Dragon Raja: He Returns to Defy Fate
龙族：归来的他，反抗天命
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- Completed
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- 1.2M Words
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- Light Novel
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- ACG Fanfiction
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- 1y ago
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Sun Wukong rebelled against divine authority, Erlang Shen against imperial authority, and the Third Prince against patriarchal authority. So why didn't the damned, inflexible, and pedantic Confucian scholars also rebel? Author, you missed one! 🤔
Well, the book is pretty good, but there's just one problem: given the story background of dragons, what's the difference between them and chickens when they're at the same level of power as in Black Myth? This is just a matter of immobilization; a single blow from a staff and they're gone.
Without killing, hatred will never end. Not killing, what difference does it make whether I am strong or weak? Do not kill, for all sentient beings are sins. Not killing is a dream, an illusion, an emptiness. Do not kill, for fear of the impermanence of life. Not killing, for youth is but a fleeting moment. Without killing, one cannot attain liberation from suffering. If one does not kill, all actions will lead to the absence of rebirth.
Your fanfiction is truly delightful.
It's well written. From the initial reading, it seems that what's needed for fan fiction is a different mindset than for the original work; skill is secondary. Although everyone knows that the author wrote this book while it was riding the wave of popularity, it still has some excellent aspects.
I thought Norton's fight with Old Lu was just the beginning of the battle, but it ended abruptly. I wasn't satisfied, so I wrote my own version. Just for fun, don't take it too seriously.
Norton's gaze sharpened as he watched the golden figure emerge from the molten iron. "Are you dressed as the Monkey King? Too bad you're not Sun Wukong, and I'm not that incompetent Dragon King of the East Sea!" The cold, deep voice was like the clash of iron halberds, and as Norton's jaw opened and closed, you could see sparks flying from his mouth. Clang clang
Have you ever been Sun Wukong? Some of this is just random writing and assumptions.
The plot is a bit bland.
First, build up your armor; only read the free chapters and only provide feedback on the free chapters. So far, the plot feels bland and lacks excitement or twists and turns, like drinking plain water. The protagonist has great abilities but just coasts through the whole thing. For example, in Old Tang's storyline, the protagonist is just slacking off.
Author, please specify whether it's a single or multiple female lead, and give a clear answer about who the female lead is, otherwise I won't dare to follow the story.
Author, are you trying to create a villain by writing Caesar like this? Is Caesar in Dragon Raja really such a sore loser? So petty and narrow-minded? I'm not a Caesar fan, but in Dragon Raja, I guess aside from not being able to share women, Caesar is pretty magnanimous in other aspects.
I've just started reading fanfiction, so let me share my thoughts on "official pairings" and the choice of the female lead.
Let me share a really amazing concept: only ghosts can kill ghosts! Similarly, if you want to write a good fan fiction about the Dragon Raja, you have to abandon the original story's plot where Lu Mingfei is the only one who becomes a god and instead write: only the Dragon King can kill the Dragon King! Zero: Zero -- Explosion -- Lu Mingfei + Lu Mingze.