Invincible: Explosive Proficiency, Flying Knives to Become a God

When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you watch the third watch, the slightest praise begins to sound, and the number of dead harvests begins to decrease. When you watch the fifth update, readers' support spontaneously forms, and the voices of praise become louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the great Confucian scholars' debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in your long life, your name will leave dazzling traces. Updating may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of the problems come from insufficient updates. So, don't stop. Update update update (copied and pasted, I don't have that much ink) (￣ω￣)

Qin Shuang doesn't know Tianshuang Fist? Is there any royal law? Are there any laws?

If you want to have a harem, don't get involved with your fiancée, otherwise it will be no different from Chen Shimei

The author who can write the Biography of Two Dragons of the Tang Dynasty must be at least forty years old

Hall Master Qin of Tianxiahui actually doesn't know how to use Tianshuang Fist 🤭

The title of the book made me feel embarrassed. What's there to brag about? Gu Zhenren's Bo Qingbao character is not higher than it. Five-finger fist heart sword, sword splitting the five continents Asian immortals, blessed by love... That awesome person didn't invade the heaven and fight in the wilderness. It's awesome to open a sky-breaking gate.

My scalp was numb as I watched the plot, and I always felt that there was something wrong with the pig's trotters' IQ.

Shouldn't it be from Tianshuang Fist to Tianxiahui?

The author's writing is very confusing every time he attacks. Every time he takes a shot, he has to reach a set distance. The writing is too dull. It is as effective as a gun. The killing distance is 400 meters. Can you not kill someone if you stand 500 meters away? It's just that there is a difference in accuracy. I'll hit wherever the 12-foot finger points. If the distance is exceeded, can't I hit? It's not easy to hit the head, and it's hard to hit a piece as big as the upper body? If you can't hit the head with a gun, why can't I hit the body? I just eat the settings.

It's a bit mindless to overwhelm the protagonist. Just to gain experience and upgrade, there are various restrictions. Can't you just increase the experience value by more? I still have the nerve to sleep a little more every night, but how many months did it take to increase it to 5? Normal people who are helpful in practicing martial arts should not sleep for ten days to fully refresh themselves? Or is it deliberately suppressing the protagonist? It's boring to have this kind of subject matter that overwhelms the protagonist. I suggest you watch Martial Arts Changsheng Starting from Inner Alchemy and see how the author writes this kind of subject matter without overpowering the protagonist.

Damn it, the setting that requires you to have sex with a woman to increase your attribute points is really disgusting.

My suggestion is not to fight for hegemony in the world. It doesn't matter what you want. Just rely on a gang to fight for the world. By the time you get started, Li Tang will have conquered a lot of territory. Unless the halo of the protagonist is forcibly reduced, it will be meaningless. It is better to just hang out in the world and look good.

The introduction just smells like a non-Lu diaosi.

Please change the name of the book. People in the Tang Dynasty can only hang out in third-rate gangs.

I thought that the golden finger of liver proficiency in the martial arts world would be different from the fantasy world, but it was still the same routine. I wrote it for a long time and not even a week passed. Why did it have to be so compact? Give it more time and you will die, right? The entire enemy does not give you any time and keeps forcing you to progress on the edge of life and death. I have seen enough. I just want to vomit. I want to see a lighter liver proficiency now. Do you have any recommendations?

It's really awesome. The protagonist can train an army with eight golden lock formations in one month. What is the concept of training from ordinary soldiers to such top elites? With this method, it only takes one year of training to conquer the world. Before, there was a comment section asking whether the protagonist's martial arts was too strong. Now it seems that martial arts is nothing. The army has already been promoted.

It's boring. I'm wandering around for more than ten chapters... It's not cool to have cheats and cause trouble everywhere. Isn't it annoying?

Nowadays, there are many novels written by AI. Individuals can write novels.

I strongly suggest that the author later names the martial arts of Flying Knife Technique as "Immortal Killing Flying Knife", or a nickname will do. How can you go out and get involved without a resounding nickname? Look at the Evil King, the Yin Queen, and the Heavenly Sword. They sound like top masters. In the future, they may be nicknamed "Immortal-Slaying Flying Sword" Qin Shuang, or "Magic Sword" Qin Shuang...

Now anyone can write a novel, just copy it with AI

This thing should be written by AI

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It's rare that there are people writing fan stories about the Tang Dynasty, come on

I went and read a few other books with plots very similar to this one. It's nothing like giving the heroine a dozen chapters at the beginning, and then she fights monsters to upgrade and change dungeons. Are you a studio?

You need to concentrate on gaining proficiency before getting started. It is normal to gain a little proficiency after three or five times. After getting started, you must use it beyond the range of the skill's special effects to gain proficiency. There are various restrictions on talent before it even takes off. It doesn't feel good to enable it all the time, so why bother with it? Just write down that your intelligence, talent, and martial arts skills are ten times or a hundred times that of ordinary people. The plug-in for proficiency disables the most important function that can increase proficiency in one go. So what's the difference between enabling it and not enabling it? Other than to distract readers, I don't quite understand what purpose this setting has.

I like the writing very much. I will use Qidian to buy coins to read your novel in the future 👍👍👍👍

So far pretty good looking. I hope it won't be like the original work where the world is inexplicably given up to Li Shimin in the end. Fan fiction doesn't need to be consistent with history.

The author can also write about fantasy, zombies and Hollywood movies and TV series🪖🪖🪖

Shock was used too much. It was okay at first, but later there was no other way to write it. What I saw at first glance was shock, shock, and the invincible flow was too much.

I haven't read martial arts novels for a long time, but the writing is okay.