Journey to the West: Immortal Immortal

Personally, I suggest that the backbone of the White Bone Demon can be made into a hard whip, like Zhao Gongming and Wen Zhong, or a bow, or a ten magic sword. Since it is the skill of a great sage, he will definitely have a long weapon. I suggest a phoenix-winged gilt boring or a square halberd. It is normal for a monkey to play with a stick, but it feels inappropriate for a wolf to play with a stick.

Already seen the latest chapter. I have to say that the author's writing style is really good, and I can feel that the author has great ideas. Regarding the setting of the world view, the setting of practice, and the interpretation of Journey to the West, I have my own opinions, which is refreshing to read. The only thing that feels lacking is probably the plot arrangement. I don't know how to write novels, and I don't know how to express them, but after reading novels for so many years, I can still gain some experience. At present, when reading these chapters, there is really not much sense of immersion. For example, after reading a chapter, or reaching the update point, it is difficult to feel the feeling of not having finished it. Of course, the author has just written a novel, so it is reasonable that he does not have such strong control over the plot, and he should not have too strict requirements. It's just that the writing and setting of this book are so good that this aspect seems a bit outstanding in comparison. I hope the author can improve this aspect in the following chapters and bring us a better and exciting story. The author is brave and diligent, and he becomes a god in one book!

It's rare to see such a well-written novel about cultivating immortals.

Why do you practice immortality? Personally, I feel that you will live forever. In order to be able to enjoy better things and be free, if you are pure and have few desires, you might as well become a monk or eunuch.

The author's knowledge reserve is very sufficient, and the writing style is fluent. The writing is really good. The overall reading feels very stable and smooth. However, after reading so many chapters, I always feel that something is missing. I thought about it for a long time and discovered the problem. The plot is unattractive. After dozens of chapters, it is mediocre, just like the free soup in the canteen. It has some taste, but it is still tasteless shabu-shabu water. It is not as good as the carefully brewed American ginseng and Huaishan stewed black-bone chicken soup and tea tree mushroom old hen. Soup, Bawang Huaxiangsnail Pork Bone Soup, Five-fingered Peach and Smilax Poria Soup to remove dampness, Teal Duck and Winter Melon Soup, Lotus Seed and Lily Lean Meat Soup, Tremella Papaya and Pork Bone Soup, Fig Lean Meat Soup, Tangerine Peel, Bamboo Cane Hairy Root and Dragon Bone Soup, Old Pigeon Mung Bean Soup, Carrot Jade Rice and pork ribs soup... These soups are of high nutritional value and good taste. I hope the author can add some ups and downs to the plot, otherwise the reading will feel like advanced math knowledge slipping through my smooth brain 😊

A rare book in ten years! The author's writing skills are excellent! Heroes, come and vote quickly!

It's really poisonous. It's amazing to be able to read three pictures. 1. The original person is a little demon with 500 years of Taoism. He died due to three disasters and was time-traveled 2. The protagonist is the wolf demon Ling Xuzi who makes alchemy. He was forced by the White Bone Lady to make alchemy. In my impression, isn't this wolf demon a subordinate of the black bear spirit? No matter 3. The three pills you practiced can greatly increase your cultivation. You don't even dare to smell them. They are dedicated to Madam White Bones. The co-author of the book, the alchemist, has never practiced this kind of pill before. He gave it away after practicing it for the first time. So how do others know that you are so good at making pills? I also ask you to practice 4. It's really crazy. I copied so many original texts of Journey to the West. I understand that they are good poems and good practice formulas. But with so much and so much water, if you learn the great secrets and magic from the stone tablets, you can still write two books full of water 5. But I quite like his idea. If the author changes it, kick me

I hope many women will recommend the beauties Princess Iron Fan, Kang Jinlong, Spider Four 1, Pingping

Most of them are related to Buddhism. The more I look at them, the more something seems wrong.

Not bad, I hope there won't be a female protagonist

Personally, I suggest that although Sun Wukong is stronger than most immortals and Buddhas, he has too little background. The battle between immortals and Buddhas cannot be won by strength. I think Sun Wukong can't practice elixirs, weapons, formations, and has no powerful offensive and defensive magical powers. He also doesn't have any powerful magic weapons. There are no powerful spells in the Seventy-Two Transformations. Think about what powerful spells Sun Wukong used in Journey to the West? We are all close to each other, and the magic weapon is the sea-fixing needle.

The writing is very good. I have voted for the monthly vote. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

Are you writing classical Chinese? Too stereotyped

It's very well written, I like it very much, but no one reads it. Please get more people here.

Well written but too short

Many people say that Sun Wukong has already fought against all the gods and Buddhas in the sky. In fact, the highest level is a tie with Erlang Xiansheng Zhenjun, which is slightly inferior (don't say that Wukong debuted late, you tell me the fact is that it is slightly inferior, that plot is over) Quanquan is the Erlang Shen Quanhui of the Wukong Society and is even more handy), and he fought on a par with Wang Lingguan, the Taoist top thug and protector god, and a bunch of miscellaneous positions (Wukong should be stronger than him, because Wang Lingguan has a bunch of helping Xingjun next to him). Then the one with the highest status in the battle was beaten by Taishang Laojun. Other than that, the real big shots didn't show up. There was no conspiracy. Chun Chun just didn't need to show up. Sanqing was the God of Creation and Destruction and belonged to the Supreme God, so he couldn't be bothered with it. How can anyone think that Wukong is really the best in the three realms, that is, the Tathagata of the five directions and the five elders suppressed Wukong with one move

The writing is good, but I think they are all characters from the Journey to the West story. The main branch is the characters of Journey to the West. Can other new people and new things be added? There must be something different from Journey to the West, for example, there are bears, tigers, dragons, snakes, etc. In the original work. So can the author write some strange animals that are not in the original work? Whether the mantis counts as 🤭, the magic weapon must be different, such as leaves, needles, and mirrors. You can also make up some interesting stories, such as the battle with the King of Civilization in Journey to the West, the Yin-Yang Erqi Mountain, the Ten Jue Formations in Fengshen, etc. Huang Mei's writing is very good. If he writes this thing to life, he can enter the realm of Arhat, Bodhisattva and Buddha. Come on 👍 personal opinion

Author, can you collect more than 10 coins for each chapter? 7. I no longer have the desire to click into single digits.

Comprehensive six-dimensional diagram: Taoism, supernatural powers, magic power, spells, magic weapons, and martial arts.

What does the author do? The writing is good. Are there any other books?

What the hell are you writing? You should read what you write. Why don't you read it after you finish writing the book? I'm convinced too. It's just that the realm is blurry. The protagonist doesn't even practice much. He makes trouble everywhere. Does he really regard himself as a child of fate? ? No wonder no one reads this kind of book. Who can read it?

Well, well, another book to survive. Even if I cut it, I won't come out and talk about it. Sorry, blacklisted