Longevity: Starting with Paper-Cut Soldiers

The protagonist is currently at the fourth level of the first realm, out of a total of nine levels. Impressive!

The book is good. But you could bring a woman along. And you should learn more about other things. You're quite the expert. I'm impressed.

Has the protagonist never seen a woman before?

The writing is alright, but it feels a bit like the author is forcing things without real effort. The character has a cheat ability but doesn't subtly improve it; instead, they wander around aimlessly, getting themselves into dangerous situations just to watch the excitement, only to have the author forcibly provide a solution. The author needs to improve the transitions; they're too abrupt.

The fact that the protagonist only writes about women makes it seem like he's never seen a woman before.

The realm system is awkwardly designed and doesn't look good; it might be abandoned.

It's poorly written. Take that Qiankun Wuji Pouch, for example, which fuses with the Crimson Gold Divine Marrow. You need to understand that you're fusing an item, not fusing it into the protagonist's characteristics. It's like asking if my previous level 2 pills become level 3 just because I've become a level 3 alchemist. That's nonsense!

Can I block this? I really don't want to keep seeing this stuff; it's the first thing I see when I click in.

Doesn't anyone have a Tier 1, Level 4, early peak, half-step Great Perfection level character? It's still not enough.

Magical arts, then body training... But I didn't even understand the cultivation methods.