
After Retreating from the Team, the Demon King's Army Really Came!
退队后,魔王军真的来了!
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- Ongoing
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- 280k Words
- Genre
- Western Fantasy
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Sword & Sorcery
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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Looking at the introduction, the protagonist has been the leader of the group for so many years and is still forced to quit the group. Moreover, he has no loyal subordinates or friends and leaves alone. Such a useless protagonist still has hope against the Demon King's army? This time, I will side with the Demon King's army.
To be honest, every time I see this kind of withdrawal from the team, I am speechless. It doesn't matter if someone else is a team member and gets kicked off the team, but the protagonist of this book is the captain of the team and is actually forced to quit the team and give the team to someone else. This is simply fw among fw.
The plot in my mind after reading the introduction is that after the protagonist quits the team, a counterattack breaks out from the Demon King, and the front line is in emergency. The teammates who left the team early are fine, but the teammates who did not leave the team suffered heavy casualties, and the protagonist starts to show off and slap in the face. In the actual plot written by the author, after quitting the team, he first said that he no longer wanted to take risks and did not want to go to the front line. Then within three chapters, he said that he still couldn't let go of adventure. Then he started fighting wolves, goblins, underground mazes, and death knights. m d, after all, you are the leader of a big adventure group, and you are still the kind of support, command and logistics type. Can you do something stylish? The protagonist is like a roadside person.
This kind of book title and synopsis... It starts with a setting where the orphan is hated by everyone. I immediately went to the comment section, this one is definitely better than the original article! I said it!
. . . Seriously, how can you defeat the Demon King with these insects? Besides, isn't it normal for your adventure group to fight against the Demon King's army and kill everyone? Isn't it normal to die from a stray arrow? Or you can try to raise the bandits to respect themselves.
Introduction: The plot is very abstract, and the co-protagonist is not popular at all. Yuan Shikai can train a new army to become the president. The plot is like if Li Yuan established a crown prince, Li Shimin would not be able to succeed him.
You quit without understanding why? Are all your team members from the military and nobles? Isn't it a coalition of multiple countries? Why not go to other countries?
Another book that comes from a female channel. Why do these authors think that there is a market for this kind of book in a male channel? Really, I don't understand, so I asked, from what angle do you think there is a market?
After reading the first chapter, as expected, almost all the protagonists in novels about being dropped from the team are logistics management roles, almost auxiliary roles. There are very few characters who write command and attack roles and are dropped from the team. In the world of martial arts, it is extremely easy for such characters with no or low combat power to be replaced. The kingdom really wanted to take advantage of them, not only did they give them compensation, they didn't even sign a contract, they just let them go. This is not the feudal era. The ethics are far higher than the average level of the era. If I were a prince and wanted to replace the protagonist, I would directly hint or order the hawks, dogs and minions to assassinate and kill the protagonist, and then find a scapegoat to avenge the protagonist, and directly take it for my own use. I am really curious about the protagonist's purpose of forming a team. I know that after becoming famous, I have the best chance of being replaced. Is it for money? For the name? For power? The team has been established for many years and has little force. What is he pursuing?
There are logical problems in the introduction
Not to talk about life and death, but in reality, if a company CEO does a good job and is forced to resign, he can take away most of his employees and customers at once. Just go out and do it alone. Let the original company directly become a shell company.
I haven't read a word of the text. Is this the legendary Qi Refining Sue to Mahayana?
The plot is cliche
How should I put it? This book is probably an old-fashioned plot about a retired hero getting re-employed. Unfortunately, when I saw the title and introduction, I thought it was about the retirement life of a retired hero, just like Fulian who was ruined by the recent popular drama.
It's not like there's only one kind of plot about quitting the team that can be written...
Why are you kicked out of the super logistics department? You can't write about a story where a friend in a brave team reports the protagonist for having an affair with a demon princess or something to frame the protagonist. The protagonist is forced to quit the team, and then the reader is told from a God's perspective that the protagonist is actually a high-level demon undercover. Because the protagonist is suspected of being exposed, the demons immediately cut off the connection. The subsequent storyline can become how the protagonist clears the suspicion, takes over the military power step by step, and jumps left and right to raise a mixed race army to rebel and overthrow everything.
The AI polishing is too heavy, so I should delete it myself to smooth it over.
The introduction is poorly written, so you write the three-sentence plot as the main text. Furthermore, the plot of this kind of cool article is just a quick one. If there is no excellent writing style to follow up the subsequent plot, it will be impossible to write a book.
Is this a fucking female video? Doesn't this kind of strength directly kick the opponent down and sit on top?
Most of the people who quit the team are second-in-commands or team members quitting the team. This is the first time I see the team leader quitting the team. They are pure trash.
To be honest, if you don't show off thoroughly, you won't show off. If you don't quit the team completely, you won't quit the team.
After seeing Chapter 4, the kingdom issued a wanted order for the protagonist again? Why? Do you really think of the Kingdom as an SB villain and evil force? At first, I let the protagonist go, but later I found out that he was a serious enemy, and then I gave him away one by one to gain experience, right? Designing such an ugly and stupid villain is really low-key! Three teammates left the team, and the kingdom directly issued a wanted notice. It really made the third prince a clown! And it really won't push the rest of the team to the opposite side?
Damn it, my lungs are filled with fog⚡️Can you please stop writing this kind of defense?
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