Who Hasn't Raised a Sister Even Though They've All Been Reborn?

The rhythm is lively, the writing is delicate, and the excitement is explosive enough. I also like the emotion. I look forward to it going higher.

Write it down, don't be a eunuch.

Don't tj

Too much of the timeline is focused on the heroine's career, and it feels like some details are missing.

There are three heroines in this book, and it's an obvious harem story. Why do you only like one heroine and belittle the other two heroines? Can't you just want them all? The layout is bigger, it's better to read the book this way. I don't think there is any problem with the heroine's plot currently written by the author. The books on my bookshelf are all harem novels. This book is definitely considered a fairy tale to me. Whether it's Xiao Yangzhi, Tao Tao, or Lin Jing, I like them all. It's a good thing for a heroine to have her own personality. She doesn't have facial expressions and has her own thoughts. This is the heroine I want to see most in harem novels. Just trust the author and that's it. The point of controversy among everyone in the comment area is nothing more than the plot of only liking a certain heroine and hating other heroines. This just proves that the heroine created by the author is very flavorful and can make everyone love and annoy her at the same time. There is a saying: Sometimes what you hate may be more beautiful in the eyes of others than what you like. It is normal to have different opinions, but it is not necessary for others to agree with you. Also, can you recommend some harem novels to me? I am short of books, thank you After reading this book and reading other urban novels, I couldn't stand it 😡

The author has never been in love. The feeling of youth is so vividly written. People who have been in love cannot write about that hazy and throbbing feeling.

After reading a lot, I feel that the positioning of this book is really strange. There is a single female protagonist but not a single female protagonist, and a harem is not a harem. Let's talk about the single heroine, Tao Shuxin and Yang Zhi have been fighting each other; let's talk about the harem, after writing so many emotional lines, Tao Shuxin is still the only one. I just don't understand what the author wants to write. Does he want to write about a harem or a single female protagonist? This is quite a lot of words, isn't it clear about its positioning? If you are a harem, then write about the harem openly. Tang Lin, Su Muqing, and Ye Yining have all been included. If it is a single heroine, don't write so many messy female supporting characters, and hurry up and clarify the relationship between Yang Zhi. In particular, the emphasis is placed on the various figures of the female supporting characters, such as showing legs, being pressed into cakes on the table, and ravines. Why don't you just write about these and let them go fishing? Originally, when I saw that there were three character cards in this book, Tao Shuxin, Lin Jing, and Yang Zhi, I thought they were from the harem, but I ended up writing so many of them. Lin Jing, who created the character card at the beginning, basically didn't appear in it, which is very funny. If you don't plan to write, why create the character card? The later Su Muqing and Ye Yining had a lot of plots but no character cards. I just want to ask if the author can give me an accurate answer as to whether this book is a harem or a single heroine, so that I can decide whether to continue reading it.

Book friends, do you have any recommendations for other sister novels, like this one, where the younger sister is the heroine, and the occasional appearance of the younger sister is not included.

From the beginning to the end, the author did not understand what he wanted to do with this book, nor did he understand the audience of his book, nor did he understand whether he wanted to write about a harem or a single female protagonist. In the end, you can only sell female escorts while deliberately emphasizing your relationship with Tao, but in the end, there is a Yang Zhi waiting to stab you. It can be seen that the author originally wanted to write about a harem in the outline. Lin Jing also had a character card at the beginning, and the label was still "heroine". As a result, it was deleted shortly after. It is normal to be in a deadlock now. I want to leave the single female lead, but there is Yang Zhi there to choose one. I want to leave the harem, but various previous behaviors have restricted her. Unless you marry Yang Zhi to another man or dump Tao, you will definitely not be able to have a single female protagonist. But in the harem, look at how many female characters you left behind, such as Lin Jing, Ye Yining, etc. Why don't you accept so many scenes? It's hopeless. It's normal for the writing to crash. I would like to give you a piece of advice: before writing a novel next time, you'd better think about your audience first, and don't jump around now and then.

Is the author male or female? Even if I am a male, I don't say no. Can I wear gloves when typing? I don't want to be cheated.

After being reborn, my body is no longer used to smoking, so why should I continue to smoke? I don't have the self-control to be reborn, and this time I'm even more ruthless. I started smoking in high school. Have you made any progress?

The votes are given. When you have money in the future, you will definitely find an author to write a single female protagonist 😭😭

This book overall feels so bland, but you can read it when you are bored. However, I always feel that the character Yang Zhi is not written well, and I feel a little uncomfortable. I always want to skip when I see her.

My thoughts after reading the first 10 chapters, this is not a successful middle-aged person traveling through time. This is a second-rate kid from the previous life pretending to be an adult with the thinking of a junior high school student. Divine protagonist.

This book except for the plot about school and my sister. Others. . It's hard to put it into words, whether it's making money or doing business, it's all childish. Okay, business skipped.

Personally, I don't care about female protagonists or female supporting characters, but if the author really wants to turn this girl into a female protagonist instead of a female supporting character, I hope that he can explain why the male protagonist helped her avoid being disturbed and was hospitalized, but she disappeared and stopped contacting her, and only reconnected with him when he had money. If you don't feel a little sick, some people may think it is a poisonous point 😠😠😠

Yang Zhi's role is pitiful. Tao Mingming is a supporting character or something, but the scenes are repeated like this, but his personality is so childish that it's hard to like him. Isn't the title of the book "Adopting a Sister"?

When I read this novel and thought about the experiences of people around me, I felt disgusting. Let me share it with you: My dad is always on top of my mom. After we got married, my mom was really nice to my dad. His job, car, money, status and face were all basically obtained by my mother As a result, he cheated on his wife later, and was very nice to his mistress like the turtle mentioned on the Internet. The key is that he used the family's money to support his mistress instead of relying on himself. Later, when my mother found out, she said: She and I are true love... Later, my mother was very sensible and did not argue with him, and directly asked him to get out of the house. He told us very confidently: Xiaohua truly loves me, and her children treat me as their biological father, unlike this impersonal family! Then came the light speed divorce. In the end, the mistress pretended not to know him and refused to let him in. It was really funny.

Tao Tao feels like first love, although she has never been in love 😭

Seeing it now, my biggest feeling is: the relationship between Tao Tao and the male protagonist is progressing as fast as a rocket. If the later part is not handled well, it will end in minutes! Let's talk about the emotional line first. Tao Tao and the male protagonist are already openly in love, but the sister's relationship is still in its infancy. *From an objective point of view, if the younger sister joins the emotional main line later, she will easily be labeled as a "third party". This is a big problem. How can Tao Tao and the male protagonist accept the addition of their sister without destroying their character? It's not easy, right? After all, Tao Tao's character is too plump, and she has a strong desire to monopolize the male protagonist. Why should she share the protagonist with her sister? The second is the business line. Usually, one of the functions of the career line is to prolong the ambiguous period of the male and female protagonists, but in the current plot, the male and female protagonists have stabilized, and the career line has become a showcase for the male protagonist's personal value. The problem is, this is a love story. It's hard to find new explosive points in the emotional line, but there are still a lot of emotional climaxes hidden in the career line. How to balance the two? The solution I can think of is to add a new heroine to inject fresh blood into the emotional line. But the emotional line of just one sister is enough to cause a headache. Wouldn't it be even more troublesome to add a new heroine?

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After reading more than two hundred chapters, the author's writing style of designing emotions is really good, making Tao Tao's character of a fool become vivid without being too annoying. I also long for that sincere and pure love. Correspondingly, Yang Zhi's emotions are based on a twisted sense of dependence. No matter how much truth he speaks later, it is not pure. When I think about the conflict between two women in the harem, I will feel sick to my stomach. No matter how brilliant the career is, a man will be upset. At least he is young and has the strength to solve it (laughing). I hope the ending of the subsequent conflict can be written better, and don't be too scummy for the Tao Tao in the novel.

I am a staunch supporter of my sister and Yuan Zhikong 😎

The male protagonist's moral standard is a bit disgusting. He has a girlfriend who is devoted to him and is not satisfied. I can only say that Yang Zhi's teasing skills are very good. And the protagonist's laissez-faire has brought it to that point. I can only say that it is disgusting. It is really disgusting. I have reported it and hope that this book will be removed from the shelves. That's it.

Resurrection, Chazhizhi🙂

Why did you cut it when your grades were so good?

Can or not

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Judging from 🐔, the ones he follows are not good-looking, and they don't lack my votes. Here they are, more updates, I'll save up 100 chapters to read together

As the title says (I have subscribed to 10,500 chapters of the book), I am considered an old bookworm.