It was embarrassing to write such a bloody plot ten years ago. Did the author change the style of the protagonist and transform into a virgin? Ask my cousin if there are any more behind? Which chapter disappeared? I'm considering subscribing starting from this chapter

I think it's pretty good-looking. It's only reasonable that this quality should correspond to better results. Cheers, author. It's better written than the one that pioneered this genre.

From the time I started smoking, the story started to fall apart again and again, and it kept repeating, repeating, and repeating to show off. The higher the promotion, the narrower the protagonist's vision and latitude. I don't know what I'm writing at all.

Write about beasts and ghosts, or something with similar themes. You were even less famous before, and you only wrote hundreds of thousands of words in your book, but it hasn't been put on the shelves. How could the results come out so quickly? I really feel too impatient.

I'm looking forward to it now.

I think of crabs again after 2 years. When will you publish a new book? I want genuine support and give it a chance. (I don't know if the crabs can be seen)

Why hasn't the author published a new book for so long? Or is there someone here to comment and comment 😥

Author, I came to read your book again

It's been almost three years. Have you finished practicing? 😭

Master Crab, you have fallen. You must have written "The Son-in-Law of the Miracle Doctor" as well. You might as well finish writing the beast ghost and find someone to recharge monthly tickets at the beginning of the month.

I saw Chapter 142 and I just want to ask why? Just a stranger, because that woman is planning to go out to sea to help a devil. Is she so stupid? The previous article was quite attractive at first, but the more I read it, the less interesting it became.