She Is the Calamity

Female protagonist but male channel? I do not understand

This book is about a heroine, but the heroine is handsome and strong, and she is not a loli, which is very suitable for me I personally think the description of the battle is very good, it is not boring to watch, the rhythm of the whole book is well controlled, and it is not tiring to read it all the time, the plot is reasonable, and major events are basically foreshadowed There is no poisonous point, it is changed to cut and chop, and it is saved when it is time to save, it is very principled

Ox! The way of writing is so unique! Worship the boss! Humble Bow ~ (Devil's Guide to Captivity), Rhythm Band School, Welcome to Appreciate.

In my opinion, the writing style is top-notch, the plot is also ups and downs, there are foreshadowings before major events, the killings are decisive, and the characterization of the main and supporting characters is remarkable. Unfortunately, it seems that this kind of slow-paced, long-plotted, and less exciting book has no market at the starting point. Personally, I think it's pretty good-looking and I recommend it.

Huh? Why are you raising it for me? 😭😭

It always feels a bit watery, too bland, just like reading everyday articles. Maybe I read too many quick articles? But the plot unfolded really boringly and slowly. What about superpowers? What about suspense? I just watched the meeting between Mike and his son. As far as the content of the previous fifty chapters is concerned, I feel that it does not need so much space to explain. Isn't the protagonist Anastasia? Why do I feel like there are so many descriptions of Mike? The protagonist really becomes a stepmother and raises a great son. It depends on how Mike grows up. It even feels like O God's yellow-haired camera. The novel should highlight the protagonist, right? In my personal consciousness, the protagonist accepts a commission, and then various forces take turns to appear during the commission, various situations, and then what happens to the protagonist. This process should be complete with cause and effect, highlighting the protagonist. However, in the novel, I always feel that Mike is not even given less time than the protagonist.

It's very well written, please encourage us and recommend yourself (Goblin is obsessed with the heart)

The author wanted to write about the power of the city, but obviously he was not very capable. The only effect was that the protagonist, who seemed smart and possessed of strength, was fooled around by people from all walks of life.

The writing is good, but the story is currently lackluster.

Very nice, very interesting style