
Kill Immortal
杀仙
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- Ongoing
- Length
- 23k Words
- Genre
- Cultivation
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Classical Xianxia
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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1. Summary This book is the sequel to the author Shanchuan Bu Nian's previous work "Please Don't Disturb My Cultivation of Immortality". In the book "Cultivation of Immortality", the protagonist Lin Wen is a time traveler from Blue Star. He is bound to a system that allows him to be reincarnated into the world of immortality after death by accumulating good and bad karma. Good deeds and good karma can improve the luck of the reincarnation (in the later stage), and doing bad things and bad karma will improve the qualifications of the reincarnation (the boy who gives money in the early stage). Lin Wen's dream is to cultivate immortality, and in order to better cultivate immortality, he must accumulate good karma, so in the aura-free world in the book "Cultivation of Immortality", he led Ge Ming's team to build society and accumulate good karma, break the unfair order, clear out the dark forces, establish a civilized and harmonious society, and finally be reincarnated into the world of immortality and embark on a smooth road to immortality. 2. Unfinished business, the imperfect Lin Wen However, this book, as a sequel, does not start with Lin Wen ascending to the world of immortality. The first two chapters describe Lin Wen being stabbed in the back when he was about to succeed in the immortal class, falling into the mortal world, and falling into a precarious situation. As a book friend who has read "Cultivation of Immortality" in full for several times, I felt it was quite unfamiliar at first, but now I have new ideas about it: Lin Wen is not a Geming with a high ideological consciousness. He traveled from the earth to the empire, and he does have a relatively high moral standard from compulsory education, and a knowledge that transcends the times and stands on the shoulders of great men. However, everything he does is just to allow himself to accumulate good karma and better cultivate immortality. In addition, as long as he can fully automatically harvest good karma, he almost does not want to interfere with mortal affairs, thinking that these things will only make him "dusty in the Taoist heart." However, this just reflects the limitations of his cognition: as long as there is pick-up, there will be oppression and confusion. His beautiful vision for the world of immortality is also reflected in the extra chapters of the previous game: whether it is the indescribable terror, the hostile brothers in the sect, or the Taoist ancestors and pure black men who have long planned, they have long been eyeing Lin Wen who is about to be reincarnated, but Lin Wen only wants to cultivate immortality well and crush him with the righteousness of the system. Being stabbed in the back in the end was actually expected: in the world of immortality, people will be punished by heaven and earth if they don't care for themselves, and there is no consensus on working together to achieve common prosperity when building Changshan County. 3. Plot prediction and analysis From the description in the first chapter, Lin Wen "cut off the past and cut off the cause and effect", which means that he cut off the connection between helping people get good luck and the soul in the previous work. This shows that Lin Wen "betrayed his origin to pick up the plane." In the second chapter, Lin Wen thought about "What are the decent people of Xuanmen arresting these mortals?" "At least in his understanding," this shows that he was so obsessed with cultivation that he went to the temple to improve his cultivation and never paid attention to the dark side of mortals and low-level monks. This is called "separation from the masses." :(),()(),()() Why arrange such a plot? I think only in this way can Lin Wen realize that his success and actions in the mortal world are not accidental, but a historical necessity. He concentrated on cultivating immortality in the Qingyun Sect of the world of immortality, but he has never paid attention to the life at the bottom of the world of immortality. He has been living in the ivory tower of the sect, so he needs to be given an opportunity to realize that his system and sect are actually a kind of privilege, separated from the general public. Only by letting him realize from his heart that he has the ability and the mission to break the airport pick-up can he develop a story of passionate struggle. Becoming an immortal or an ancestor is not to stand in the position of the oppressor, but to bring a better life to the bottom. Just like the idler Jiang Li in the book "The Mahayana Period", without a sense of mission and pursuit and only focusing on his own enjoyment, he is destined to have no good results. The struggle continues and the firepower is passed down from generation to generation. After Lin Wen has experienced this catastrophe, he will definitely bring new wind to the decadent world of cannibalistic immortality. It is also possible that Daozu exerted his power and controlled his place of ascension, allowing him to worship at the Qingyun Sect, using Huang Mao to promote the development of the plot, and using the gentleness of the senior sister and junior sister to restrain Lin Wen within the sect, and did not let him go down the mountain until his cultivation level was high. Chapter 2 also mentioned that his vision was very narrow when he was in Dongzhou, which is also a manifestation of cognitive limitations. If Lin Wen had seen the scene at the beginning of this book from time travel, he might have raised the flag and steamed Gillette beans long ago. Therefore, it may be that Daozu set up this situation in order to maintain his own order, making him a stakeholder of the oppressor from the beginning, a petty bourgeoisie who lives comfortably in the sect, and a middle class who only wants to climb up in the sect (capital) narrative. 4. Conclusion and plot prediction Lin Wen, who was bound by the sect's narrative and who only wanted to become a flying immortal, has become one of the boring cannibalistic immortal cultivators who are consistent with the theme of the immortal world. Daozu made so many preparations, but in the end, he may not have noticed Lin Wen, a very qualified immortal cultivator. What Daozu cares about is whether someone will kick him down and kill the immortal cultivator with blood, not Lin Wen, a good disciple of the sect and a diligent ascetic cultivator. And now Lin Wen is about to realize the truth of the world of immortality, realizing that as long as there is opportunity, there will be distribution problems, and as long as there is oppression, there will be resistance. This is the Emperor Lin Wen that Taozu fears, and this is the historical mission that Lin Wen shoulders - he will sweep away the demons and ghosts in the world of immortality just like bringing a new order to the empire, and build a world where everyone can happily watch the live broadcast of the long-legged fairy (wrong). This time, the real emperor Lin Wen is finally coming. To borrow a sentence from the book "Cultivation of Immortals": "Immortals, are you trembling? The Great Emperor Lin Wen, burdened with the causes of thousands of calamities, is about to arrive in your world!". The disciples of the Qingyun Sect who cut off the cause of disaster and separated from the masses have died. The great emperor Lin Wen, who shoulders the mission and carries the vision of a better life for the people at the bottom of the empire and the world of immortality, is about to return!
Lin Wen, I am in the world of immortality, where are you?
If you haven't updated for so many days, I'll have to take off your hood if you catch me.
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Some people write with higher quality and more fans, and each book has better grades than the other. Some people write more excuses and have fewer fans, and the grades are worse than the other. It is hard to imagine that a person who writes a book can be so disgusting. He neither takes the work seriously nor the readers seriously. He lies, deceives and confuses things. It all lies in two words, attitude
I would like to ask, how many people read this book because of Please Don't Interrupt My Cultivation of Immortality?
You might as well write Lin Wen Saibo Cultivation of Immortality. The people who read this book are not the audience of traditional immortals. Wouldn't it feel uncomfortable for you to write about traditional immortals? Why can't you write the kind of article that "dare to make the sun and moon change the sky"?
The writing feels better, but the plot is honestly a little disappointing. After more than ten chapters, it becomes more and more inexplicable, and it doesn't match the ending of Xiu Xian. I know it is still in the foreshadowing stage, or the "first suppression" stage, but it has been like this for so long, which is a bit... But in the end, there is still too little content every day. I am dying of waiting, so I recommend updating more! No, this is not called a burst update, this is called a supplementary update! Make up for the previous chapter of reviewing pigeons!
This is the last book. The author integrated so many elements of the Souls game into the previous book. How did you write that reply? You didn't reflect the darkness and epicness of Souls at all. You simply downplayed the concept of Souls and wrote it into a mindless and cool article.
Haven't seen you for a long time
Eight months. I just accidentally saw that someone liked my review on the book Don't Disturb three years ago, and suddenly I remembered that this author is not remembered by Shanchuan. I saw that this new book of yours has been discontinued for eight months. It doesn't matter if you don't update or open new books. In life, being happy is the most important thing. I hope you can be happy in your own world. The rivers and lakes are far away, and I wish you good luck in martial arts.
When you were writing Lin Wen, did you feel that your grades were not good enough so you cut it? Alas, things have really changed.
Welcome Emperor Lin Wen
Here we go, the hot man is back 😍😍😍
It feels like the same idea as the first book, but it is not as good-looking as the first one. The first book did a lot of foreshadowing, described a lot of background, and wrote very comprehensively about the political and social situation, giving people a feeling that society is hopeless. But the appearance of the protagonist broke this despair, coupled with the ability similar to "omniscience and omnipotence" and the desire to pursue immortality, it can be said to be completely "out of touch" with that world. In the eyes of outsiders, it is particularly noble and incredible. The author also wrote the second book Although it became repetitive and boring later, the ending was well written. The third book was really ordinary, the pace was too fast, the characters and background were not well described, and even the appearance of the heroine seemed to be missing In short, I think the author wrote the world view in detail and completeness in the first two books. The first one focused on the superstructure, the second one focused on the system of cultivation and the source of the apocalypse. The third book feels like it may not have been explained yet, and the writing may not have been so careful.
Wouldn't it be better to just name it "Slaying Demons", or the plot will change to the collapse of immortality and it will become a demon. Immortals and demons are originally opposites, but your new book directly changes the meaning. The fairy you make is not a fairy, and the devil is not a devil. I finally waited until you opened a new book. I feel like the plot introduction doesn't even have a good intention.
Have you lost contact with Lin Wen before? I want to see Sheriff Lin, but I don't want to see Lin Tianzun🙂
What's going on? It hasn't been released yet. The results are so good. If you don't work hard quickly, what are you doing every day?
Chapter 1: What the hell is Lin Wen introducing himself? He joined the Qingyun sect to make a side story. Isn't it because he is older and has high bones? He has entered the sect normally. He has been an ordinary disciple for half a year. How come he is a genius after entering in this book? The system has become a Taoism and his personality feels different. Is there a parallel world?
I hope the author can resolve some matters as soon as possible, take good care of himself and start a new book soon.
No need to look, it's been 26 years. It's a miracle that it can still be updated 😎
Why are there only eight chapters left in what I'm reading? Did I encounter a bug?
Why not update it?
Has the author changed his vest and written a new book?
? ? ? Why are you a eunuch? ? ?
I came from County Magistrate Lin and saw that he died young at 13w. What's going on, author? I didn't even dare to click on the first chapter. Your "Please Don't Interrupt My Cultivation of Immortality" is the only book I have fully ordered. The other books are either half-ordered or pirated copies. Even if you charge double the price for "Killing the Immortal", I will still order it all. Come back soon.
Has it cooled down? Do you still have a small size or something?