I Wanted to Retire but Became an Imperial General

The early writing was pretty good, but the second battle started to feel a bit unsatisfactory. Strictly speaking, this cannot be entirely blamed on the author. The shaping of extraordinary war is actually a very difficult problem to solve. Looking around the world, there are actually few who have solved it. But these details are indeed a bit... 1. In order to show how powerful the allies are in the "original game", the author occasionally intersperses large sections of descriptions of the skills of the protagonist group in the later stages of the game. This was originally intended to enhance the character, but writing it this way makes me suspect that the author is counting numbers. On the other hand, because the strength of individuals holding "spells" is much different than that of ordinary people (at least I saw two individuals described by the author as "killing a thousand enemies"), it stands to reason that the form of war should be very different from the form we are familiar with. After all, the form of war changes with the changes in technology and individual force, and this change has never stopped even today (chariots, cavalry, paratroopers, information warfare, cyber troops...). However, since many aspects of the author's creation are based on World War I and World War II, what I see now is a wonderful scene of fighting in front of the battle line, coordination of infantry and tanks, and shooting in the trenches. So sometimes it's really strange. It feels like ordinary Allied soldiers can't play any role other than giving military honors to the protagonist, and they are redundant. And since a large part of the description is about the battle between the enemy and our superpowers, sometimes it feels like it was just two people fighting, but in the blink of an eye thousands of people were killed or injured. 2. This battle in the Gulf has gradually moved closer to "The Romance of the Gods" in a bad way. The recent war chapters give me the feeling that the two groups take turns shouting loop (if war scene == true) A: "Fangfa Bao!" B: "Kuye!" //Then, the two groups exchange lines. B: "It's a treasure!" A: "It's bitter!" loopend ↑Anyway, I feel like this is the case in the last few chapters. You bring out a tank and cannon, and I will bring out magnetic pollen. You create a powerful magic, and I will create an anti-magic factor. Logically speaking, this kind of back and forth should be considered a battle of wits, but it does look a bit awkward. I personally think that one reason is because of information asymmetry and insufficient foreshadowing. When you first watch it, readers may still think, "Wow, how can the protagonist break through such a difficult enemy?" The emotional plot design arouses. As a result, there are many settings that suddenly appeared in these chapters, such as "magnetic pollen", "anti-magic factor" and so on. Not only did the enemy not know these things before, but readers also didn't know them before. They are also the key decisive factors in the battle of wits. In mystery novels, this is equivalent to a detective doing a round of investigation, and finally discovering that the victim died of a strange poison that no one knew about before, "Miami Banbu Dian", and the murderer was the crosstalk talker. So the reader will give up thinking and let the text go in and out from the left eye and the right eye. To use a sentence that often appears in the book review area, it is "It doesn't look like it after reading it". I personally believe that a wonderful battle of wits is a challenge that the author poses to readers. This approach of using "special tools" to solve problems is unfair in a sense. 3. There are also some flaws in the polishing of some details. Within a few days, the protagonist flushed a team of tens of thousands of people and an uninhabited town (which must have contained many people's gold, silver and soft belongings) into the sea like a toilet. Hindfoot was "shocked" that "Morning Star" had "trampled on his life" and committed an act that "would be sent to a military court." I personally suspect that the author wanted to write that the protagonist believed that Venus would not do such a thing due to the inherent risk of backlash from his magic. But due to the writing, it seems that the protagonist who will use enemy prisoners to trick the enemy suddenly becomes a virgin. This can actually be avoided.

This protagonist shouldn't be just a showman, he should have a unique magic technique.

There are typos. . . Personally speaking, the plot is good, the writing is OK, except for a little bit missing, there is no problem

Updated to apologize for not being active in women's clothing

The alarm bell is ringing! Don't promise what you can't deliver!

Will the protagonist change if he has always been like this? Will there be back-and-forth about rebellion and surrender? I feel tired after reading Chapter 20 and Chapter 30. Is there Shennong?

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Mere imagination and luck cannot sustain a book. The protagonist must grow. For example, didn't he see the pain of the people at the bottom from the game? The prosperity of the people will be miserable, and the destruction of the people will be miserable. From a submissive time-traveler, he became a qualified person in power through personal experience, a person in power who can empathize with the people at the bottom. The focus of the story will also gradually change from "I want to surrender and retire" to "I can't vote anymore, so I can only help the empire" and then I will become a tall man. What? Am I a tall person? The process can still be blessed by luck. Occasionally, some practical skills can be interspersed, for example, the protagonist can indeed operate the economy, and for example, he has summed up experience - as long as you do your own thing well, the enemy insects will cause problems on their own (the people who surround me are the Allies!) In addition, this dream is also an opportunity to attract the protagonist's group or cause the transformation of the supporting characters. At this time, the reason for success can change from the so-called luck to the contradiction between the excellence of one's subordinates and the enemy's own intensification. We are strong and the enemy is weak.

There are no major problems with this book. The author's writing skills are good and you can read it with confidence. The first part of this article is different, and there may be changes later. In short, I really like reading this book I hope the male protagonist can be more dedicated.

No, bro, haven't you finished writing this round? Are you still going back and forth? Not to mention whether they are tired from fighting or not, I think everyone is tired from watching it 😅 I have been saving up for half a month to finish reading this plot in one sitting, not to mention one day at a time. I originally said that I would finish writing this war by the end of July. It is almost the end of August, haven't you finished it yet? And when I saw your title, I didn't even have the desire to click on it. To be honest 😅 When I saw Checkmate, I thought it would end soon. But then, why did the latest chapter include three more baits? How long will it take for this copy to be completed? 😥 In fact, the most important thing is that the update is not good enough. It is like squeezing out toothpaste. It keeps squeezing out. It is difficult to have the patience to keep grinding it out. 😅 It was originally a very good book, but it has become an old lady's foot wrap. 💀 It's like a piece of chicken ribs.

This book is good in every aspect, but the author really likes to write his long and difficult sentences, which makes it a bit uncomfortable to read 😅

It takes several months to write a battle, and the image of the supporting characters has not been developed. It is all an assembly-line battlefield brainstorming. There is not much information about the social background, class conflicts, character interactions, etc., And it feels like the writing is not prioritized.

If you look at the protagonist from the perspective of the New Three Kingdoms, it is not surprising. The protagonist is using his own method to resist the erosion of God's will. Otherwise, the protagonist has become a puppet of God's will without knowing it 🙂

It made me feel uncomfortable, not because of the plot, but why does the author like so many long and difficult sentences with attributive attributes? It's extremely uncomfortable to read. I couldn't find the subject for a long time, and I didn't know who it was talking about. It was so uncomfortable. For example, here (even this is not the most common one), there are a lot of attributives in front of it. Can't the subject be given directly at the beginning? Or does the author think this sentence structure is very advanced? ? 🤔🤔🤔

In fact, the change is quite reasonable. If you write something as serious as a war as a light novel, it will be very funny later on, as if others treat your life as a joke.

I think the Imperial General is not very good, he should be called the Imperial War Commander🤣

But in fact, I have always wanted to say that as a game villain, is it too weak? The number of people and technology are not as good as the decent ones. In general games, don't the villains lose a few times without having a big impact? In general games, the decent ones always lose without the protagonist, and only come back after having the protagonist.

Can anyone tell me whether the protagonist's thoughts and personality have changed in the later period? People around him can accept coincidences once and twice, but the whole plot cannot just be coincidences. It's so embarrassing.

After a wave of crisis, I tried my best to get through it, but before I could take a breath, another wave of even greater crisis came. I always feel that Pig's Knuckle is going to overturn this time, and then the author gives Pig's Knuckle a tough trick to get through the crisis. How many times do you write this way before it becomes boring?

Have you ever been a general? Scribble here 😡

It is currently a new book issue, and we can only update four thousand words per day. If we update too much, the new book issue will end early, and we will not be able to get the recommended recommendations. Therefore, I hope you readers will understand. However, taking into account your reading experience, I will change it from one chapter to two chapters per day in the future. The overall number of words will remain the same, and at the same time, I will focus on the new book issue. I will refine the plot, and the author will update it 8,000 times a day after it is released. On the day it is released, I will save some manuscripts in advance and update them. Finally, it is very important to read the new book issue. If you, the reader, feel that this book is still to your liking, please read it. Qiuli Gao, the author would like to thank you all OTZ~

The "novice flying commander" who asks his subordinates to take flight every time (it's burned out, the AI ​​doesn't understand the action of taking flight, this is the most reasonable version, in my eyes.)

Can the author dress up as a woman again (

The writing is good. At first, I thought that the protagonist would rely on luck and act like a fool. Later, the protagonist's attitude changes and the official battle becomes much more interesting. Now I have seen that after fighting the southern war zone and returning to the imperial capital, the plot of returning to the imperial capital is actually a bit weak, but the main task is to develop the autonomous region. , Carry out reforms and secretly build a party, fight allied forces and side missions to restore the female partner captain to the country, purify the evil power in the body and upgrade, destroy the allied god-making plan, kill the dark archmage best friend of the half-dragon female partner, become a fox man as a sage in the orc kingdom, recover the dark elves, and the female protagonist has begun to express her feelings one after another.

The profile looks like Tanya, but is it good-looking? Ranking quite high in fantasy

Why do you like to write rhetorical questions so much? It feels like most people are saying rhetorical questions. In the same chapter, after one character finishes speaking, the next character immediately continues.

It's a very interesting article about political strategy and military affairs. It's a bit too divisive in the early stages, but after 100 chapters it becomes a real military article. Come on, author.

A bunch of long and difficult sentences make me want to vomit.

The battle in the front is pretty cool, but the back is just average, just for food.

No, it's updated, don't be a eunuch😭