Hogwarts: Who Made Her a Professor?

I can tell from the latest chapter that it was written by a female author. Even if she was prepared in advance, she was still strong enough to encounter a bloody noseless person who couldn't resist. The male author would definitely not handle this in this way, and at least he would escape unscathed. Let's see if your writing style is still like this, please switch to a female channel. Who can stand a male channel?

The writing is not good. There are a lot of embellishments and praises about the heroine's beauty and excellent abilities, but when it comes to describing the protagonist positively, the author can't write it. The writing style is very pretentious. First of all, girls do not discriminate against female authors. What I am criticizing here is also the writing style. The characteristics of pretentiousness and literary youth are shared by both male and female authors. Just don't call me sexist. I only focus on the writing style. A typical example is that there are two books in HP fanfiction, written by male authors. They are too literary and youthful, making them unreadable and completely unreadable.

The writing is rather forced, and the protagonist written by the author is very fragmented. I have never seen the protagonist identify with his Slytherin identity, and then engage in identity politics during the House Cup, taking advantage of Regulus, and never thought of rescuing him. This is a double identity, a brother by blood and a Slytherin hero. Arranging a best friend like Bablin and an alchemy professor is to break the secrecy law in the future? I don't dare to make bold changes to the plot, and when facing Lupin, I don't dare to directly say that Sirius was wronged. Each fan will borrow a little from here and a little from there.

One ID is Let's Run Tangyuan, and the other ID is Running Hard Tangyuan, and the writing styles are quite similar. In addition, the only chapter in Emerald's book that was republished after three years was a book recommendation chapter 🙂🙂. These are all small questions. This time I am back from resurrection hell. Please update more. I will first click on investment and vote monthly to give rewards. Come on, author.

The first few chapters try hard to be funny, but to be honest, the effect is just average. In Chapter 11, the heroine is finally established. I like it. In addition, I think the portrayal of Fudge and the profile of Dumbledore are completely consistent with the original work (by the way, I whisper about the conspiracy theorists, how can a youth literature have so many ugly thoughts). I have invested in it, and I hope the author will stick to it!

It feels like a female channel's writing, the kind of writing that takes a righteous perspective, uses rules, and controls them, but there's nothing exciting about it.

The first three chapters were too awkward, especially the press conference. I didn't realize what was so great about pig's feet. Why can't reporters make it up if they can't get the information? You've just watched this drama in vain. This gossip did not affect the reporter's criticism of the Ministry of Magic at all, so from this position, it is impossible to see what is so powerful about the pig's feet, and it just feels awkward.

How should I put it, the way I used the style in "Yes, Prime Minister" to deal with the behavior of a Ministry of Magic official felt quite right. However, the protagonist's treatment of the "noseless monster" after entering the school was written in a typical female channel way, and I immediately felt extremely uncomfortable. Is it the majority or the minority who feel the same way? The author makes his own statistics. I'm not ready to read any more.

The previous chapter on the Ministry of Magic is a good way for readers to understand the style of this book, but it is too procrastinating for readers who are used to reading fan fiction, so I will help you sort it out. First of all, this book is not an invincible article like "traveling through Harry Potter to familiarize yourself with the plot" or "picking up the invincible system at random", but it is also not an invincible article that starts from a novice or "a cautious hero starts from the novice village at full level". The protagonist Bellvina is a relatively smart ordinary person. She has the strength to defeat Lupine and the financial resources of the Black family (Sirius's sister). She cannot be said to be weak. After all, she is a senior official of the Ministry of Magic. The part that was scolded by many people in the first few chapters shows Belvina's character. She understands the bureaucracy of the Ministry of Magic very well, and she also has enough social capital and ability. She doesn't like trouble, but she is not afraid of getting into trouble. So it is not difficult to understand why Lupine and Dumbledore tricked her into teaching at Hogwarts through Fudge. As for some people who think it is strange for Bellvina to contact Quirrell, in fact Voldemort came because of the surname "Black". He also tried to contact Severus but ran into a wall (probably only using Quirrell's identity). It was not Bell who took the initiative to investigate and pick up the case. Touch, in fact, there is no special description of the three little dragons. Instead, the focus is on educating Draco. This little dragon appears to be particularly well-behaved in front of his aunt 😁 And at the end of the first year, in the plot where Lao Deng helped Gryffindor gain points (fans should all know it, it should not be considered a thunderstorm), The protagonist expressed her position to Dumbledore in her own way: "Belvina is a Slytherin who fought against Voldemort, not Black who defected from Slytherin to seek asylum from Dumbledore." So I hope everyone can move their necks a little. Parts, understand each character's respective stance and psychological dynamics, there is no need to deify Lao Deng as a great conspirator, he is also an ordinary person who makes mistakes, and will ignore the discord between houses in order to cultivate a "savior", and I believe Belvina Black will make Slytherin great again!

The female author? I feel like she writes in a petty style, and then she just comes up with her own ideas, which is a bit self-righteous, very much like some historical works written by women.