Lord of the End Times

It's nice to read, and the writing is very nice, but starting from Chapter 97, the style of painting seems to be more idealistic. I seem to understand why there are comments from literary youths in other books. The protagonist is in a different world, and he has just traveled through time for a few days. At the beginning, he develops, farms, and responds to crises. Even if he wants to save others and save the world later, it is also right, but later The protagonist of this issue is too "compassionate". Not only saves the world, saves the bodies of the poor, but also saves the soul, saves the soul... Too selfless, too loving, buddy, at least the paragraph after chapter 97, don't say that the protagonist is a time traveler, I feel a little less human, this is to become a saint.

Please read it! Please collect it!

There are too many female characters, and it looks like the main character Mina has a harem in a Japanese anime. I don't quite understand the definition of a light novel, but the world view is very good, but the climax is not handled well, and the rescue plot is too bland. Moreover, the people around you should not be overly intellectualized. How can there be so many simple people in a world that is beginning to collapse? Without particularly bad people, there would be no climax of justice. This book reminds me of The Amber Sword. The subject matter is very good. With more embellishments, it will definitely be a masterpiece.

What is the logic behind being besieged by nobles if you treat the common people well? ? ? From ancient times to the present, any aristocratic and privileged class has always used the guise of treating the common people well, whether it is true kindness or false kindness, but it must have this guise.

After reading a few chapters, it is indeed very arrogant. This is the world's perspective. Opening the port for trade would not benefit the lord in any way. Maybe the lord could not collect taxes. If you treat the common people well, you will be besieged by the lords of the country. Maybe the whole country believes in evil gods. 🙂

The first order of 400 is not bad. I have ordered 2,000 every time and there is no problem. Unfortunately, I can't update it. I think it will take a eunuch 🙂

I have to say that the world view at the beginning of this book really attracted me. It is mysterious, fantasy, and nautical. The technology behind it can actually rely on archeology. But the end has come, huh? What is the end? You have to rely on the red moon to send the protagonist to the past to resist. Ah, what is the red moon? The protagonist obtained temporary resistance tools from the elven era of the Fourth Age, but the elves are gone and seem to have been left behind to become a witch now. Oh, what about the Fourth Age? In the third era, there was a doctor of heavenly principles, which seemed to be their belief. Ah, no? Why is it the third era again? In the kingdom where the protagonist is now, there is a dangerous blood curse that seems to be related to the end. No... The crazy black emperor of the powerful country next door to the protagonist seems to have inherited something from Dr. Tenri. Some pirates noticed the protagonist through treasures. There was also a scholar from some academy next door who discovered the secret of the blood curse and was killed. The protagonist was picking up garbage in the third era. The sun's Faith is actually a civilization of suspected giants in the Fourth Age. It is a mine formed by the god of the sun who dedicated his own kingdom. His faith cannot be openly promoted because of the hidden dangers of rattlesnakes and world levels... Why don't you, the author, stop messing around with the worldview? I had to write the main plot first, but it wasn't until about 30 chapters that I realized that the protagonist originally wanted to farm the land and fight against his own country. Group portraits are not like group portraits, and exploration is not like exploration. Many things are mentioned without being sorted out. What is the main context of the third and fourth eras (what direction is it developing in), what is behind the end of the world and the blood curse, and what is the relationship between natural disasters on the sea. These are not sorted out. At least I personally feel that the writing is really messy. The Lion Heart Kingdom where the protagonist is located is sandwiched between two big powers. The left is a powerful military power, and the right is free to research science and technology. The royal family of the country has turned to something like an evil god. The protagonist Tanada intends to fight, relying on the super-tech products obtained from the archeology of the Third and Fourth Epochs, and behind it there is the terminal existence that destroyed the Third and Fourth Epochs. I can understand all of this, but I can only understand it. In just 50 chapters, the world view is too broad...

I have never completely written a book.

Seeing the latest chapter is considered as food. These days of digging for gold, I finally got a small guarantee. Cast a monthly vote. My tastes are getting more and more sophisticated now. Nowadays, I read many books after one or two hundred chapters and abandon them after two or three hundred chapters. I hope this book can see the ending. But I felt suspenseful. When I saw that this book had a plot of traveling back to history, I guessed that it would probably collapse in the later stages. I had read many books that revised history, and I almost couldn't stand it in the middle and later stages, so I gave up on it. The logic was flawed.

Don't update it. In the past few months, it was updated every day. Now I can't fart even a week. It would be better if there was a blacklist in the starting point.