Shushan: Extinction

The setting of Shushan is innovative and combines the strengths of Wuyouliu and Xianxia. But the writing is really a bit miserable Firstly, the beginning is mediocre. Many readers of this chapter also mentioned that the beginning of the chapter is about a Thai master. If it is not written, it will not affect the plot at all. Compared with the thirteen blood-cutting fingers at the beginning of Final Evolution, the difference is not even a little bit different. Secondly, Fang Linyan's "How and How" may even appear in the text. The author refers to the passages he has written before, which is fine, but he even forgot to change the names of the people. This attitude is very detracting. The third is to force the wisdom. The fifth life draws talents, one is red and the other is gold. If you put some effort into describing it, you will not be able to successfully get everyone to accept the gold color. But it gives the impression that the logic of the writing is unclear, and the red talent is good anyway, so I just chose it, and I didn't write the book carefully. In the end, this book is too utilitarian. Many parts are just adapted to the game. The plot, story and logic are ignored as long as Party A gives money. The readability is very poor. I have been chasing Ace Evolution since high school. At that time, Juantu brought me a lot of joy, and I would even read pornographic jokes posted by Juantu on Weibo. However, from the initial evolution to this Shushan, I am really a little disappointed. I feel that not only has the author not made progress, but he has also lost his dedication to writing.

The recent plot is a bit witty The right way brings harm to the world and the demon saves the world It's so fake, don't those little demons eat meat? In your previous novels, monsters eat humans...

Alas, love has made me so haggard. I quit. One like and I quit for one day

Six novels, the most diligent are the first two, and the most difficult are the four.

Grass jelly. The author is good at characters and short story plot arrangements, with a tendency to be serious and occasionally funny. The protagonist's outlook is chaotic and kind-hearted. He does whatever he wants but is decent and has a bottom line. The plot arrangement is mainly based on conspiracy, with many accidents, and the main line is slow to advance. In addition, the protagonist can travel through any timeline, which may cause logic collapse later on.

Anything else is fine, just use modern pop music. I can't accept it. Every time I see it, I feel emotionally withdrawn. It's disgusting.

Wan Tu is still not suitable for writing fairy tales, it doesn't feel stiff at all.

If you are a pure Shushan fan, I think it is reasonable for Shushan to suppress all dissatisfaction, but in this world background with Yuan Hong and Donghuang Zhong, it is a prehistoric background. What qualifications does Shushan have to suppress the world? Don't understand

I just read the first five chapters, and I subscribed to 20 chapters specifically to complain about it. Can you please stop: I lost it! Throw it away! What are you throwing away? Don't you feel awkward, brother? Ahhhh! It's only five chapters and I'm losing so much! If there is more later, I will report your work for using foul language.

Isn't it a little bit to rely on brainwashing superpowers to lure people to die? It is recommended to rewrite, otherwise it will be really easy to have a big problem.