The Shuttle Door Between All Heavens and All Realms

If you don't know how to write emotional dramas, then don't write them. When you were the emperor of the Three Kingdoms and didn't want women, you went to Yitian to rape Yao Yue, then poisoned Yao Yue and then raped Wang Yuyan. Is this mentally ill?

Can you make the protagonist a little deeper and more serious? Don't make it look like a funny character and have no temperament at all.

It's useless to randomly move the plot world and integrate it randomly.

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Have you ever seen Mortal? Jiyin and Tuotian are both Luanxinghai monks. There is an endless sea in the middle. The protagonist relies on the ancient teleportation array and needs a great teleportation talisman, and even the incarnation monk can't fly through it.

People watching this are so embarrassed that they have cancer. I really can't stand it anymore.

I just read Chapter 4, and when I saw the marks on the gold bars rubbed off, I couldn't help but comment. Are you stupid? It's not right if you don't rub them off? It proves that it is left by the older generation, and there is no trouble at all. At least it is more expensive and safer than mistaking it as coming from a shady origin.

The protagonist of this book is just a joke. If the author hadn't lowered the IQ of others, the protagonist would have died many times. It is recommended to look at the protagonists of other books of the same type, such as the protagonist Wang Xu in the movie world shuttle door, such as the protagonist Su Xiao in Samsara Paradise. The routine of this book is that the protagonist knows that someone wants to kill him, but the murder attempt fails, the protagonist is angry, and then kills him. If the author doesn't change the character of the protagonist, this will be the same routine in how many worlds he travels to in the future.

I'm starting a new book, so I'll take a seat on the sofa first. The author writes well, come on! 👍

All readers are complaining, everyone understands

The writing and story are fine, but the main character has a low IQ and can't stand it.

The protagonist grows so slowly in this way. Several martial arts worlds have teleportation arrays. The protagonist's strength is so low. The same teleportation array goes to different worlds. That's even more scary. The heroine goes to a more advanced world and feels devastated.

It's so messed up that it's not even as good as a running account.

After reading three chapters, it smells sour and full of negative energy. It is undoubtedly a garbage novel.

The flashlight illuminates the door that can be passed through, but there is no writing on how to come back. Is that door a national one? Don't be afraid that people from other worlds will come through and steal your flashlight!

Bored, no passion, crazy poor

Wdf can think of bringing the terrorist robot to the Shanghai plane, but he doesn't know how to just send a group of soldiers there. The author's brain circuit is strange.

Personally, I feel that it is not possible for machines to dominate. It is necessary to increase the various force values. In the future, I will train my little brother or train soldiers to leverage their strength.

The protagonist is so inhumane that even his wife doesn't believe him and he is so much stronger than his wife.

Dogs can know the secret of time travel, but family members cannot

It's really too cool. The author's writing style is okay. The plot is really bad.

What the hell is Yao Yue? Someone likes this girl? His sister is pretty much the same. I really don't understand that some people like Dongfang Eunuch and Yao Yue. The writing is very special. It's okay to like a white-haired witch who is good at martial arts. Find someone with a positive outlook on life.

I think the writing is okay. I support the author more in this type of book. After a while, when you write more, I will come back and read it together.

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The writing is good but there are too few updates hahaha

It's very interesting. I hope the author will update it soon 😁

If you can travel through time, you will naturally have to travel all over the world, taste all the delicacies in the world, drink all the best wines in the world, cultivate the most powerful magical powers, fight the strongest enemies, and fall in love with the most beautiful women. Only then will this life be considered worthy!