Darkest Dungeon: I Can Plunder Traits Without Limit

This is not a novel, this is a game. The author records the process of playing the game, pretending to be a novel 🙂

I asked why there are so few discussion posts. It turns out that the author set the conditions for speaking. One thing to say, I think this can be set up after it is put on the shelves. A larger number of discussion posts can attract more people to read it.

How many game mods have you done?

It's great, I almost missed it because of the title and introduction. The settings of the dungeon and the secret sect are sewn together. The background is a human gathering area after the end of the world (similar to the afterglow of the night). The dungeon is God's deduction of the past and the future (similar to the shepherd's secret narrative). In addition, the author belongs to the Way of Outer Gods, and his writing style is not bad, but he is suspected of having a history of being a eunuch (in addition, the fan limit for new books may be unreasonable)

The writing is okay, but there is one problem, it is too wordy. The text still needs to be refined, and it should avoid OOC and don't add some ridiculous self-pleasure.

It's a bit like the Shepherd's Tantra. The problems between the two are exactly the same. First, the protagonist spends several chapters talking to the supporting characters to set up the setting, and then the plot advances a little bit, and then continues with a few chapters of setting. Especially later when the protagonist's need for upgrading is not high, the protagonist just stands there and thinks about it, without taking a step for a long time.

There are too many descriptions and explanations in my mind, and because there are few updates, it is even more disastrous to chase. It is really like watching, and it will explode to death just by holding on.

The setting is okay, the writing is okay, but the plot arrangement feels problematic. The previous pacing was too fast, and the protagonist was exposed to a lot of high-level information too early, so much so that after more than 100 chapters, the setting was still thrown away in large sections. According to the protagonist's entry, the rhythm should be quite satisfactory from gold to platinum, and the beginning of contact with these in-depth background settings. The early development part should be generally stable. The dungeon is out of control as a hidden message. It will not be out of control until "The Tide of Shadows" is introduced later. (The good news is that strength also increases with the plot, and there is no situation where low strength relies on luck and gambling to participate in high-level situations) Maybe this part of the author's outline is just the early content, and the real excitement is still behind.

The plot is good but most of it is useless, and then there is nothing exciting about it. Apart from the interesting setting, there is nothing else that makes people want to read on. I suggest the author to read "The Atlas of Heaven and Man" written by Misdao. It also has a lot of plots, but it is written by a lot of people. I hope the author can make progress in the next book.

Entries are rare in the setting and are useful throughout life, but many of the entries written by the author are only useful in the early stage 😰 and are difficult to obtain.