From Family Fishermen and Farmers to Shui De Zhenxian

He ran away in Chapter 16, relying on cheats to ruin other people's exams

The protagonist of a family novel has no woman or children. It's pure nonsense. It's better to write a sect novel. The author's writing style is fine. Is this the reason why the writing style is fine but it can't become popular? Looking at it now, I personally feel that the author really might as well write a sect novel, but when I think about it, I have doubts. When the author writes a sect novel, will the protagonist find a woman? But if you don't accept apprentices and have children by yourself, that's nonsense. . . Therefore, the main reason for the author is that you have a problem with your own thinking, and you have to go against the general trend. If you can't write emotional lines, then find a type that can do without emotional lines. This way we won't look awkward and you can write smoothly. Okay, I just have something to do, so let's write these first. Usually I write comments inside the chapters, unless the author writes well and I really can't bear it.

Please update more, can't it cause impotence just the next day after it's put on the shelves?

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This kind of farming style likes to learn a little bit of everything in order to add more content, but reading too much will easily lead to fatigue, and now a large number of similar novels are cut before the foundation is established. Unless the writing is really good, it will be difficult to retain readers.

Sure enough, the beginning is still the beginning, the herring can evolve into a carp, and his father is a talisman maker. Knowing that knowledge is rare, he will not leave some notes, and there is water, gold and wood spiritual roots, running to refine weapons? Let's not talk about making talismans and formations. Hajime is still Hajime, and there are still some talents. He has eaten that shit himself and wants to ask others to eat it.

Because fish farmers come in, only the ones in the front are fish farmers. They are not in the back after looking at the catalog. They go to practice weapons. They are not pure at all. They are not like Shennong Daojun. They farm on the main line the whole time. On this main line, they turn this main line into flowers. Fish farming can also become a powerful person, but it is not impossible. The training of weapons in the back is just icing on the cake. It is greedy and messy. The more you learn, the less refined you are.

Why isn't the protagonist named Chen Qingquan?

Died in Chapter 55. I don't know what to think. Either you don't charge me, or you charge me to do things. I'm torn between the two. . It can be seen that the character is of low character, and it is not impossible to be of low character. Where are you laying the groundwork ahead? Rubbish

After reading ten chapters, there are a lot of poisonous points. The poisonous points of my uncle and aunt are giving me a headache. There is no main line in the early stage. A water attribute spiritual root goes to refine weapons and makes people speechless. The main line of fish farming does not advance but goes to refine weapons. I don't understand!

Seeing that the protagonist has only practiced Qi at the seventh level, Li Quan Shu also followed suit at the sixth level and couldn't stand it anymore. Author, why do you have to force the people around the protagonist to make progress? She clearly has a low-grade spiritual root. Before she met the protagonist, she had only practiced the third level of Qi for several years. After getting to know the protagonist, she almost became as cheating as the protagonist.

This Chapter of the Foundation Establishment Pill is poisonous. The three elders worked hard to get the elixir, but after refining the elixir, others want to steal it. If this is the case, then this kind of family doesn't want to be treated.

Is there something wrong with the portrayal of the protagonist? Or is it that the author has a conflict with his uncle, so he substitutes what he writes? If you really want to write about this kind of fun, then you should at least make your uncle's family a little bit worse. The article said that the uncle was stingy but did not describe it in detail. It also said that the protagonist's mother had a high level of cultivation and had always suppressed the uncle. There is no conflict in the protagonist's past, and there is no contact after the death of his parents. When I came to borrow the spirit stone, I pledged my property deed to you. I borrowed 500 and turned around and paid you back 520. This 20 is extra given to the protagonist by my aunt. This aunt's family has done a good enough job. The protagonist's cousin has a bad future. So you can at least make the protagonist's cousin a little bit more bad, and arrange more dark thoughts and negative behaviors for the cousin. Aren't you still doing nothing? At best it was considered a slight, not even a taunt. Why do you still need to resort to tricks to trick your own relatives? Otherwise, you should change the title of the book. Tang San is famous for not claiming to be a moral person, but the protagonist is so immoral and the title of the book is called Shui De. How can we not insult Shui De? The starting point is not that there is no room for dark and wretched villain-type protagonists. If you really write a hypocrite-type protagonist, many people will watch it. The double standard of the protagonist is also a selling point, but the protagonist does not know it and thinks that there is no problem. This reflects the author's three views, which makes people feel disgusting. Writing novels is writing novels. No matter how much you envy, envy, or hate your relatives when your life is not going your way, don't bring negative emotions into it.

Are the current air mattresses the same as 🍅? Are they all novels about how happy people are? I just want to know, in this book, you have to eat the golden finger to get the reward, and whether the male protagonist eats it or not.

The protagonist has absolutely nothing to do with Shui De. He claims to be normal but is very immoral. His outlook is not correct and makes people feel sick.

I was speechless during the episode about the Foundation Establishment Pill. It was a bit toxic and I didn't want to watch it. I worked hard for nothing, not even compensation. Just the 3 elders made a big fuss. Haha, it's really funny. Being a casual cultivator is better than being a member of the family. Do you think it is a personal choice to be a casual cultivator or to be a member of the family?

It's too bland, it doesn't highlight the cool points at all, and there is no key point. If it is written around the golden finger, it does not highlight the importance of the golden finger. It is purely a tool. The magic weapon obtained through the golden finger should focus on describing the cool points. There is no emphasis on the description, and it is always boring to read. As for the plot, the protagonist is not active enough and is written like a supporting character. It is understandable that Gou Dao does not highlight his strength, but the protagonist has no IQ or wit. When I saw the story coming out of the Whale Emperor Sect, I suddenly couldn't feel what was interesting. The subject matter attracted me, but the author's writing style was a bit poor. Gou Dao farming style, the plot is general and magic weapons are not focused on description, so what are you watching? If you keep writing like this, your current performance will probably be at its peak, and it will most likely get worse.

It's a little bit readable at the beginning, but in the middle, the author starts to act like a monster. He also came up with an incense divine way, but this incense divine way was so awesome that it directly jumped from Qi refining to the later stage of foundation building. Moreover, the author also made a setting that the ninth-grade god is equivalent to refining Qi, and the eighth-grade is equivalent to foundation building. In this case, what else is there to write about the world of immortality? After all, the highest level of the world of immortality where the protagonist is located is only the transformation of gods, but the fifth-grade god is already equivalent to the transformation of gods. It is better for the protagonist to commit suicide directly and practice the incense and fire divine way. Really disgusting. Moreover, the family takes up half of the book, or even if there is no heroine, the protagonist should marry a wife and have children. Otherwise, after the protagonist becomes Nascent Soul, or even becomes a god, the remaining members of the family will be separated from the protagonist by more than ten or even dozens of generations. Don't brag to me, there will be no family friendship. Of course, the author may also directly let the family members who die of old age directly convert to the Incense Shinto, so that all members of the protagonist's family become gods. So I think it's enough to just read the free chapter, the rest of it is full of shit.

After the plot of "Incense Becomes a God" came out, the book basically dropped from the level of dry food to the level of poisonous weeds, and the probability of completing the book normally was close to zero. It was obviously something that was thought up in a flash, and the plot is also inexplicable. Are you reluctant to leave the supporting character? How do you add new characters? Author, do you have the ability to write about so many people? Don't know what I'm thinking about

To be honest, I have been reading books for more than ten years, and I have read a lot of The Holy Mother, Born with Evil Roots, White Zuo Lotus, Bastard Crazy, Smart and even Scammer, but this is the first time I have seen a protagonist like this who is responsible and accomplished and still has a clear conscience.

Is it better to write more later? Is there a Shennong? After reading a few chapters, I feel that the protagonist's character is just like an NPC machine, such as an uncle who is not close to him, and there is no conflict between the two. I don't know why he is so cold? He thought, "Even if something happens to my uncle, it will not be a loss." And because an elder gave him some fish farming experience, he sighed, "This is a huge favor!" This is an obvious contradiction in personality. How can a cold and ruthless person care too much about the kindness of others! It's like Cao Cao greeting you with bare feet when he needs you, but after using it, he even borrows your head!

Green Carp Sword🙂 Green Scale Shield🤓 Green Jade Armor😆

Author, how good is your book? Anyway, you can't make any money even if you write two thousand words a day, so you might as well just quit!

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Are there any other similar articles? They tend to focus on consecration group rewards for breeding animals. I have seen some but they are all short of words.

How should I put it? There are no alchemists in the protagonist's family. The protagonist is good at alchemy and has too much time, so he just doesn't want to do it.

Why don't you update it? Keep writing. It's very interesting.

I'll give you a monthly pass! Update soon!

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This guy went to Tomato and died as a eunuch 😡