
A Chinese Restaurant Built from the Ninja World
从忍界开始打造的中餐厅
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- Ongoing
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- 230k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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How about figuring out the positioning? Who the hell wants to watch a food show and find Naruto? I want to see how spicy a bag of rice is.
It's a bit too old-fashioned, like the urban gourmet restaurant article from eight years ago, and it also abandoned the slap-in-the-face pretense of 188 egg fried rice. Naruto and Nezuko couldn't bear to look at it, which didn't make it any better. But if you want to talk about daily heart-warming stories, they are not heart-warming enough. The protagonist's family and friends do not have a deep bond. I feel no deep bond with Naruto since we are regular customers or more. Climbing the technology tree to innovate, this healing dish is not an interesting idea, so I didn't know what I was looking at for a long time. There is no goal and no core. If you really don't know how to write, then it's okay to let the protagonist be led by the system. I can think of it: collecting seven ninja swords can enhance kitchen utensils, collecting snakes around Ryuji Cave can produce chakra snake meat every day, and collecting wood escape wood can expand the store. . . It's really boring for you to do nothing all day long.
Where is the Chinese food besides Chaos?
I read a book many years ago, and it was Naruto who started the food business. It made me sick when I wrote about the underdeveloped little boy. I wrote about Tsunade in her fifties and Mei Terumi in her thirties competing for a little boy. It's disgusting. You're numb. Don't think about it. You're just an adult. Tsunade is almost seventy.
It's such a pity that I couldn't create the taste of a late-night canteen. I wrote about Chinese food (? It's almost meaningless)
Don't give up!
Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~
Have you given up? That's it
No more updates?😭😭
Maybe some people will read the content about Naruto adding a food show, but adding a Chinese restaurant, then I'm not sure. Chinese food may be a bit novel when it's put abroad, but it's our daily life in China, and there is zero sense of expectation.
Overall it's okay, typos can be fixed. The food is not improving fast enough. The first people who ordered here were probably for the Chinese cuisine. When I came in, I saw snacks such as tonkotsu ramen and octopus balls + starch sausage. There were not enough Chinese dishes later. In addition, there are also plots about the diners, so try to write more to make the story full without seeming to drag out.