Shushan: Extinction

The setting of Shushan is innovative and combines the strengths of Wuyouliu and Xianxia. But the writing is really a bit miserable Firstly, the beginning is mediocre. Many readers of this chapter also mentioned that the beginning of the chapter is about a Thai master. If it is not written, it will not affect the plot at all. Compared with the thirteen blood-cutting fingers at the beginning of Final Evolution, the difference is not even a little bit different. Secondly, Fang Linyan's "How and How" may even appear in the text. The author refers to the passages he has written before, which is fine, but he even forgot to change the names of the people. This attitude is very detracting. The third is to force the wisdom. The fifth life draws talents, one is red and the other is gold. If you put some effort into describing it, you will not be able to successfully get everyone to accept the gold color. But it gives the impression that the logic of the writing is unclear, and the red talent is good anyway, so I just chose it, and I didn't write the book carefully. In the end, this book is too utilitarian. Many parts are just adapted to the game. The plot, story and logic are ignored as long as Party A gives money. The readability is very poor. I have been chasing Ace Evolution since high school. At that time, Juantu brought me a lot of joy, and I would even read pornographic jokes posted by Juantu on Weibo. However, from the initial evolution to this Shushan, I am really a little disappointed. I feel that not only has the author not made progress, but he has also lost his dedication to writing.

Alas, love has made me so haggard. I quit. One like and I quit for one day

The recent plot is a bit witty The right way brings harm to the world and the demon saves the world It's so fake, don't those little demons eat meat? In your previous novels, monsters eat humans...

Grass jelly. The author is good at characters and short story plot arrangements, with a tendency to be serious and occasionally funny. The protagonist's outlook is chaotic and kind-hearted. He does whatever he wants but is decent and has a bottom line. The plot arrangement is mainly based on conspiracy, with many accidents, and the main line is slow to advance. In addition, the protagonist can travel through any timeline, which may cause logic collapse later on.

Six novels, the most diligent are the first two, and the most difficult are the four.

Anything else is fine, just use modern pop music. I can't accept it. Every time I see it, I feel emotionally withdrawn. It's disgusting.

Wan Tu is still not suitable for writing fairy tales, it doesn't feel stiff at all.

If you are a pure Shushan fan, I think it is reasonable for Shushan to suppress all dissatisfaction, but in this world background with Yuan Hong and Donghuang Zhong, it is a prehistoric background. What qualifications does Shushan have to suppress the world? Don't understand

I just read the first five chapters, and I subscribed to 20 chapters specifically to complain about it. Can you please stop: I lost it! Throw it away! What are you throwing away? Don't you feel awkward, brother? Ahhhh! It's only five chapters and I'm losing so much! If there is more later, I will report your work for using foul language.

Isn't it a little bit to rely on brainwashing superpowers to lure people to die? It is recommended to rewrite, otherwise it will be really easy to have a big problem.

When I looked back, I found that my previous comment had been deleted. I just said that the format you posted with Wang Leehom was really inappropriate. Didn't you copy the lyrics without considering the occasion?

The flow of funds was cut off, so I could only commit suicide with a knife in tears 😎

I still want to read Infinite Stream. The natural selection of Guitu is so well written. This Shushan book is too bad. I thought that the first evolution was the worst part of Guitu. Compared with this book, in addition to the setting bugs and the weak protagonist and supporting characters, the plot of First Evolution is good at least. Ace Evolution 9.0 Rating Final Evolution 8.9 Rating The Last Apostle 6.8 Rating Natural Selection 8.8 Rating Initial Evolution 7.8 Rating

This is the only book I have ever seen that has a ghostwriter and can even stop updating it. The ghostwriter can no longer write it.

Go back and continue writing about Infinite Flow Lord God Space.

Just end it. It's already broken.

These chapters are obviously not ready to be written anymore, and are ready for the end. As long as he has some conscience, he should end it as soon as possible. TM's revolt has no spirituality now, and his talent has been exhausted. There are too many secular things that make him unable to calm down to observe and write books. It is not the time to be ace and final.

Tu Da, it's so miserable to be your fan, you still delay updating every week.

I feel like I have semi-retired. I hang out with AI and gunners, and I occasionally make my own mistakes. I am no longer short of money to rest on my laurels.

I thought it was relatively superficial at first, but this Shushan is even more of a novice. Where did the original writing about Ace Evolution and Final Evolution go? !

Name: Gong Tianwu Introduction: You are a cunning ordinary person, with good execution ability and courage, and you are in the rising period of success. However, your own potential is insufficient and you have wasted too many reincarnations in the early stage, so it is almost impossible to go too far in the future. Number of reincarnations: four Hourglass of destiny: 89%, a small disaster is brewing. Soul age: 34 years old/49 years old (for you, the death of the body is not the end, the death of the soul is the end of life) Destiny:? ? ? (You do not have access to this kind of information yet) Basic attributes: The average value of a normal eighteen-year-old adult man is 5 points, which can be used as a reference. Strength: This attribute determines the melee damage and weight to the enemy. 14 Points→22 points (normal) Alertness: This attribute determines balance, direction, and sensitivity. Characters with high agility will also have a higher success rate of evasion during combat. 17 points → 25+1 points (normal) + Chitou +1 Root Bone: 7 points, this attribute is innate, only extremely rare equipment, props, and means can bless it. A prerequisite for practicing martial arts/cultivating immortality, the higher the bone, the better. To test a child's aptitude for cultivating immortals, one must first determine the root and bone, and then determine the affinity of the five elements. (Very low. For those who can practice to become an innate master under normal circumstances, 10 points of Gengu is the passing line, 12 points of Gengu is the normal level, and 15 points of Gengu is the excellent line.) Comprehension: The higher the comprehension, the faster you can learn martial arts and immortal arts. 8→9 points, (low) (words say +1 permanent increase) Fuyuan: 7 points, this attribute is innate, only extremely rare equipment, props, and means can bless it. It is the legendary luck, the standard equipment of the European Emperor. Energy: Reading, practicing, performing martial arts, etc. All require it. The calculation method is basic energy 60 points + comprehension x5 = 100 points. 185 Points → 244 points (normal) Qi and blood: determines a person's life and death, if it reaches zero, he will die. The calculation method is basic energy and blood 70 points + root bone The calculation method is 10 points + Comprehension X2 = 26 points. 32 Points → 54 points (Special additional bonus of the Purple Air Cave True Art) (Fetal Light Pill permanent +5) (very high) Abnormal state: Marrow corrosive erysipelas, which reduces the upper limit of qi and blood by 35%, and is extremely difficult to get rid of. Combat data: This data is a value that directly affects combat. Entry equipment: Ci Shuo, Chi Tread. Common equipment: Flying Eagle Suit: Defense power +47 points Sailing Wind Bow: Long-range attack power +55 points Yanling Knife: Melee attack power +35 points Ironwood Shield: Defense power +52 points, passive ability: block. Ranged attack power (equipped with Howling Wind Bow) = 55 points (basic damage) + 207 points (additional bonus of innate true energy + 6 years of practicing archery) Melee attack power (equipped with Yan Ling Dao) = 35 points (basic damage) + 142 points (additional bonus of innate true energy) Defense: 21 points → 68 points (without shield) Cause points: 22

I started to know it from Ace Evolution. I basically followed all the previous books. Natural Selection is a good read. The new book is also very good.

There is news, a new book will be released in early June.

What about the new book? What about the new book? What about the new book? ! ! !

I have always felt that there is more to Short Earth than that I have had a feeling of unfulfillment since I watched Ace more than ten years ago I firmly believe that this guy has not fully exerted himself The judgment of this tracking order feels very appropriate Good luck to Short Earth next year, I have to make a point

It's just resting on the laurels, and then the AI ​​and the gunman take turns, and you can basically see the plot behind it. So disappointed.

Compared with the original, this book has much less useless plots, excessive metaphors and racing content, the plot is much faster, and the reading experience is much better. I hope Tutu can create more characters like the Ten Strong Men, Wuxian Fu, Jiao Shi, and Tang Jinchan in the new book!

The book I finished last year didn't publish any final words or trailer for the new book, and simply disappeared.

Forever Ace fan, please come out with a new book

Except for the lack of updates, the whole story is still very exciting, the characters and supporting roles are good, and the golden finger is novel. Come on, the author💪!