Desert Lord: Starting with Points to Boost My Strength

At the start, the protagonist risks his life for the equivalent of two months' wages for his servant. 😰

A noble maid dares to speak sarcastically to the young master? Is the author a woman?

The author started by choosing a rebellious female slave as a burden; has he never seen a woman before?

Being poisoned from the start is unbearable; years of hard work have left you physically weak? Should you choose archery because you're weak? Poor writing skills can be improved gradually, but if the underlying logic is flawed, you're basically useless; even AI-generated imitations are inferior.

It's a classic case of the small boss meddling in the big picture. A lord who's going to clear land doesn't want a few well-trained guards or experienced farmers he knows well, but instead wants a wretched maid, and then he even has to work on the maid's favorability later on.

The beginning was well written, but the part about returning to the family wasn't so good. The original owner of this body transmigrated midway through the story, and her family wasn't very kind to her. The descriptions of her father's affection and the relationships with other family members after the protagonist's return feel a bit out of place.

The author writes nonsense without thinking, and I read it without thinking.

It is said that the second son of a nobleman's family did odd jobs at home, and this was still a noble family with fiefdoms. I'm glad you didn't completely copy the formula, but could you please stop with these weird stuff?

What was the point of the first two chapters? They lacked any logic. The characters were so weak they struggled to lift even a two- or three-pound sword. Before the system was activated, they chose to fight skeletons and selected infantry archers. Infantry bows have a draw weight of at least sixty pounds.

A maid speaks sarcastically to her noble master; isn't that just a pretext to sell her to a brothel? Why keep her as a treasure?